Arakshi FF - Ishq Ka Dard - Note on Pg 94 - 02/23/14 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom

Nice update ...continue soon


Welcome to Ishq Ka Dard.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: live

Read all update in a go
Awesome story
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Welcome to Ishq Ka Dard. Thanks.

Originally posted by: ravzs

Nice update cont soon

Originally posted by: marnali04

update it soon.. its very nice..


Thank you so much Guys.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

Hey sorry for commenting late...

Loved your update...veryyy much...!!!
These new characters brought life to the update...really liked it...
I really liked the psrt wn Arjun says dt apart frm ur husband m ur senior...liked it very much...
I was also feeling bad for him...he could not get wt was happening...but he shud b aware of his wife's bday...bt cnt blame him..he is also tryng his best ...to know her...
but good virat remembered...
I liked wn sakshi called Arjun to join in...
ur edits were fab...!!!
cont soon...!!!
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Hey

Yup, they are the life of Virat and Sakashi. You can't blame Arjun for not remembering Sakashi's birthday when he hardly know about her and he is trying that is the best.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this part ... Sakhshi was demanding for a home aww poor girl but Arjun was thinking about Roshni and Sakhshi said sorry for her demand ... Virat us such a gud friend ... Surprise b'day party for Sakhshi ... Thanks for the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago


What's Sup?

Are you guys excited for next part?

Please keep on supporting me the way - you guys are already doing.

Enjoy Next Part!

Any type of feedback is welcome and open for any idea for suggestion.

I've reply to your questions on Page 40 to Page 42.

Please do check them out.

You guys must be wondering, what this girl doing, but I would like to introduce few more characters before anyone get confuse and these characters are here to stay now.

Sakashi's Family

Beeji (Anju Mahendroo): Grandmother of Sakashi's father and Great great granny of Sakashi and her siblings. (Dead)

Jeevika Singh K/Vadhera (Krystle Dsouza): Elder sister of Sakashi (Mahi) and Maanvi. Married to Viren.

Maanvi Singh K (Nia Sharma): Younger sibling of Sakashi and Jeevika.

Viren Vadhera (Karan Tacker): Husband of Jeevika and father figure for Sakashi and Maanvi. Older brother of Virat.

Many wondering, about Arjun not knowing Sakashi's birthday, but they hardly know one another and yet they are married for five years, but lived separately until know.


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Present in Grey
Past/flashback in Red
Heading/Footing in Green
Song/Music/Dance in Pink

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Part 13

Two sisters broke apart. Sakashi bend down to touch her sister's feet "Babaji always keep his blessing on my Mahi and give her every happiness" Sakashi's elder sister bless her.

Manu stood behind Sakashi. She hugged Sakashi from behind "I miss you Di" "I miss you too Manu" Sakashi hug her elder sister again "I love you too Di" Sakashi whisper in her elder sister's ear.

Virat took picture of Sakashi with her sisters in his cell phone. His smile had no limits.

Sakashi hesitantly trying to reveal something "Di, I have to tell you something. Please don't be angry" but her Di stop her "I know what you are going to tell me. I know everything. At first I was hurt learning about my sister's marriage, but when I thought of Beeji and her condition I clam down. I only want your happiness. Nothing more or nothing less" Sakashi smile.

Arjun watch Sakashi with her sisters emotionally hugging. He stood beside Rathore and Aisha.

Sakashi free herself from the grip after hearing her sister "now go up and change your clothes" her elder sister speak with authority "Manu take your sister upstairs" she gave orders to Manu and Sakashi.

Manu take Sakashi upstairs to change her clothes. Sakashi's elder sister goes toward Virat who is smiling and chatting away with his friends "aur apne" Virat halt his discussion and stare at Sakashi's sister.

Sakashi elder sister "what are you standing here in your jeans. Aur tumhari Jiju wearing boring plain shirts with jeans. Go and change your clothes and take your Jiju along. Your clothes have been place inside the room by Virenji. Aur yeah Virenji, where has he gone" Virat burst out laughing "relax Bhabhi" Arjun ear snap open hearing word Bhabhi from Virat's mouth. "Bro, must be on his way and before you get hyped up. Me and Arjun Sir going to change" Jeevika twist his ear "what's this Arjun Sir business going on" Virat roll his eyes and mumbling inside his mind "He may be your boss at work, but here he's your Jiju. Learn to respective your relation Devarji" "Jeevika are you going to kill my dearest Bhai. He's been working very hard to make this day memorable for Sakashi" Jeevika turn around looking at her husband.

Jeevika let go off Virat's ear and start her arguments with Viren regarding where he disappeared and stuff. Viren signal Virat to leave. Virat just grab Arjun's hand and pull him along with him. Arjun try to free himself from Virat's grip "Virat, what's going on? Leave my hand" Arjun growl in anger. Virat pouting, "Arjun Sir, please give me your bashing later on, but at the moment Bhabhi wants us to change and before she catch us and give her famous lecture. Please lets change into the pair of clothes Bhabhi left in the room" Virat just drag Arjun up the stairs inside the room.

50min later

"Di, you are looking so beautiful" Sakashi heard her sister complimenting her. She stare at her reflection. She felt discomfort because of the blouse and going in front of her husband is nightmare. His reaction scares her deeply.


