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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!!!! I can't believe what all has happened in the last three updates... I cat believe there family is no more. You had made me fall in love with all the characters in this story and I am already missing them. I feel so bad for Khushi, Arnav, KBV, Krishna, and even Arjun and Suraj. I am happy that finally Viren and Vijeyndra are paying for there sins. Fantastic update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the update Kalyaani.

It was a sad one but brought out the innate character of the people. Khushi, who had been cocooned all her life, by all around her had to take up the responsibility as the sole surviving woman of the two families. Suraj, showed that blood is thicker than water and whatever help and protection KBV had rendered him discreetly was not in vain. Arjun, came to know that a man needs to be responsible for his actions and he needs to behave responsibly to get respect. Khushi's love and reverence for his mother is felt by Arnav and he wants to give her a break from the responsibilities even if it was for a few hours. Moreover it was the ousting of the other Raizada branch he was waiting for.

As expected, Vijayendra doesn't allow the opportunity to go without taunting them. He told he doesn't have any use for Arjun and his malicious tongue showed how his mind works. Always below the belt! He even outrightly tells them on their face that Arnav had the audacity to take what belonged to his Viren! So now he has spelt out whom they were trying to covet! Khushi! What can it do in the end? The outcome is well known. Arnav losing his temper. Sheetal who is now privy to their behavior throws in her towel saying that she does not want to attach her name to a scum like Viren as she wants to become a better person than what she was. When Viren and Vijayendra try to pull their weight, all they get back is admonishment from the members of the police force and their scuffle, if it occurs, would be aired as it had live coverage! Both, Vijayendra and Viren had to slink away like a fox with the tail between its legs.

When Arnav tells Khushi not to worry she gives him the true state of things. It is, both would always worry about the other to the end of their time and Arnav says whatever the faults Arjun had earlier he had forgiven him. But the latest one though, not directly involved had made six members of the family the scapegoats, pay for his sins was something he could not forget in a hurry! When Arnav joins KBV, Krishna and Suraj in the study, Khan briefs them on Vijayendra's hand in supplying substandard materials to the school, changing the genuine ones and ensuring the collapse of the building within days and the end of Khushi thereby hitting both KBV and Arnav in one stroke. KBV thanking Khan for keeping an eye was overdue and his advice to Suraj to treat women with respect was a solid one and well placed. He has accepted Lavanya as his Suraj's wife as a Vajpayee Bahu if they marry and for that one of the norms that Suraj has to follow is respect his woman. So KBV gives the responsibility of security of Krishna, Arjun and Arnav to Khan. This shows how much KBV had kept an eye on both Suraj and Khan and he has seen how they have always been there for his Meethi at a distance. That was why he had kept quiet on that matter and that was why he thanked Khan out of the blue. He instructs Krishna to get the materials tested and stall the school work till then. KBV's only regret is he was not able to keep his promise given to his friend Akilendra Singh Raizada to protect his family.

The downfall of Vijayendra Raizada!

NK Ray the Party President gets photocopies of various nefarious activities of Vijayendra Raizada and his sun-the son. Though Vijayendra enters the Party HQ with a swagger, he is soon made to realize his muscle power and money does not fetch him anything! His confident smile turns into diffident frown and later into a slanging match only to be shot down by the TV news clip that Viren is badly mauled by his fellow jail mates and is taken to the hospital! Rays advice is quite ominous. Go attend to the matter, Vijayendra and we will wait for your resignation and we hope it gets here soon. End of his political career. And the final nail in the coffin was the unanimous agreement with a riot of laughter, With a son like Viren, Vijayendra can be assured a smooth passage to hell. What a downfall!

Waiting to read what next!

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update. One could feel the grief of raizadas losing their loved ones. Just hope Khushi n Lavanya stay safe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gripping edge of the seat stuff - 👏

Karma and politics begin to take their toll.

Fascinating story - enjoying your writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Kalyani ,
Finally i am taking my time to comment .. First of all you are a marvellous writer.I look forward everyweek to read the story updates. Both Pieces are grear .. on thing to note Both Kushi's are strong and Both Arnav are super passionate... I love both the stories ... Please update soon.
And god bless ya !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Unbelievably written, Kalyaani!!

I have been busy moving so didn't have a chance to read the last few chapters. I just read the chapters 81,82, and 83 in one go.

Chapter 81 was really one heart wrenching update. I was literally in tears and shocked that six people died in the crash, half of Arnav's and Khushi's family just died!😭 I really feel that pain for all the Vajpayee and Riazada family.
Of course for Arnav his first concern would be his wife but now he lost all the ladies of the family. Now Khushi is the only surviving woman of both the family.

Of course everyone would blame Arjun for this, its because his sins that they had to pay. You don't realize a persons value intel you have lost them, that the feeling Arjun would be going through.but now no one is going to console him, it's to late!

I'm am happy that Suraj has stepped up in this state of tragedy and doing whatever he can to help out even bringing his help.

Tayaji just need to be taught a lesson for all his sins that he done, even if he didn't have anything to do with the accident, but he has caused so much trouble for this family. We knew his intention was to harm Khushi as she is an important person for Arnav and mamiji and in order to get revenge from them
Happy that viren engagement was broken and she saw the true of theirs.
Now it is the downfall for that family from now, hopefully!

Poor Arnav Khushi mamiji and Krishna didn't even get the time to mourn for their families. But hopefully everything works out for the better.

Brilliantly written and well expressed!
Was feeling the pain throughout these chapter.

Eagerly waiting for next..

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Posted: 12 years ago
please update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
how many chapters left?
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Few more days till the month ends, so now many more chapters to go?
Can't believe it'll soon be ending!!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey k

R we getting an update today

As much as I don't want you to finish ff but everything comes to an end but wanted to request can u plz start an other ff in your own time

Thanks

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