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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

This is Bloody human nature..

never care for a thing or a person until it is gone...

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

loved it!

it was sad but you wrote it brilliantly and the last part made my eyes go moist!

good one!

thanks for the pm dear and welcome back!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Welcome back, Anjani. A poignant story.

Looks like Arnav is one of those temperamental boyfriends, blowing hot and cold… first he doesn't like PDA when he's with his friends but then he manhandles her when she has the temerity to study with another boy… what a jerk! My question is why is Khushi allowing him to trample all over her? This isn't love! She is a victim of domestic abuse, whose self-respect has been eroded. Kudos to Akash and Dhruv for standing up to Arnav for his mistreatment of Khushi… Arnav didn't deserve her love… irrespective of what was going on in his house he had no right to take it out on her! I am not sorry they abandoned him to his loneliness and misery… her death leaves him with no means of redemption.

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MidnightReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Hi! 😊

Beautifully written but I don't like to read sad endings. 😔 You have delivered a beautiful message to the readers, "In your life never take the people who love you for granted." Great job! 👏😃

Edited by Rimz_k09 - 12 years ago