Manu: Di, what are you thinking?

Sakashi: Nothing. Let's go downstairs.

Manu and Sakashi go down together. Sakashi stun to see her Jiju. She ran down toward her Jiju and hugged him tightly. She always consider her Jiju as her father figure. She hugged him again "I missed you" "I miss you too" Viren said.


Same time Arjun came down with Virat. Both of them wearing Shervani and they are white.


Arjun stun to see Sakashi revealing blouse. His palm turn into fist. He just about to pull them apart when he heard Jeevika saying "aja meri Mahi looking like angel. Kises ki nazar na laga (no bad eye touch my sister)" Jeevika place black dot behind Sakashi's ear. Sakashi touch her sister's feet and her Jiju's feet "Jiju, I assure you that the entire world change, but my sister won't change that's why I love her so much. I am lucky to have both of you guys in my life. I am the most luckiest girl" she hug both of them. There is no limit to her happiness after getting her wish granted.

Aisha smile seeing reunion of Sakashi's family. And nobody thought that Sakashi and Virat are related through their siblings.

Liza stood confuse of the event while Shree stood beside Chotu. Chotu eye on the food item being placed on buffet table.

Jeevika: Before we do anything Mahi, we can never forget our roots. Let's take blessing of our parents and their beautiful memories.

Sakashi's eyes got moist.

Viren gave her another hug "you have always share every moment with your Jiju than your pain is always my pain. Now smile for me, Princess" Sakashi gave her biggest smile to her Jiju afterwards remember her good moments with her family members.

Arjun just starring at Sakashi in the arms of Virat's brother. He just wanted to break them apart, but the affection he saw clam his anger down. Its pure father and daughter love type reaction.

His mind trying to adapt the information thrown at him. His mind sharp solving any case, but when it comes to relation his smartness defeat him.

35min later

Shradhanjali puja took place. Sakashi had tears in her eyes. She remember, how she would wait up every night for her father to come and for him to put her to sleep. She would always give hard time to her mother and today nobody is near her to handle her traumas.

"Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon"

20min later

Puja came to end. It was the last important ritual. Pundit ask the girls to give their last fume.

Sakashi's hand got shivering. She couldn't give the last ritual or fume to her parents. She just can't imagine her life without them. Her heart feels or believe her parents are alive than why this fake ritual and killing her dreams.

Sakashi could feel her father near by playing the violin. She felt a hand touch her hand. She look behind her.

"Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Beh jaana hai jise do pal kahani hoon"

She saw her husband standing behind her. Together they give the last fume. Every worries Jeevika had for her sister vanish instantly. She know Sakashi's husband always going to support her every step of life.

30min later

Everyone gather around huge birthday cake. Virat and Maanvi light the candle together and wait for Sakashi to blow them. Sakashi looking at the entrance like her every birthday waiting for her father to come and blow the candles together.

Jeevika touch Sakashi's shoulder "what are you waiting for? Candles are melting. Blow them out" "Di just few more minutes. Dad must be" reality came rushing into Sakashi's mind. She close her eyes compose herself.

She finally blew out the candles.

Everyone sang happy birthday...

Sakashi cut the cake hearing Manu saying "Di going to feed me first piece" and Virat saying "wrong she's going to feed me first" both of them bickering while Sakashi took first piece toward her parent's photo. She place it in front of them seeking their blessing.

Jeevika: Devarji aur Manu

Both of them look at Jeevika...

Jeevika: Sakashi already fed first piece to Mom and Dad. Its their rights not your mera Tom and Jerry.

Few burst out laughing except for Arjun.

After some time Sakashi take another piece and go toward Jeevika, but Jeevika stop Sakashi from feeding her and express Sakashi with her eyes to feed Arjun second. Its his right.

Sakashi go toward Arjun and forward cake toward his mouth. Arjun take the cake from her and eat it a little.

Sakashi felt hurt.

Arjun about to feed her, but Virat drag Sakashi away from Arjun and feed her "I couldn't wait any longer to feed you, Tweety" Viren smile at their friendship.

Sakashi fed her both sisters and they fed her after she fed her Jiju and her friends. She gave big piece to Chotu.

Chotu and Shree together fed her.

Sakashi search for Rathore, but Aisha told her that Rathore Sir left early because he had to pick up his mother. He left his blessing for you. Sakashi took the gift from Aisha and smile inwards.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nicky13

Loved this part ... Sakhshi was demanding for a home aww poor girl but Arjun was thinking about Roshni and Sakhshi said sorry for her demand ... Virat us such a gud friend ... Surprise b'day party for Sakhshi ... Thanks for the update :)


Thanks for replying. Sorry I am replying it late. Yup, she is demanding for home, but let see if Arjun can gift it. Yup, Virat is good friend and always the best.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
virat and manvi fighting was best part .continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
a gud update luvd d stry n yup ehmmbh twist s fab kudoos fr such thinkin it wrkd grt job do pm me wen ya update rest
by d way a dhasu wala update 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loove loove loove the update mishti...im out of words seriously...it was such an emotional update and i really enjoyed reading it dear 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

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