Arakshi FF - Ishq Ka Dard - Note on Pg 94 - 02/23/14 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: NSohi13

Oh finally Sakhshi mill gayi... Arjun's care about her loved it ... Thank you dear and Plz update it soon :)


Yup, Sakashi is found. I don't know if its care or not. Only time can reveal the answers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Nice update!!!


Continue soon!


Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ketakee

It was really amazing...
Story is just beautiful...
Nice to see Arjun caring for Sakshi...
Please continue soon...
PM me update please...😊


Thank you, Sweetie.
I can't say its caring or not. Only time can reveal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: gujjupari

awesome update mishti👍🏼

OMG! arjun praised shree *gasp* a first, but me liking😃
OMG!!!! suspense is still killing me!!!! WHy is sakshi soo afraid of arjun?? me wants to know what happened btwn the two???
conti ssooon & thnx for pm😊
PS: your story is great, so don't get tooo anxious🤗 (personal exp talking at the moment😆)


Yup, our Arjun praised Shree. Its big shock. Suspense is actually killing you and me too 😆 good question - why Sakashi scared of Arjun - only time can reply. I won't get anxious anymore when I have great readers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: priyagopana

awesome update dear...really loved it:)...cant wait to read more...cont soon


Thank you so much. If you want more updates than keep on replying.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Nice update dear,it could be seen that sakshi is scared of arjun but at the same time she is expecting something from him too,her rights,love etc...just hope arjun atleast talk with her and not act indifferently,love the whole update👏,continue soon and thank you for the pm🤗


Hi Pooh Girl

I miss that show - when I was young.

Sakashi could be scare of Arjun and same time she might be accepting something from him in return... only time can reply.

Only Arjun can understand himself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much Sweetie.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Honestly, I don't have words, but I am truly thankful to everyone. Thank you so much for making me update regularly without giving up mid ways.

Thanks to those who have replied and press like button and those who only press like button instead of replying.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What's Sup?

Are you guys excited for next part?

Please keep on supporting me the way - you guys are already doing.

Enjoy Next Part!

Any type of feedback is welcome and open for any idea for suggestion.

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Present in Grey
Past/flashback in Red
Heading/Footing in Green

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Part 3

9:45pm

Arjun came out of the washroom. He saw Sakashi leaning against the door. He march toward her. He tap her shoulder... Sakashi jerk up "what are you doing by the door" she heard him saying, "woh act-ually, its your place than how could I stay here. I should leave now. Sorry for disturbing you and forcing you to reveal your work members about me" she clearly stated her confusion...

Arjun sigh...

Arjun: Sakashi, I know many question developing inside your mind regarding me not receiving you, but it does mean that I don't care for you. This isn't perfect place to stay, but its my home and I believe together we can built another rishta near the future. I won't force you if you want to leave me the way I left you five years ago. Choice is your not mine this time!

Sakashi turn to leave, but his words stop her. She close her eyes for few seconds "and if I decide to stay" Arjun interrupt her "its very late. I'll go and bring dinner for us. You should fresh up" Arjun left Sakashi alone inside the room. He gone out giving her some time, but he knew deeply inside his heart that its starting of another relation and he doesn't know if he's ready or not. Sighing away he order dinner for them. After some time he went inside finding Sakashi standing where he left her "why haven't you fresh up" he asked her.

Sakashi: Do you have problem listening to others?

Arjun: When did I not listen to you?

Sakashi: When you were going out, I was trying to tell you that I don't have anything to wear, but you didn't listen just left.

Arjun realize during the blast Sakashi must have lost her things, but lucky to have few of her important things with her. He took deep breathe and gave her pair of t-shirt from his cupboard "I hope this will be alright" Sakashi made weird expression, but took his shirt with her. She enter inside washroom. Stripping down her clothes Sakashi enter inside shower stall. She felt extremely nice taking a shower, but her wounds burned. She hissed, but enjoy the shower.

She felt relaxed.

She dry herself than wore Arjun shirt. She had nothing under her shirt. She felt expose going front of him. She tried pulling shirt down cover her legs, but her chest would give away her expose upper. Sighing away she open the door "Um, Suniye" Arjun hang his phone looking at Sakashi.. water dripping off her skin... Arjun felt the awkwardness between them. He divert his direction "what's the matter" he ask her "can you please give me any type of long sheet or scarf" Arjun close his eyes "sorry, I don't have anything long, but I can give you another shirt? I know my pants won't fit you" Sakashi agree with him. She took his black shirt. She wore it on top of his another shirt. She came out.

Arjun avoid looking at her. He serve both of them dinner, but Sakashi hasn't touch her food "why aren't you eating anything" Sakashi gulp down her fear "I am... I'm not hungry, just want to sleep. Can you please tell me where I can sleep? I am tired"

Arjun: You can sleep on the bed

Sakashi: Aur ap?

Arjun: I'll mange on the floor. Don't worry. You sleep on the bed.

Sakashi agreed with him. She didn't want to argue with him. She lay on the bed covering herself with blanket. Close her eyes.

