Arshi SS : For Your Di!!!! IMP NOTE: PG 57 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Make him realize her value...he need to know how it feels if we something rude to innocents..let khushi go to GH n after he repent then do their re-marriage...plz show some self respect in khushi character which I missed in show...btw ur concept is gud n loved this strong khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys.. I will mostly post the next 2 chapters together on eve of Ramadan...

As the crescent moon is sighted...
And the holy month of Ramadan begins...
May Allah bless you with happiness
and grace your home with warmth & peace !

Ramadan Mubarak!
Edited by shanthiva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
okay shall wait for same
and eid mubarak to ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
loved the story...read it all in one go...its just fantabulous...
loved this strong Khushi with self respect who didn't take her dead parents insult lightly...
even i always had complaint that in the show they showed Khushi with no Self Respect...
just few of her fav gifts of hers from Arnav,few times supporting her infront of daadi and I LOVE U DAMMIT and Khushi forgot every insult and ran in2 his arms...
i want both Sorry track and Khushi and Payal bcuming independent and setting example for Anjali...
update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
waiting fr update dear
thanks fr pm
keep pm me
EID MUBARAK...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
NOTE :

I will be posting 3 chapters tomorrow. First i thought i will post 2 but then changed my mind seeing PM's i have been getting. So i will post all 3 chapters tomorrow.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Chapter 10 :

Naani breaks down thinking what has her chotte done and how her family is broken. Akash moves towards naani and payal brings water for her. Maami & maamaji just stare at arnav, anjali & shyam.

Shyam : Raa--Rani sahiba please believe me. Please dont trust khushiji. Its all fake. I know its all a game to get raizaada money.

Anjali : If all this is not true then why you dint meet khushiji. Y you dint come to meet us when we came to their house to give shagun for payal.

Shyam knew he cannot escape now.

Shyam : I wanted your money. Just your money anjali. I loved khushi the moment i saw her in lucknow, I got her job here but then when i came to know saalesab was changing and was falling for her. I could not tolerate. She is mine. Only mine. I am sure she will never forgive arnav now and i am sure that nothing has happened between them so i get a chance to be with her. I want to divorce you and i am sure she will leave arnav at the end of 6 months. I will wait for her till then.

All felt disgusted hearing his words. Payal moves towards him and slaps him twice.

Payal(screaming) : Dont you ever dare go near khushi again. Mind my words shyamji. I will not hesitate to even kill you if i find you any where near khushi. We kept quiet cuz we dint want to hurt Di but then you dont deserve such a loving person.

Arnav : Aman call the police now. I want this man out of my house now.

Aman dials DCP number and in the mean time arnav thinks of all what he had done to hurt khuhsi. He comes near shyam and starts hitting him, Akash and aman try to stop him but he doesnot care. Shyam pushes him and hits him hard cuz of which his head collides with the wall and for a min or two he looses his senses. Aman and aksh hold shyam, arnav regains his senses and moves towards him, by then police arrives.

Anjali :I mrs. Anjali Shyam Manohar Jha want to file a FIR on my husband Mr Shyam Manhohar Jha, for fraud, and attacking my brother. We all the witness here inspector. Please take this person out of my sight.

Saying this she gives a tight slap to shyam and removes her mangalsutra and throws it on his face. The police take shyam away.None were aware that a pair of eyes was watching all this and was crying. That person was none other than khushi.

Anjali looses her balance and arnav runs to her and hugs her and makes her sit on the sofa. Payal comes to di and hugs her. Khuhsi comes down with water and gives it to anjali.

Anjali : I am so sorry khushiji. I really am. Please forgive me.

Khuhsi : Di it was not oyur fault. All this was suppose to happen. May be devi maiyaa wanted you all to know the truth of that person. So i think that is whys he sent me in your life. nut believe me Di when i say this, you are really a wonderful person and u really dont deserve him. Move on in your life Di. You have such a wonderful family who loves you, u have a brother who can do anything to see that smile on your face. I really wish i had a brother who could stand beside me like this and support me. Well destiny has something else stored in my life. So lets not worry about it. Di go to your room and take rest, i will prepare tea and pakodas for all.

Saying this she moves to the kitchen. Maami & akash help naani to her room. Payal, arnav & maama take anjali to her room. Later arnav moves to kitchen to see khushi mixing the batter for jalebis.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome update
thanks for pm continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
good she kwn all that n willing to move
but abt khushi n her decision
waitong fr next
thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice story dear...
i really wanted khushi to come but...with all respect...
i mean khushi start helpng arnav in office work n even anjali also...
i want khushi to become sophesticated not which shown in serial total immature...bt she shld't loose her crazy antics.. .
i told u what my suggetn is i hope u like it...
Edited by GAURI29 - 12 years ago

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