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abstarct wala kaisa laga????

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You should write an OS!!! :D

Konsa walla likh rahi hai?
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

^ main effect bana rhi thi baithke..


ruk yeh main KJ ke liye banaya tha..


It is superb! Merese to banta hi nahi ye sab. I do my kachra editing at picasa only. :'(
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Originally posted by: Incandescence.

You should write an OS!!! :D


Konsa walla likh rahi hai?


yeh ek concept tha jo jeevan bhar se mere dimag mein tha..

single mom wala...


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part 4 & 5- awesome updates...i think rey is dreaming about kriya...
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i hate it wen u stop it here !
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Originally posted by: Incandescence.




Part Five.

Aren't you something to admire, cause your shine is something like a mirror
And I can't help but notice, you reflect in this heart of mine


His car slowed near her drive-by. He turned the engine off, lowered down the window. All he could see was the partially open window of first floor. Several climbers landing up into the balcony, with different shades of flowers embedded in each. How beautifully she had dressed her garden. It was certainly the most serene thing he'd ever seen.


The dried leaves of old oak tree covered most of the path. With sun kissing the horizon, he exhaled a lump of air. It was strange that, he could see no living person around, only a fluttering curtain, playing with the air.


Cause with your hand in my hand and a pocket full of soul
I can tell you there's no place we couldn't go..


He stepped out from his car, and with hesitant steps he headed towards the door. His hands trembled while ringing the bell. But he got no response from inside. Was she out somewhere? He pushed the door tenderly, to what it opened easily. This was the first sight of her home, he was seeing. A perfectly decorated home, he felt that warmth in its each brick, lovely breeze was flowing through its well ventilated windows. And there on floor, a small life was barking at the arrival of this stranger. The small puppy barked, with his whole strength. He was as small as to fit in one's arms. Rey picked him up and cuddled that small life with his palms, brushing his brown fur.

Cause I don't wanna lose you now
I'm lookin' right at the other half of me.


That small one jumped out from his arms and rushed to a place inside which Rey followed. Through the white curtains he entered that room, which accommodated his sleeping love. Beside the bed, barked her puppy, in his ultra soft voice.


The vacancy that sat in my heart
Is a space that now you hold.


He felt numb enough to forget everything and simply walk toward her. Her lips, her eyes, her face, her hands, all were stationary in serene peace. And this peace was difficult to find peace in this hustle of life which he might have been deprived of. With so much patience she was sleeping, with no worries, with so much of love.

It's like you're my mirror

He bent down to come face to face with her. Her chest moved meticulously as she breathed with a certain frequency. He leaned on her, until he was breathing in her air.

That we're making two reflections into one
Cause it's like you're my mirror.



And it was some sudden reflex that their lips melted with each other. Soon, the left distances were diminished when her hands wrapped themselves around his strong frame. And he closed his eyes, simply dipping into her moistness, disappearing in ecstasy, kissing her simply with his whole heart.

Girl you're my reflection, all I see is you.
My reflection, in everything I do..
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Ahem..So this one was bit long! Sorry I could not control myself! :P
Thankew all!

And lines used above are from song "Mirrors- by Justin Timberlake" . It is a blissful song, Do listen to it. ^_^

Please do review this one too.

Lots of Love.





read both the updates back to back...!!!

but this one made me nuts... i shapath... 😳

this was sooo... AAHHH...

u making me mad with its each passing update u know that... 😆 😳

but... Kria was sleeping ryt...???

usko sleep mei he feel hogaya ki Rey is here... 😲

waah... pyaar sach mei kuch bhi kara sakta hai... 😆

but kuch bhi kaho..i toh loved it... 😳

poor Rey.. he got so restless when he didnt saw Kria in office...

and that small sa cute sa puppy...eee... mwaahhh...

in all... just loveddd it... 😳

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Originally posted by: Born2Dance

i hate it wen u stop it here !

Awww... I had do it jaan. Or else word limit cross ho jata! 😊

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