Arakshi FF - Ishq Ka Dard - Note on Pg 94 - 02/23/14 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PoohLover

Great beginning,would love to know about the story👍🏼...and yeah the VM is nice,like it,continue soon👏


I have store great pleasure of story line. Thank you for enjoying the video mix.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Beautiful,emotional and suspense...
Loved it a lot.
Continue soon.
Ek pm bhej dena when u update the next part.


Yup, its emotional concept. I hope I'll be able to give justices to it.
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Hey Friends.

I've never imagine I would get this amount of response. Thank you so much. And yes, its emotional concept. Hope I am able to give justices to it.

Just wanted to thank these people: sanjali, nida999, peppygirl, gujjupari, worldequalsyou, zebbie0504, PoohLover, sanjali, nida999, VirMan505, shailyshukla9, peppygirl, Sakuu, ramya_ln, worldequalsyou, kriti22, gujjupari, priyagopana, zebbie0504, ...Mithuz..., PoohLover, saba-ramisa,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24


What's Sup?

Are you guys excited for next part?

Please keep on supporting me the way - you guys are already doing.

Enjoy Next Part!

Any type of feedback is welcome and open for any idea for suggestion.

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Present in Dark Green
Past/flashback in Red
Heading/Footing in Grey

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Part 2

3:15pm

Rathore: Dam it!

Shree: What happen, Rathore Sir?

Rathore: How can Rawte be careless? Where is he? Why isn't he picking up his phone?

Chotu came inside conference room "Sir, there is another body found on same road side area where we found Varun and Vineet bodies"

Rathore: Let's move it team! Shree message Rawte and Liza to meet us at crime spot.

3:45pm

Arjun scan entire hospital, but he couldn't find her. He inquirer about the girl brought in yesterday, but he came to know that she got discharge early in the morning. Arjun left lightheartedly cursing himself and silently praying for her safety. He doesn't believe in god, but his Roshini does and for her sake he believes in it, but doesn't display it. His phone beep, Arjun check his phone. He read the message from Shree.

He drove his vehicle to crime spot.

Moment Rathore saw him... he start blasting him "Rawte, I hate your attitude working alone. Now you are apart of the team not alone learn start respecting your team members" Arjun just glare at Rathore.

He left Rathore staring.

Arjun observe every detail. He study the body. He found many details, but he needs to make correct diagnose.

Arjun: Aisha, personally go and check out the connection between these death. I strongly believe that something is missing. Kuch to hai.

Aisha: Alright sir

Aisha left.

Arjun sat inside his vehicle. He saw Rathore leaving with Chotu. Liza left on her own, but Arjun felt as if she was near him.

He just hope she's fine.

5pm

Everyone settle inside conference room. Arjun holding a marker noting down the missing details. Aisha came inside, conference room "Arjun Sir, you were absolutely correct about the connection"

Rathore: What connection? Is anyone going to explain me?

Arjun: Rathore, I told you before something was missing, but now things are shaping up. Just waiting for forensic report than everything in its place. Aisha, please share your discovery with us?

Aisha: Sir, I came across knowing that those three people are connected through one college. And that college is St. James High Campus.

Shree came inside sharing his news "Arjun Sir, you were correct. When I was cross checking details of Varun, Vineet and Sood I came to know that those three students attending same campus, but they are getting call by one common number. I've already began tracking that number" Rathore gasp his eyes "great work, Shree. Keep your eyes alert" Arjun told him.

Few minute latter, Liza came inside with someone. Arjun busy studying the papers Aisha gave him. Liza whispering few words to clam her down, but she's feeling scared. Liza tried her best calming her down.

Rathore finally notice Liza coming inside with someone. He gave her look after observing the person with her.

Aisha: Liza, is everything alright?

Arjun lift his head up, hearing Liza's name. The moment he saw her with Liza. His world came halting. He stood up. Without saying anything he rush toward her. She just stare at him. She tried hiding herself behind Liza, but Arjun already captured her tightly in his arms "thank god! You are absolutely fine. You know how much I looked for you after hearing about the blast." Everyone inside conference room staring at Arjun while he hugged that girl.

