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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

wow

finally they are together

such a beautiful ending

the way he kissed her made me swoon

thanx for such a lovely update

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

superb update yar...!!

very beautiful n heart touching...!!!

and the one thing i loves most about it is the way you made arjun accept riya's love...!!!

gosh this was perfect...!!! i loved it... couldn't get enough of this...!!!

feeling sad ki it ended so soon...

gonna miss this one for sure...!!!

and yes waiting for the epilogue 😉

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Mehr03

@Mehr03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ila_tanwar
it was a nice and smart one...

frankly speaking may be my words will sound the bold one or insane but its a hard truth.. usually the this kind of concept where jealousy and dringks mixes author end that on bed... and then regretting and hurting one ofd the person... but this is different... and totally like i will be glad if you right a sequel to it as what happen next got married or arjun and riya is knowing eachother and sik's end by arjun...

Thank you...yeah I wanted to write something different and I hope it was portrayed well. Thank you for your kind review 😊

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

wow you have really wrote a great end to this story,

great work

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Loved it dear amazing

liked it lot

Thanks for thePm

Are u giving n Epilogue ?😕

If yes continue soon 😊

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Mehr03

@Mehr03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: devildiva21
superb update yar...!!
very beautiful n heart touching...!!!
and the one thing i loves most about it is the way you made arjun accept riya's love...!!!
gosh this was perfect...!!! i loved it... couldn't get enough of this...!!!
feeling sad ki it ended so soon...
gonna miss this one for sure...!!!
and yes waiting for the epilogue 😉

thank you for your review...i thought about adding another one chapter but decided against it since I wanted to end it like this. . Hopefully, the epilogue will be posted soon. 😊

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

finally you update this.

it was awesome and mind blowing update dear..

just loved it.

superb ending..

thanx for the pm.

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Mehr03

@Mehr03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Thank you for all reviews...I edited the title of this fic to complete. I wanted to write a sequel for this but it will be on another thread. I also intend to write on another new Ariya fic so the sequel for this one has to wait. Thank you all. 😊

Edited by Mehr03 - 11 years ago

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Write that sequel soon!

I can't wait! buhahah!

And do pm me when you do!

😃

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Sorry for late comments dr...!!!!!

The update was fantabulous...!!!!!!

Ariya confrontation was quite intriguing...!!!!!!

I think no one can take anyone's place in somebody's heart...!!!!!!

I know the first love always remains in your heart but I also think the love that bring someone back to life again n filled his life with happiness is equally important n no one couldn't take that place either. It's just my POV sweetie...don't get me worng...!!!!! I mean he made a broken man fall for her, so she deserve a bit credit... I guess...😉

BTW it's a beautiful ending...!!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the sequel...!!!!! plzzz come back with it soon...!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!!!!