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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
one more bakwaas title and its
TWINS WALA LOVE
and also
confusing confusion
ummm...
i hate twins but love him

after suggesting these title
i'm just like this🤣
thanks 4 making me laugh😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
continue asap and pm m me asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

one more bakwaas title and its

TWINS WALA LOVE
and also
confusing confusion
ummm...
i hate twins but love him

after suggesting these title
i'm just like this🤣
thanks 4 making me laugh😆


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Thanx for making me laugh too...😆😆
loved the suggestion...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: natali1999

continue asap and pm m me asap


Thanx😳
Update on its way😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
nice... plz do continue da story WAITING...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: zainabmoosani

nice... plz do continue da story WAITING...


Thanx Zain😳
Finally you commented😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Ek baar likhti toh bhi chalta😛😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
I'm sooo happy😃
Literally dancing out here
Title is finally decided...Thanx a lot Hash (wow-taarey) for the suggestion😳
Ok no more of my bak bak, Chapter 1 haazir hai aap sabke liye😉

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Chapter One

A bright new morning. Water droplets of the previous night's downpour falling down from the leaves. Birds chirping and adding a sweet melody in the atmosphere. Tiny tots getting ready and are excited to go to school. People of all age groups are jogging in the park. A group of people have formed laughter clubs are laughing their hearts out.

Suddenly the temperature in one end of the park starts rising up. All girls present in the park stop whatever they are doing and turn to have a glimpse of the most good looking guy who has just entered the park. Anyone who sees this scene can surely say that the girls are here only to look at him. He loves attention. He goes in the middle of the park and starts stretching.

A girl approaches him, "Hey I'm Tanya, what can I call you, Mr. Handsome?"

He smirks and replies, "Rey" extends his hand to her and she quickly shakes her hand.

He takes her hand and gives a small peck. This takes her on cloud nine while the others are burning of jealousy. He takes a look around and starts his jogging.

This is Rey, Reyansh Singhania, whose has got it all, intelligence, strength and most importantly good looks! Every single girl of his college wants to be with him, but he loves flirting with them all! He is sure that there is no girl in this universe who can make his heart skip a beat.

Scene shifts to a room where a beauty is sleeping peacefully in her bed. If you looked at her carefully she'll look nothing less than an angel who has just descended down from the skies. The curtains are opened and sun rays com and fall directly on her face, disturbing her sleep. She moans because of the disturbance and turns to the other side.

"Wake up sleeping beauty, how long will you sleep?" she hears this and murmurs in her still sleepy voice, "Mom please five more minutes" and covers her face with the blanket.

This is Taani, Taani Shekhawat, beautiful, intelligent, caring and shy kind of a girl. She loves love. She is sure that her Mr. Right exists somewhere and is waiting for him to come in her life.

Moms are moms; her mom pulls over the blanket and tries to get her up, "Taani, batcha get up now. Dad and me are leaving in sometime, jaane se pehle milna nahi hai kya?"

"Mom let me sleep!" then realizes what her mom just said and gets up with a jerk. "Kya! Aap dono itni jaldi jaa rahe ho?"

"Jaldi? Ek mahine se jyada time ho gaya hai. Aur Australia jaake business bhi toh sambhalna hai" said her dad coming into her room.

"Dad aur thode din raho na please" said Taani making a cute face.

"This time it won't work. Sorry sweetheart but we have to go" said her dad.

"Ok fine. But promise me that you will come here every year" said Taani and went ahead and hugged her dad, "I'll miss you dad."

"Really? Aaj college shuru ho jayega aur fir tumhare friends banenge, boyfriend banega aur iske baad toh tum hume bhool hi jaogi!" said her dad teasing her a bit.

"Dad please, no boyfriend talks, you know na ki mein apne Mr. Right ka wait kar rahi hu" said Taani.

"Kya pata iss college mein tumhe apna Mr. Right mil jaye. Abh neeche chale? I'm too hungry" said her dad and the three went downstairs to have breakfast.