She moans in pain breaking them apart. She stare at him and he question her through his eyes.

Both of them lost in their thoughts of questions and questioning one another through their eyes.

Few second later, a voice brought them out of their world. She lower her eyes "Sakashi, do you know Arjun Sir? Why didn't you tell me before? It would have save us many troubles" Liza stated.

Sakashi controlling her emotions. She heard Arjun telling everyone that she is his wife. Hearing wife made her feel happy, but her heart wants to know "why didn't he come to receive her if he accepted her" many unknown feelings disturbing her mentally and physically. She slowly close her eyes.

Arjun caught her before she land on the ground. He carries her in his arm. She felt very light. Arjun looking for place to lay her down. He look at the far concern inside the conference room and found a sofa. He place her on the sofa. He touch her forehead gently feeling great knowing she's fine. He heard Liza saying "Arjun Sir, I didn't know that Sakashi is your wife otherwise I would have informed you earlier about her." "its okay, Liza. Anyways let's focus on the case. Liza, what does the report say?"

Liza stare at Arjun Sir with big eyes. Just few second ago, he was worried for his wife and now back to his super cop mode.

Liza sigh.

Liza: Sir, report clearly state its case of poisoning, but shocking part is that poison enter body through sharp blade. Analyzing the wound, its not needle or anything but like bullet, but its not a bullet. Its very sharp.

Rathore: Liza, you may leave now.

Liza about to leave, but stop. She goes toward Arjun "Sir, I forgot to give you Sakashi things. Here is her phone, her passport and her medical reports" Arjun just nod his head "oh yeah! Her medication are inside my car. I just bring them. Doctor said these medication should be given with food not empty stomach and they are extremely heavy doze may cause her to sleep" Arjun again nod his head.

7pm

ETF return solving the case. Arjun again solve the case without putting much effort, but his team cooperation always gives him success. He may just be Rathore assistant, but his team respective him equally as Rathore. He might not openly appreciate his team, but he cares for them and courage them mentally to prove him wrong for their better future. His tough looking nature gives him different view of life, but some moments in his life bring out his emotional side. Example, after death of Roshini he fear of loosing Sakashi his second wife. He might not express himself, but he cares for her. He kept on staring at her while she slept deeply. He sat inside conference room completing some documents before going home. His thought of home changed after death of Roshini. He hardly stay in his flat anymore because of the memories, but stay in simple lodge and consider it as home.

8pm

Around eight in the evening, Sakashi move around before opening her eyes. At first she try to observe her surrounding, slowly remembering yesterday event to today's event. She look around for him. She stood up, rubbing her eyes, searching for him. She found him staring at her. She move away from him slightly before she heard him saying "how are you feeling now? Let's go now!" Sakashi nod her head twice before she follow him outside the building into his vehicle. He drove them toward some lodge. She look at him for answers, but she decide to stay numb. She followed him inside the lodge into another room. She saw him putting his gun down, keys and many other things while she stood by the entrance.. hoping for him to say few words, but nothing happened. Sighing away she enter inside closing the door behind her after feeling few drunk people passing by his room. She watch him entering inside the washroom forgetting about her. She felt uneasy. She just wanted to have shower and lay into bed without eating anything at the moment. Just wanted to sleep. She stood by the door waiting for some few words, but she only heard water running. Closing her eyes, she lean backwards on door behind her.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Thanks for the update! Arjun praising Shree? That's a first😆
So he does care about Sakshi, though now I'm wondering if it's only because of the blast or he truly loves her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Beautiful and equally emotional.
So,everyone got to know that Sakshi is Arjun's wife.
Anyways,so Liza was the one who got Sakshi discharged from the hospital.
Why did Sakshi hid behind Liza when she saw Arjun?
Kuch toh chhut raha hai.
Loved their private moments,yet small,but loved it.
Awesome.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Arjun does care for Sakshi and that is clearly shown,par,why is Sakshi scared of him?
Continue soon,dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Loved it :)
Worth the wait :)
Writing for you to update again :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update
Thanks for the pm
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Hey nice update.. So Arjun introduces Sakshi as his wife and is worried abt her..interesting.. Continue soon..

Thanks for the pm..

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