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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

awesome images in my mind ...as i follow your description.

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Fabulous update...
Loved arnav's trick...
And khushi is also drowning in the pool of his love!
Waiting for more...!
Thanx for the pm!

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Great update
Lol it wasn't buaji who interrupted them

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akankha

@akankha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

It was an absolutely fantastic one!!!

Edited by akankha - 12 years ago

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

i dont know why i am laughing & blushing reading this...ha..ha...
just awesome yaar...
poor khushi... she was trapped in by her own husband...
this amma is having veryu bad timing...usually its buaji...
loved it...Smitha...wonderful...
whole scene was described beautifully...

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Will Kushi lose herself from her mission

I actually want to see the stubbornly calm Kushi as u termed her. Arnav doesn't deserve her so fast after all the wrongs and words he hurled at her. Let him work hard to get her, to deserve her. Only then he will know her value and treat her with respect. If he gets her so easily, he won't realize her value.

That is what happened in the show. If Kushi had left him after the kidnap, he wouldn't have hurled accusations at her for his Di's abortion, and later when Sheetal came into picutre, Kushi would have been treated with little more dignity. He got her so easily, that he didn't realize that Kushi as a person is more valuable than his twosome threesome friends!!!!

I still hate Arnav for taking Kushi SO MUCH FOR GRANTED.

Just by kissing her he can't take away all that he did. Infact he is gaining out of the kisses too. Trust him to be a businessman even here!!!!

Please don't let him win Kushi before he actually deserves her by his side.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

oh gosh dis is a magical update

loved evry bits of it...! ❤️

i love it how smita di has taken the scene of the show nd has written it so beautifully wit her own imagination...! ❤️

i love it how khushi's feelings has been penned down...

her nervousness,her heart beats nd her anger have been beautifully penned down...!

arnav,hayeee i am falling in love wit him wit each nd evry passing updates...! ❤️

loved it how devilishly he was smirking nd enjoying evry momnt of the oilo treatment...!

nd how he was controlling himslf from kissing khuhsi senselessly...! ❤️

nd the malish scene has been penned down so beautifully dat one can feel the love btwn arnav nd khuhsi nd their heart bgeats which have been beating way too faster dan anythng...! ❤️

nd aftr the malish scene was all d more awsum...! ❤️

arnav finally made her seat on his lap nd kissed her senseless nd khushi just flowed away in his way...!

as if he is her magician nd she is his doll who is totally under his mercy...! ❤️

superb chappy 👍🏼

khushi's restlessness to kiss him was simply beautiful

nd finally wen their spell has been broken by amma's knocking arnav's words were simply awsum...!

true his head ache has been gone longgg back but its time for khushi to have head ache 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

awsum chappy 👍🏼

i simply nd totally loved it smita di ❤️

cant wait for the nxt chappy 😳

these 12 days r truly going to b the most memorable daysin their lives ❤️