Arjun watch her sleep peacefully on the bed. He realize many things need to be change and many things need to be adjusted. He ate few morsel before laying on the ground with only pillow.

6am

Arjun woke up, finding bed empty. He look for Sakashi, but she wasn't inside the room or the bathroom.

He look everywhere inside and outside the lodge. He doesn't find her. He about to bang his fist when he heard two voice behind him. He turn around finding her with Liza "good morning, Arjun Sir" Arjun nod his head greeting her "Sakashi, where did you go without informing me? I got worried" Arjun scold Sakashi without listening to her or Liza "Arjun Sir" Liza finally interrupt him "Sakashi called me early in the morning around five - asking me to bring her some clothes" Arjun relax after hearing Liza "afterwards, Sakashi though of picking up breakfast for you guys" Arjun nod his head.

6:35am

Arjun come out after taking his shower.

Sakashi arrange table with breakfast she picked up.

Arjun came near the table sitting down on the chair.

Sakashi gave him cup of mug.

Arjun took mug from her.

He drank it.

Sakashi enjoyed her coffee.

Arjun spat out his coffee "yeah to coffee hai"

Sakashi: Yes

Arjun: I don't drink coffee only cutting chai.

Sakashi: What is cutting chai? I only drink coffee. I am sorry.

Arjun: Its okay.

Sakashi: Why don't you have bagel?

Arjun: Bagel?

Sakashi: Sorry, I don't know what your likes and dislikes in anything. I love eating bagel with coffee so I pick you same thing. I should have listen to Liza, when she was telling me about your choice. I am sorry.

Arjun: Its okay. I don't have any problem with bagel. I only eat them once a while.

Sakashi gave him his bagel.

Arjun watch her eating her bagel with coffee.

She smile at him.

Arjun gave her casual stare.

After breakfast Arjun left Sakashi alone. Sakashi look around the place and felt lonely cursing Arjun absent mind.

She thought of cleaning up the place. She began at one side of the room to other side. It took her few minutes.

9am

Rathore and his team arrive at river bank. His team checking out the boat where they found six people dead body.

Arjun studying the area closely. He found moisture soil of sand. He asked Aisha for evidence bag.

Arjun place the soil inside the bag.

Shree took few pictures of the bodies laying inside the boat.

11:45am

Arjun sat inside conference room.

He looking at few files.

Rathore talking on the phone with Aisha.

Shree came inside with Chotu. Arjun sign them few investigation of the people who die, but certain voice interrupt them "and what about me" everyone look at him. Shree and Chotu smile.

Rathore: Virat?

{Virat played by Kushal Tandon}

Virat: Yeah me!

Arjun: Welcome back

Virat: Thank you, Arjun Sir

Rathore: Now back to work.

Arjun: Virat, come with me.

Virat: Where are we going, Sir?

Arjun: London?

Virat: I just came back from London

Arjun just glare at Virat.

Shree and Chotu controlling there laughs. Rathore smirk "Rawte, have you called your wife?"

Virat confusion. Everyone know that Arjun's wife Roshini murder than what's this new matter. Virat beta, let's solve this current case than began your new investigation. Virat smile at himself.

Arjun: Why you say, Rathore?

Rathore: Liza, forgot to give you message of Sakashi calling her cell...

Arjun: Okay!

Arjun wait for Virat to come by the vehicle. While waiting for Virat he though of calling Sakashi but he doesn't have her number. Arjun though of asking Liza, but he doesn't want display anyone anything.

Virat tap Arjun's shoulder

Arjun: Let's go.

1pm

Rathore sat inside conference room listening to everyone connecting the facts. Arjun gave his famous dialogue "Kuch toh chhut raha hai, Rathore"

2:15pm

Liza enter inside conference room "Sir, death token day before bodies found. Strange fact soil found inside their lungs"

Rathore: Impossible!

Arjun: Possible, if murder happen somewhere else than place bodies inside the raft showing its natural death doing water rafting.

Liza: Could be possible.

Rathore: Where is Shree and Chotu?

Arjun: I send them out gather information. Where is Virat?

Liza: Isn't he in London?

Arjun: Yes, he is!

Arjun storm out of conference room.

Virat came inside "Rathore Sir, what's wrong with Arjun Sir?" Liza excitedly "Viru, when did you come back" she asked.

Virat: Hey beautiful. Just few minute ago.

Liza: That's great. Aren't you tired after long flight?

Virat: Would have, but passion for work just give me energy.

Rathore shook his head.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Amazing update 👍🏼
Arjun and coffee,haha thank god he didnt gave those SYS glares to sakshi,I like that part where he was indeed worried not seeing sakshi on the bed while waking up
I dunno why,bt i like Virat character,seems like he is the one,who'll bring arjun and sakshi closer😳
In all,beautiful update,great job by you,thank you🤗

Wait wait im first to comment,yuppie yoohoo🥳😆😆😆
Edited by PoohLover - 12 years ago

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