*Ting Tong* the bell rings and a boy rushes to the door to open it. "Hello brother, tum abhi tak aise hi ho, kitni baar kaha hai ki tum plastic surgery kar do, meri shakal ki kya halath banake rakh di hai tumne!" said Rey and came into the house.

"Oh please Rey! I look much better than yo.." and was cut by his mother, "Offo! Tum dono sube sube shuru ho gaye! Rey Swayam no more fights, come and have your breakfast right now!"

This is Swayam, Swayam Singhania, twin of Rey. The two brothers love each other more than their lives but still fight and argue everyday.

"You say you look better than me, well let me inform you that its just the third day of this week and over 500 girls have approached and talked to me!" said Rey and headed towards the dining table.

"You know what Rey, mujhe in 500 girls mein koi interest nahi hai as I have one girl who is really special to me" says Swayam and starts blushing.

"Stop blushing dude! Aur tumhari iss 'One Girl' ko pata chalana ki college ke first day pe hum dono late hone wale hai toh humari shamat aa sakti hai" said Rey and pulled Swayam out of his thoughts.

"Shamat aa sakti nahi aane wali hai Rey!" came a voice from the entrance.

"Oh shit Sharon aa gayi!" gulped Swayam.

This is Sharon, Sharon Rai Prakash, the diva of college. She is a beauty with brains and is very very short tempered. Apart from this, she has a sweet and caring side which only Rey and Swayam know about.

"Hello beautiful, itni jaldi aaj yahan pe? Mujhe itna miss kar rahi thi kya?" said Rey.

"Kal raat ko mujhe kisine phone kiya tha ki aaj hume college jaldi jaana hai" says Sharon while staring at Swayam.

"Mein toh kabse ready baitha hun. Rey hi late hai, as usual" said Swayam.

"Oh hello, tune mera time waste kiya!" said Rey.

"Meine nahi tune! You only started your stupid argument!" answered Swayam.

"It wasn't a stupid argument. Tum maan kyun nahi lete that I look better than you!" said Rey.

"I look better" said Swayam.

"You both are twins! So please stop fighting on who looks better!" shouted Sharon who was hell irritated by now.

"Rey tu jaa aur jaldi se fresh hoke aa. We both are waiting for you." said Swayam.

"Haan haan jaa raha hu. But accept it, I look better than you!" saying this Rey runs into his room.

"Oh God save me from him!" pleaded Swayam while Sharon started giggling at this.

"Sharon, you're looking beautiful" said Swayam in a husky voice making Sharon blush.

They both were busy talking when Rey came down, "Mere Romeo and Juliet chale?"

Both blushed and the trio left for college.

Meanwhile Taani's parents left for Australia. She got ready to go to college. She went in the Pooja-ghar and prayed, "God please mujhe mere Mr. Right se mila do!" After praying she too left for college.

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Don't get confused with the title...you'll soon come to know the confusion..
This was just an introduction about the characters...I hope it was good...
Hit like and comment as your comments encourage me😊
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
OMG!!!😲😕
chapter se pehle mera name😳
gng 2 read so tab tak ke liye😃
res😛
thanks😳😳
nd
yiiipppiiieee🥳
me first
coming to the update
TANYA😡😡
but rey hai hi esa😳
nd taani
she is sooo cute😳 her parents are gng to australia😭😭
accha hi hai, nahi jaayege toh rey taani ke ghar kese jayega😆😆
and
OMG😲😲
swayam means rey no means swayam😕😕
vaise he also looks haaayeee😳😳😳
but but but
sharon😡😡😡
uaann...uaaann...uannn😭😭
thik hai
chalta hai😭😡
kya luck hai sharon ka😡
swayam bf hai nd rey flirt kr rha hai😭😭
it's awesome👏👏

where's the next chapter???
update sooonnn...
starting se ki garam hona parta hai😡😡
nahi toh update sooonn.. kese hoga😆😆
Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
amazing chapter 1. taani kitni cute hai. loved reyam convo. update soon

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