Arakshi FF - Ishq Ka Dard - Note on Pg 94 - 02/23/14 - Page 23

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I jst loved it
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Originally posted by: MistiofMistz




Oh! Please don't be jealous of him... I oh her pain is too much, but I don't know if she can hurt anyone or not 😉


Ohhh twist might b awaiting us...wud love to c ...but stl Sakshi is the bst hehehe ...
PM me wn u update pls...
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Originally posted by: Shivi1997

I jst loved it
Update soon dear


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Originally posted by: SAKSHI..


Ohhh twist might b awaiting us...wud love to c ...but stl Sakshi is the bst hehehe ...
PM me wn u update pls...


Maybe twist is waiting for you guys or not... 😆
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Huge sets of thanks to everyone. I couldn't have come this far if it wasn't your support. Thank you so much to my silent readers and those who have been commenting.
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What's Sup?

Are you guys excited for next part?

Please keep on supporting me the way - you guys are already doing.

Enjoy Next Part!

Any type of feedback is welcome and open for any idea for suggestion.

I've reply to your questions on Page 30 to Page 34.

Please do check them out.


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Present in Green
Past/flashback in Red
Heading/Footing in Grey
Song/Music/Dance in Pink

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Part 10

Commissioner and his wife Radhika force Arjun, Rathore, Liza, Aisha, Shree, and Chotu to have dinner.

Arjun's eyes search for Sakashi, but she wasn't present at the moment. He wasn't hungry at the moment so he skip dinner. He went outside to get fresh air because of the party environment suffocate him.

5min later

Arjun eye caught huge gazebo (had pound of water in middle) he saw his wife sitting with three people. They are chatting and having can of pop with pizza and pasta. He made his way toward them.

He tap his feet on the floor "oh hi Arjun" Udayveer spot him and invite him to sit with them.

Sakashi gave him smile.

Tani: So Arjun Bhai (she bit her tongue) Is it alright if I call you Arjun Bhai? Sheen always talk about you.

Arjun: You may call me Arjun Bhai. So have you seen Sheen lately. I haven't had chance to meet her. I thought she would come today with Raghu Sir, but she didn't.

Tani: Yes, I've spoke with Sheen. She's gone to Mexico with her friends and cousins. So Arjun Bhai tell us (Sakashi controlling her laughs) have you gotten married or single still at this age?

Sakashi swallow her laugh and stare at Arjun for his replay.

Arjun hate discussing about his personally life. He remember how Roshini's friends questioning him when he was dating Roshini. At that time he enjoyed those moments, but now it feel extreme anger. He clam himself down and stare at Sakashi for some time "hey guys, lets go down to beach" Sakashi interrupt.

Anurag: Nope. We have to stay until the end.

Uday: Agreed. Otherwise Commissioner Uncle (Uday hesitate in calling anyone else as his father after loosing his Dad) going to kill us. No pouting Mahi.

Name Mahi always awaken some hidden memories in Arjun's heart. He tries to remember them, but everything is bury.

Tani: Shut up Mahi. I want to know if Arjun Bhai is single and if he is I have many friends wanting to mingle with him. Sheen dying to see her brother settle down in life.

Sakashi pouted. She hate her friends at the moment or trying to save them from her husband's anger and she know tonight going to be long night.

Sakashi sighs.

Arjun stood up "Tani" he look at Uday "I am already married and if you don't mind I would like to take my wife home" Sakashi choke on her drink.

Anurag: You okay.

Sakashi: Yeah Bro. I am fine

Tani: Awe. My friends' hearts are broken, but what do you mean you like to take your wife home. Who is your wife? Do we know her? Why haven't Sheen hasn't said anything?

Arjun goes toward Sakashi "you know her extremely well Samjhe Ye Samjhaun" he glare at Sakashi.

Arjun left.

Sakashi stood up "guys, I'll see you whenever I get time. I should leave otherwise my" she bit her tongue "bye guys" she left after taking her belongings.

Uday found it strange the way Arjun glare at Sakashi. It remind him of someone, but he know its too good to be true.

10sec later

Sakashi saw team sitting inside the car. She shout Aisha name twice, but Aisha doesn't hear her and her third call stop her. Aisha turn around finding Sakashi. Sakashi huffing and puffing. She gather her breathe "where are you guys going" she asked.

Aisha: Home. Rathore Sir, is dropping us home.

Sakashi: How can you guys leave without me?

Arjun's glare! Answer her question.

Sakashi close her eyes "I know I came alone here, but I didn't know that Arjun was talking about same party. I couldn't hurt my friend on her special day. I shouldn't have lie to him. I am sorry. Please can I come otherwise Uday or Anurag Bro" Rathore smile at Sakashi acts.

Arjun shout: Sakashi!

Sakashi open her eyes slowly "sit inside the car" he glare at everyone. Chotu blurt out "guys we are already six and how is Sakashi going to come" "simple she's sit on my lap" Virat smile.

