Kr Three shot; A 3rd Chance

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys..
hw r u all?
this is a kr os.it may have 2 or 3 parts..m updating the 1st part today..
plzz read n tell me hws it.

Edited by Sneha.V.Arsha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX
  • Part 1 = Pg 1
  • Part 2 = coming soon
Edited by Sneha.V.Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A 3rd Chance

Part 1

Rey woke up from his deep sleep hearing the ringing of his mobile.he tried to open his eyes.his head was aching badly.the after effect of over dose of alcohol.but now he is used to it.his life is a full mess now.
rey:haan vicky bol..
he knew it is vicky.who else will call him at this early morning rather than his bestie.
vick:rey..hw r u feeling now? r u ok ?
rey:'ok' (he chukled at that word with sarcasm)..stop worrying so much for me.
vi:hw can i rey..u r gng through this much n hw can i stop worrying.plz dnt do this to urself rey.dnt ruin ur life.
rey:ruin karne ke liye bacha hi kya he?sab kuch khatam.me haar gayi vicky zindagi mein.i dnt want to live.
vi:dnt think like that rey.just forget her n move on in ur life.when she can forget u n move on this easily then why cant u?
rey:jab vo muje chod diya tha ,tab bi tum yahin kaha tha na?n wat happened?i moved on eventhough i didnt want to for u guys.i didnt want u guys to worry for me.thats y.,.but look at me now.zindagi muje ek bar fir vahi situation pe laakar khada kar diya.wat m i supposed to do now.move on again?
vi:rey i dnt know wat to tell u now.
rey:its ok vicky.lets just stop this emotional drama n come to the point.
vi:uhmm..rey,aj st.louis clg ka reunion he.we all are gng.u should come.
rey:no vicky,i dnt want to face anyone.
vi:rey,dnt desert urself.aakhir how long u r gng to remain in that room without seeing the sunlight.swayam n sharon is also coming from london after 2 long yrs.dnt u want to see them?
rey:yes i do but not now.
vi:u r coming rey..m coming to pick u in an hour..thats final.u need a change rey.u really need this..now go n get ready.
and vicky disconnected the call without hearing reys reply.
rey cant do anything now.he thought.
"may be vicky is right.i need a change".
he stood under the shower.memorys came as a flood.he remembered the last 6 years of his life.
it was after 3 yrs of their relationship,he n taani got married.life was just perfect untill then.he had his dil,dosti n dance with him...hmm..dil,,really?
everything started after the marriage.taani always doubted him,accused him with other girls,asked him to stay away from his female frnds.he was even forbidden to speak with the lady staffs in office.rey faced everything calmly.he dealt withe the situation patiently.he thought it was due to her insecurities that she is behaving in this way.
but one day when day when she doubted his n sharons relationship n accused sharon saying that she is trying to take rey away from her n insulted sharon,all his patiens flew away.he shouted at her.his anger grew no bounds n he slapped her.that was the end of their 2 yr old married life.he is free from that dreadful relationship from an year now.
but he cant blame her completely for wat happened between them.he is equally responsible.
'had he ever loved her?'
if yes then y havent they ever consummated their marriage in those 2 years.
yes he liked her a lot.but he could never give her a place in his heart.its not his mistake.how can he do that when he doesn't own one?he had given his heart to someone long back.
rey shaved after a long 3 months.he dressed up in a gentle outfit.set his hair n gelled up some in the front.he is looking like a perfect gentle man.no one will tell he is udergng through such a tough situation seeing him now.
when he was leaving the room he saw a photo frame of Lord Krishna in the wall.he went to it n spoke.
"y r u always dng this to me?..y always me?
cant u tolerate my happiness?
are u not yet tired of taking my exams?
are u happy now seeing me like this?
but u r wrong i wont ever let u win .me kabi har nai manoonga.
i will give life a 3rd chance..yess a 3rd chance.
rey heard the sound of vickys car.he closed the door n moved towards the hall.
Yes rey is gng to give life one more chance..a 3rd chance.but little did he know something very shocking is waiting him at his destination.

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thats all for today.
i will update the 2nd part very soon if i get good responses.
now gud nytzz guys..
love u all.
kriyaansh n kriyaanshian rockxz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very different concept
loved d update
awesome story
update soon
n do continue
will love 2 read wats next
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice starting
seems interesting
Give this a happy ending plz!
update soon and do pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update. . .
By seeing the title i got excitd. .and nw aftr seeing the part 1,m dam excitd to read more. . .
Update d nxt part real soon.:-D
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha

nice starting
seems interesting
Give this a happy ending plz!
update soon and do pm!


thanx a lot.
ofcourse...happy ending for sure..
even i dnt like sad ending..especially for kriyaansh😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

very different concept
loved d update
awesome story
update soon
n do continue
will love 2 read wats next
do pm me


thanx a lot yar for ur lively comment..
will update soon n pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really looking forward to this one..
the first part was a good kick start...
do continue soon...!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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actually I Hate when stories like T R couple and then they go apart and kriyaansh happens...you see kabhi kabhi plot acha nahi hota but I loved this...taani ko sahi se justify kiya :P
ab KR ki meet ki waiting and please change the title to three shot if it has 3 parts...OS consists of ONLY one part

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