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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khushiforever

Great update

lol when she told arnav it was the girls hostel


Thank you :)
Yeah. Deeya has no idea, next thing you know, Arnav might end up buying that building😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update..Oh I almost feel sorry for Arnav but he needs to make amends somehow soo he better get started :P.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roseycheek

fab update..Oh I almost feel sorry for Arnav but he needs to make amends somehow soo he better get started :P.


lol.😆

May be he will ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

New reader alert😃

Hey Aria,

Just started reading this story and its become one of my favorites. Because this story is looking at the seriousness and gravity of that one decision made by Arnav on the night of Payal and Akash's wedding, the decision that changed not just Khushi but everybody's life. The decision he took on everybody's behalf and damaged lot of relationships. This story is clearly going into the depths of emotions of each and every character that is impacted by what Arnav did. And it is playing out all the ifs and buts I had in my own head (what if Khushi leaves Arnav, what if Anjali, Akash and Payal find out about the truth'and the list goes on). This is BRILLIANT👏👏👏

I will come back with more but in the meantime here is a song which is my current favorite and every time I am reading your story it plays in the background.

"Counting Stars" by One Republic


Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars
Yeah, we'll be counting stars


I see this life
Like a swinging vine
Swing my heart across the line
In my face is flashing signs
Seek it out and ye shall find

Old, but I'm not that old
Young, but I'm not that bold
And I don't think the world is sold
I'm just doing what we're told

I feel something so right
Doing the wrong thing
I feel something so wrong
Doing the right thing
I could lie, could lie, could lie
Everything that kills me makes me feel alive


Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars
Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be counting stars


I feel the love
And I feel it burn
Down this river every turn
Hope is a four letter word
Make that money
Watch it burn

Old, but I'm not that old
Young, but I'm not that bold
And I don't think the world is sold
I'm just doing what we're told

And I feel something so wrong
Doing the right thing
I could lie, could lie, could lie
Everything that drowns me makes me wanna fly


Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars
Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be counting stars


Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons I learned

Everything that kills me makes me feel alive


Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars
Lately I been, I been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
Baby I been, I been prayin' hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be counting stars


Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons I learned

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4WgWGcED0JQ

Cheers

Geeta

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update!
reading this i felt pity for arnav for the way khushi behaved with him and on the other hand i still angry at him for what all he did to khushi. khushi is not wrong either. she is beyond hurt after the contract marriage and arnav's demeanour isnt helping much too!
i think both have changed, maybe a lot or a bit.
i like deeya too much! she's such a true friend.
cant wait for more. do update soon! n thnx a lot for the pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav really deserved to taste a dose of his own medicine, and Khushi gave it quite well. I really liked the part were Khushi gave 2 minutes to speak & and after that saying ur time is up Mr Raizada...
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Posted: 12 years ago
He didnt even get a chance to speak!!! Khushi is sure giving it back to him for all that she suffered in his hands...and he definitely deserves it..But knowing ASR, the man will find some way to get her to listen to him- by hook or crook!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 16:
Akash...👏 You've finally become the man Payal would be proud to call her husband.

Arnav needed that wake-up call and hopefully, since it's coming from his docile and quiet brother, he'll heed the advice.

Part 17:
Who are these two people? Arnav's looking for the happy, bubbly, colorful and always optimistic girl and Khushi is looking for the arrogant, controlling, angry man who thinks he is God. But people are not static...with circumstances comes change and with the beating these two have taken, they can never go back to who they were. They need to stop looking for the person they knew and start accepting the people they have become but only the parts that are true and not the facades.

I really loved this chapter.

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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is getting more and more gripping ..
Love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tit for tat time with Khushi and Arnav :-)
She is now giving it back to him and he is just taking it !
It is nice to see a strong Khushi, but how much longer will she be able to hold on?

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