Arjun already had enough "Chotu front seat" everyone already sat inside. Arjun sat beside Virat and Sakashi confuse how to sit on Virat's lap cause he's in the middle.

Arjun grab her hand and pulled her inside on his lap. She stare at him for sometime until she realize they have already drop Chotu, Shree and Liza.

3hrs later

Rathore stop outside Arjun's lodge.

Arjun and Sakashi get down. Sakashi grab her bag "thank you" she thanked Rathore. He gave her smile.

Arjun grab his key from front desk. He and Sakashi enter inside lift. They get out on third floor.

Sakashi enter inside the room after Arjun open it. Her eyes blink at the mess she left behind on the bed.

Arjun stare at the bed.

Sakashi quickly pick up her clothes and stuff them inside the closet after Arjun went inside the washroom.

Sakashi lay his clothes on the bed and her PJ. Arjun came out already wearing pair of sweat and shirt.. Sakashi grab her PJ and went inside.

5min later

Arjun place his laptop aside when Sakashi sat on the bed beside him. Both stay quiet for sometime.

Sakashi thought he isn't going to burst his anger anymore she lay in bed covering herself with blanket.

Arjun: Is there anything you would like to say or explain yourself?

Sakashi: Yeah goodnight.

Arjun throw blanket aside "Sakashi I am not waiting for you to wish me goodnight, but answers. Why haven't you told me that you were going to your friend's engagement and why haven't you shared the news of joining ETF without asking me? Answer me" he grab her by her shoulder.

Sakashi hissed in pain "Arjun you are hurting me" she struggling out of the grip, but Arjun tighten his hold "I am waiting" "because I thought you would say no if I told you about my friend's engagement and regarding joining ETF. I said no to Sameer Bhai because I wanted to know your views, but when you didn't introduce me as your" Arjun free her when he saw her tears "never mind you won't understand, but if you dislike my idea of working than I will resign tomorrow morning" Sakashi got out of the bed and lay on the floor (without any blanket or pillow).

Her silent tears fades away, but they haunt Arjun.

1hr later

He tries to sleep, but he couldn't. He got out of bed and look at Sakashi shivering on the ground. He lift her up in his arms and place her on the bed. He cover her with blanket he threw off. He sat beside her and wipe her tears "I am not hurt by your lies, but I feel I'm outsider in your life. I feel guilty when Virat knows you better than me. I know its my fault. I've shut you out of my life five years ago, but I hate the feeling when you call yourself Sakashi Singh instead of Sakashi Rawte" his eyes shut itself beside Sakashi holding her hand.

7 in the morning,

Sakashi woke up. She felt weigh on her body. She spot Arjun laying on top of her. She get confuse and try recalling how she end up sleeping on the bed. She remember sleeping on the floor after her argument with Arjun.

2hrs later

Sakashi enter ETF building. She greet everyone with smile and inquirer about Sameer's arrival.

Aisha: He is inside his cabin. Where is Arjun Sir?

Sakashi: I thought he came before me.

Aisha: He hasn't come yet. Maybe he's on the way.

Sakashi: Yeah. I'll just meet Rathore Sir and come.

Aisha: Okay.

Sakashi knock on Rathore's cabin.

Rathore: Come In

Sakashi: Are you busy, Sameer Bhai?

Rathore: Hi Sakashi and I am not busy. Just reading some files. Is everything alright? Are you excited to be apart of ETF?

Sakashi: I doubt things are going to workout. I just came to say that

Voice: that she is happy to work with us.

Sakashi turn around looking at her husband with hurt eyes. Arjun display his famous SYS glare.

Rathore: Good morning Rawte.

Arjun: Any case?

Rathore: Nope. Why you ask?

Arjun: Cause me and Sakashi going to visit her doctor. I think she must have forgotten in excitement of coming here. Let's go Sakashi.

Arjun grab Sakashi's hand and took her with him.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First time commenting frst on any story or post...!!!
Awsm update...
was waiting for your story to be update...
Arjun really had enough that night...hhehehehe
Sakshi went to sleep !! just a good night ?? so typical Miss Anand..!!!
I thought she might get a SYS ...but her tears ...
Arjun's last dialogue , saying she might have forgotten in excitement...good one...
Awsm update...thanks for d PM ...
😊

Edited by SAKSHI.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay, you updated! Me happy!!
loved the update! Do hope that Sakshi lets Arjun in to her life soon, now it's more like the both of them are roommates or something with feelings for each other... Hope kw sab mu jaldi door hojaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update...
Actually I am confused..if Virat and Commissioner's family are this much
close to Sakshi how can they be unaware of the fact that she got wedded...???...
And Sheen too...!!!...
Hope you will disclose everything in near by future...
Eagerly waiting...continue soon...



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