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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Awesome update Kalyaani...Arnav, Khushi, KBV, Krishna are coping-up with the loss..the loss, the void left behind can never be filled but then as life moves on I'am glad Arnav, Khushi too are learning to fight the situation and move forward...i hate that man Vijayendra..he is downright shameless..has no ounce of regret whatsoever.. after everything said and done he has the guts to walk freely... Vijayendra is way too confident about himself..and this confidence will be the reason why Vijayendra will drown and he and Viren will not realize what hit them...I'am glad Sheetal broke off the engagement with Viren..no Women would want to marry a person like Viren.. Sheetal breaking off the engagement I feel is just the start of the downfall for Vijayendra and Viren...they really have tough times ahead as KBV, Arnav, Suraj, Krishna, Khan; none of them are going to spare Vijayendra and Viren...Hell is coming Vijayendra and Viren's way... Khushi being the only woman in the family, minus the love of Indra or the guidance of Bhavna...I felt bad for Khushi...but I'am glad Arnav is standing by her...& Khushi and Arnav are supporting each other in this ordeal..Suraj's gesture of getting Kamala to help is very thoughtful of him.. hmmm...so finally Khan has told Arnav, KBV that Khushi was a target and her life was in danger... Arnav, KBV anger at that stage is justified as Khushi is their life...Khushi, Arnav, Lavanya, Suraj, Krishna, KBV I want all of them to be safe...& I'am waiting for Arnav, KBV, Suraj, Krishna to strike back at Vijayendra and Viren eagerly...Loved the end of the update Vijayendra and Viren political career is doomed..NK Ray has his revenge and I believe KBV and his sons (Arnav, Krishna and Suraj) have a hand in the reports reaching Ray with proof..so Viren is beaten up in the jail, good for him...I want the father-son to suffer and Arnav, KBV to have their revenge...very nice update..well written..keep it up...please do continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 years ago

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apni1

@apni1

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

I like it...i like it...they are getting what they deserve..

great up-date...

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Very well written. ..so now vijendra and viren pay for their sins...

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Random1888

@Random1888

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Soon or later one should pay for their sins. This point wad well potrayed by you in this story.

gud one

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

What a change of fortune!

What goes up comes down on Earth!

Will write in detail later.

Loved it Kalyaani😃

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Superb update! Mourning still on-going! The tayaji and his family will definitely pay for their deeds. Jaise karni waise bharni.

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Today i truly understood the meaning of "blood boiling in rage"
How dare dat Vijeyandra even try to warn KBV&Co.!!
Oh! the climax of the update ws pure pleasure to read! he deserves dis n much much more! Virenz fight was orchestrated,
haha.. These scums r yet to receive more severe blows hmmph!
Haa. finally sm sanity prevailed in Sheetal!
I bet Khushi is pregnant! :)
Dat wl b wonderful news for the family amongst the gloom whch descended in Shantivan.