Arshi OS- Ek kahaani...pyaar ki

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

amnomoreme

@bunny22

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

a lots of kisses from ur gf love u so muchh😊😊 and im sry for being late😭😭

and yeah u did write ur first attempt very well😊😊

but didnt wait for me as u told😡😡

and aoming to the update its so nicee didi...

pari is too cutee

arnav hogay besharamm

khushi as usuaal bubbly wow dii u wrote it so welll

once again love uuu😊😊

Quote

janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow dear...mindblowing... once again i saw our Ipkknd in ur OS...
thank uuu so much dear for this update...this beautiful update and cute family...
All the best u should start writing more stories of our Arhi..😊
Sister hugs to u my dear sister😊

Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey u keep writing os. U write dem so sweetly. Dis os ws superbly cuteee

Quote

sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow,

excellent OS :)

realy really loved it :)

thanks for the pm

Quote

avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wow that was amazing...
pari was sooo cute...n Arnav made her cry...poor pari had 2 listen 2 d story 101th time... 😆

well i would love 2 listen 2 dis story 1000+ times...

loved d entire journey... 👏 👏 👏

u must continue writing... 😃

Quote

BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hi Nicky 🤗 Firstly, I am very sorry for deleting you from my buddy list. It was an honest mistake. I have sent you a request again though :)

Coming to your OS, It was your first, so that way it was a great effort. I loved your idea and how you incorporated ArHi's love story in it. Great job.

I am very bad at giving long comments but I would just like to tell you one thing- Don't stop writing. You arent a bad writer until you believe you are. Write for yourself if not for anyone. That way you'll improve alot. That's what I do. I am still trying to improve. :)

Hope to see you write more:)

-Manjari

Quote

Parii...

@Parii..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

superb 👏

great 👏

loved it😳

Edited by kanug - 12 years ago

Quote

Parii...

@Parii..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Edited by kanug - 12 years ago

Quote

Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Great IS dear
Well written espicy pictures you have put
All memories came back Ahhh missing IPKKND
Back to ur story loved how Arnav tried to pacify Pari
But she is crying
Lolz Arnav telling her his and khushi's live story 101time
Pari he'll irritated
Khushi angry as well
But before she can say anything he kisses her there and then
Awesome
Thanks for pm

Quote

---Sonia---

@---Sonia---

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Nickysweet
I m glad u like it dear and welcome back. I m busy in writing this OS that's y didn't comment on your OS. Will comment on it soon

it is okay dear:)
even l have so many updates to read now:)