Smitar's: Loving Khushi #1 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama


I'll post it late tonight!

Solly, I don't have monkeys!😭


Di Monkeys ka kya kaam..😆 woh log toh pagal hai.. 🤪

Your words do the BEST job... 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi has survived ASR's anger,temper,violence ... but will she survive his love or will she succumb and become Mrs ASR 😉 😆

but what gift will ASR give her ??😳

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smitajiii. ..

Kyaa hume bonuss update milege Sunday ko??? 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayali_d23

Smitajiii. ..

Kyaa hume bonuss update milege Sunday ko??? 😉 😆



Nahi Nahi, Abhi nahi, Abhi Karo Monday ka Intezaar!😉

Smita
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Posted: 12 years ago
...and maybe she cud fry him in it ...🤣
Loved that he got to know she only said yes after Diwali night ...always wanted to fry him too for being so cruel and later so unaware of all that .. ..so a personal wish fulfilled thank you .
Lovely update Smita .
Thnx for the pm @rashmi
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Posted: 12 years ago
thx for letting us know more about Will-O-Wisp - loved it rashmi
smita, waiting eagerly for the maalish to begin dear/or the frying to start - both ways, iam ready to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smita Di...
Hum intezaaar karenge.. hum intezaaar kareenge Monday tak... 😃
Khuda kare ke Monday aaye...aur ek pyaara aa update aaye...


Rashmi Di...
Jo vaada kiya woh nibhana padega...
midnight ko PM ka vaada nibhana .. 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago

SMITHAJI!!! IM BACK!!!

IM VERY SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT'!

Was sort of busy lately'..

OMG U ALREADY POSTED PART 2 SECTION 2!!!

But it's ok' I'm going to comment on both of them separately!!!! He he!!!

Part 2 section 1

So beautifully expressed and brilliantly written Smita! Arnav's thoughts were so amazingly shown. What he thought, how he feels and what he intended to do to make up to his Khushi, so she doesn't leave him ' leave him to die without her'

The way Arnav woke up itself shows that all he thought about now was Kushi' he thought of all the events in the past and the truth that slapped him on the face with a heavy hurting heart'. How he trusted the slime ball over his Kushi and the trauma he made Kushi go through! His stupidity that led to Kushi's and her family's humiliation'. And paved the way for the worst to happen entry into Kushi's life! That was the moment which marked the doom to start not only in Kushi's life but his too!!!

He is now able to accept out rightly that loosing Kushi meant more than seeing his DI, who meant a lot to him live with the disgusting man who ruined lives! He would have shown his sister her husband's true colors. She would have yelled, screeched, denied it continuously, but he would have still made her see sense. But the hurting fact that his Kushi, the only woman whom he ever loved, the woman who broke his cold barrier that he had set up around his heart was in love with some other man had complicated things. And the these complications had led him to become a monster again. A monster who didn't have control over himself. A bleeding yet a terrifying monster.

He recalled the moments when he had married h forcefully, making her his at the cost of her sister's happiness' the family's shocked and disappointed faces' Kushi's mother's blow' and in all these he saw the expressions of that disgusting man.

Yet after all these, she still didn't give up and lived up by making her place in the family again' saved him from the thugs where he almost lost her' it shows right there that no matter how much he insulted her, hurt her, she still loves him and is ready to do anything to see him safe.

He is not ready to let go of her even knowing that she is better off him. how can he let go of her? how can he when she has become something so precious that meant to him more than his life? How can he let go of that one woman who loved him despite his disadvantages?

And now he doesn't want to hold back his feelings' he wants to go all out showing her how much she means to him. He is for the first time listening to his heart. He is out to do all the things he longed to do yet held him back during the earlier days of their marriage.

She wouldn't admit to him that she loved him too because she afraid where her confession would hinder the relationship between him and his sister. And right now the only thoughts that is clouding her mind is the fact that she is the hindrance in Anjali's happiness' He had married her threatening her about Payal's future' But had Kushi just walked out letting him do what he wants what would have happened then? What would he have done? But it helped that her love for her Jiji was strong that she was ready to do anything for her sister.

And now, he is not going to let go of Kushi' nothing can make him do that. He is going to use that second chance life has given them, never waste it. He is going show Kushi how much she meant to him, he is going to work hard till she sees it. He is on his mission to love Khushi the way she deserves. He will not hold back!

KUDOS TO YOU SMITAJI!!! AWESOME! AMAZING!!!

During the time when the episodes were aired, I wanted to strangle Arnav with all the strength I have' for the things he did and told Kushi' but u have so beautifully showcased his helplessness.. and this is what he went through that time. It makes sense!!!

I have become a desperate fan of your stories and you have to bear with me from now on he he! There is no escape!

Interpretation

Rashmi, I don't know how you do it' you always take me to a different dimension with your words which has so much depth in them that always makes me speechless'

You so rightly have shown what this update is about'. The way you weave words together to produce an amazing explanation is brilliant! The quotes you use are so apt for the update' this makes me understand the update a whole lot better' it also makes me see it in different directions and angles' and that is very interesting and enjoyable! Well done Rashmi!

Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for the comment for part 2 sec 2😊

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