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@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

loved it
arnav is guilty for his past deeds but now he is repenting and trying to make khushi hisss by listening to his heart not mind.. loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm rashmu :)

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@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

superb update !!! mr raizada is all set to woo mrs raizada with his doses of love & care.. loved the update...

thanks for pm 😊

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@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Wow a brilliant and amazing update,

The update was a fantastic read, written exceptionally well.

Arnav remembering all the hurtful and cruel things he has done to Khushi, he has definitely got to do a lot of wooing to win back Khushi.

I'm glad he has decided to listen and follow his heart,

Awww the part where Khushi woke up was so sweet Arnav hugging and kissing her cheek.

Loved the update, amazing writing.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Excellent update 😊

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

That was really cute! Thanks for the pm.

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Nice update
Make arnav pay more

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Lovely update
Arnav becoming romantic
Make him more romantic and win her heart

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Awww that was so adorable!

Loved it!

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

LOVED IT

SO HIS HEARTS SPEAKS AT LAST

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

RESwa ... Monkeys toh nini kar gaye... 😳
Hum abhi padhte hai...fir subha milte hai.. 😃

Hum toh lunch bhi kar ke aaye... issliye late ho gaye...Solly..

Arnav woke up first, Khushi's name on his lips, his panicked eyes automatically searching for Khushi on the bed.

The pain of losing Khushi had been sharper than the pain of knowing that his Di was living in a fool's land... he could admit it now, to himself.

Finally...

Had it been just that slimeball, Shyam, he could have dealt with him easily. Di would have cried and fainted, but she would have seen sense. He could have managed, as he had been managing for the past decade.

oopsss Solly...

Arnav Singh Raizada was Arnav's worst enemy, he realised at that moment. His ego, his anger, his arrogance, his bitterness, his blindness, his prejudiced view of the world, they had all combined to make his and Khushi's lives miserable.

Thank God..

Because admitting her love would be detrimental to Di's future and happiness. And because he had been in his usual nasty ASR avatar last night. The contract marriage! Payal's future! The nonsense he had spouted!

I hated tht ASR...in tht scene..

They had been given a second chance to live. Together. And he was no fool to let it go. Or to sit and watch Khushi let it go. Not for Di. Not for his family. Not for anybody.

He looked down at her. What did he really want to do at that moment, he asked his heart. He bent forward and kissed her cheek,

Arnav asked himself, what do I want to do right now? The answer his heart gave him was to hug Khushi as tightly as possible. He pulled her in to his embrace, as close as humanly possible, and buried his face in the crook of her neck.

Smita ji... i loved loved the updatewa...1 he update starting form the horrible yaadein of Arshi's life...nd ending the part with with a ray of hope..

Yeh sirf aap he kar sakte ho... YOU ARE THE BEST SMITA JI... AAP KE LIYE.. ☺️

Rashmi Thanks sooo much for the PM.. Aab aapki bari hai ji... 😳

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 12 years ago