OS: In Love With Librarian(Note page 11)

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Res
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kya baat hain cheeni tu toh cha gayi yaar kya OS write kiya hain main toh fan ban gayi teri too good sis loved it so so much
What a superb OS u write🤗
Khushi is librarian and arnav is student i remember my college days😆
Arnav is stalker very rarely seen that but u write his feeling very well and khushi broke her marriage and wait for him for 6 months that's called true love😛
Write some more OS,FF and SS paleeezzz
I love the way u write mindblowing dear👏
kabhi mere liye bhi reserve kar liya kar😉

Edited by Nickysweet - 12 years ago

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Reswa.😃 Wow thanks for writing!

Will be back tonight. Please bear with me.

Unreswa!

First of all, THREE CHEERS TO YOU !!! 🥳

You started writing again!👏👏

It was such a sweet and romantic OS!

The last part was so touching!😭

I am deadwa!🤢

More coming up, hain na???😉 Kyunki picture abhi baki hain mere dost!!!😃

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww that was a superb cute love story cheese
I really love this Arnav smiling and loving.
And khushi confessed first and then that dumbo...

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: avni_barun
ohhh God CC I didn't knew u could write such a mind blasting stuff in just one night...
u r a genius bacha... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ Kuch bhi didi
m feeling like a proud elder sister just now... 😃
what a superbly awesome fantastic OS...
but y did u ended it...2-3 parts hone chahiye the... 😔 apko to har story me 2 parts aur chahie hote hai😆

Arnav a stalker is a rare to watch n I just loved him... 😳
loved d way he called her gorgeous... ❤️
"how miserable I can get without you. Kuch samajh hi nahi ata.".. 🤣
Khushi was sooo adorable...she broke her marriage 4 him without even knowning Arnav's real feelings and waited for him since 6 months...hatts off 2 her... Apni khushi hai😉

d emotions were perfectly described...

N it was Khushi who confessed her love her first... 😲 👏 👏 👏 wanted to do something different😆

I think I did a right thing to ask u for d OS...

I will keep doing dat more often... 😉 Galat baat didi

And CC wat was dat...I didn't knew u loved me sooo much...I dont have words... yup ur my avni didi🤗
I felt like...

U r just crazy CC... OMG ye Jiji Di k ideas merpe bhari padte hain😆
I love u tooo Dammit... 🤗

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: asthagarwal
Sabka res kar le tu Cheeni... 😡

Well Avni, ur so luvd, c ppl luv u so much n Cheeni ne saari limits hi cross kar di... Evn I LUV U BOTH DAMMIT... ❤️ Ap ko bhi utna hi pyaar kati hu didi

Cumng back 2 d update... Well tht ws an unique concept n I throughly enjoyed it... no thank you😉

I hv spent half of my hostel lyf in Library only bt sadly cud nvr find my Mr. Perfect dere... 😆 my librarian is like are komal yahan sessionals aa gaye kya😆

I so luvd wen Arnav cald her Gorgeous... 😳

Khushi is so sweet, she dnt gt married coz of him...

Cheeni u rushed d end, u shud hv given atleast a detailed kiss... 😉 didi apne kara hai besharmi me masters, Dr. Jiji di ki fav student bhi ho...maine to abhi abhi admission liya hai😉

Ya, I agree, I'm a Besharam Bhukkad... 😆

Luv ur writing... Keep writing such beautiful pieces... Muahhh...

P.S. I dnt do anythng in title suggestion, u already hd it in ur mind... 😛 🤗love u didi<3

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

RESS 🤗

If Emotional Atyachar works then you are in for a lot of that :P

Will read and get back to you tomorrow :D

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Komiii 🤗 Wonderful yaaar 😳 Just loved it. It was just so SIMPLY beautiful. The best part about it was NO drama. It was just a love story. A normal, yet beautiful one. Love at first sight. sigh. I just can't write those. It was beautiful. I loved the whole concept and the dialogues.

You may not know it but you are a very creative person girl ! 😃👏 I just love your ideas and its so much fun reading your OS'.

I really wish you'd have a little more time to write! It would be great ⭐️

What else should I say? I just loved it and now you better start working on another one. Get a gallery started and post your OS' in that. It would be great. You don't have to update regularly and you can write whenever you get an idea 😳 How does it sound? You can call it "Cheeni Stories" 😆😉

Anyway, catchya later. I had a lot of fun reading it. Fantastic and keep it up!

Edited by DoNotDisturb - 12 years ago

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Gul_malik

@Gul_malik

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

amazing
my bahu
tu tou cha gai re.
Ak dum jakas.
Loved it.
Ak dum new concept.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

That was just so cute, Cheeni!!!! I totally loved the story! Avni is so right! You should definitely write more often!

Marvellous idea and you wrote it really well... Hayye cute stalking Arnav... I lovvveee himmm!!!!

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

It was so so sweet... cheeni jitni sweet..😃 Love it behna...❤️
I think all the librarians are grouchy. Mine is so khatarnaak with her big bums..😆 they all are same... except Khushi of course..😃

Awesome OS..👏

*HUGS*