Smitar's: Finding Khushi #12 Last Part Pg32 (11/7) - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what an ending
bless this too came to an end
so gaurav wants army of siblings
they shall be busy for long his parents to grant that wish
awww but they shall okay not an army but few siblings for sure
bless they were teasing arnie so much
and he wasnt even getting it
thank god they didnt come themselves
as it is the poor things hardly get any time for themselves
and yes she will be with you forever for sure
cant wait for monday now for the new one cool
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very nice journey this was Smita..and I am eagerly looking forward to your and Rashmi's collaboration. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a beautiful journey it was
smita, lovely story dear
eagerly waiting for the next one smita - thank u for ur efforts dear
rashmi, 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice ending
Looking forward to LOVING KHUSHI
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story to an amazing ending and but i'm really looking forward to your new story so pm me
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant Updates Smita! 👏

Loved all the missed chapters! ❤️

Here are my comments on ALL the missed chapters! 😳

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44 (1) - Awww.. 😳 Arnav called HP and told him to send Khushi... Maami helping HP? 😲 Wah wah!!! 👏

Khushi getting everything Arnav likes so that she doesn't have to take the risk again and again... 😆 too cute! 😳

"I thought I would get atleast a pappi for taking so much risk." she sighed. "Chalo, koi baat nahi..."

Khushi did not have to complete her lament.

Arnav dragged her into his arms, and dropped kisses all over her face. Khushi stood still, enjoying the burst of his passion, loving the feel of his hard lips on her soft face, thrilled beyond words at the force of his love...

"I won't give you cause for complaint tonight, Khushi." the devil whispered. "I promise to meet all your demands, like a good husband should."


I laughed sooo hard!!!! 🤣 This was sooo ADORABLE! ❤️ Cute chapter! 😳

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44 (2) - The men indeed look handsome! 😳 Especially Arnav ji! 😉

"Arnav Bitwaa, you looks good enough to eat!" Mami declared. Arnav took a step back in horror. Mami was unpredictable at the best of times.

Maami... OMG!!! 😲 Did she actually say this??? 😲 OHHH MYYY GODDD!! 🤣 🤣 I can totally imagine Arnav's facial expressions! 😆 To die for! 😆

Awww.. Buaji.. 😃 Loved the way she nazar utharo-fied for Arnav and Ganesh and they hugged her! 🤗

NK and this hindi.. 🤣

"Khabar karo, Nannav, khabar karo." NK advised, laughing away to glory.

"Kisko khabar karoon?" Arnav asked, frowning. "And what?"

"Sabar, NK bhai!" Akash corrected him. NK pulled his ear. "Sabar, sabar! Sorry, Nannav, mere Bhai!"

ROFL! 🤣

OH my gosh... Khushi looks like a princess... Red.. Arnav ka favourite.. Arnav will surely eat her alive! 😉 ☺️ WOW Chapter... Finally shaadi time!

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44 (3) - Anjali teasing the duo.. Awww.. 😳

Anjali asked, "Nani, Babuji, Ganeshji, shall we start? Otherwise Chotey will stand here all evening, looking at Khushiji!"

Loved the dialogue! ❤️

FINALLY THE WEDDING IS OVER!!! WOOOHOOO!!!! 🥳 It was beautifully written Smita! 👏

Arnav and Khushi off on a Holiday or shall I say.. HONEYMOON! ☺️ ❤️

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45 (1) - Haaayeee.. ArShi part was soo mesmerizing.. The cute convo about the wedding 😳 and then finally Arnav's surprise at the Farmhouse!

Ab to Suhagraat hogi! 😉 ☺️

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45 (2) - THIS WAS ABSOLUTE FLAWLESS AND MESMERISING ROMANCE... LOVED IT TO BITS! ❤️

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45 (3) - Hawww.. Arnav teasing Khushi... 😆 Hadd hai yaar Arnav.. bechari ko mat satao... 😳

I simply LOVE the care and love in their relationship! It's WOW! ❤️

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45 (4) - Oye hoyyeee.. Morning Romance and Bathroom Romance... OVERDOSE!!!! ☺️ Not that I'm complaining about anything! 😉
I would never complain if I get loads of Romance!

The last line was THE BESTEST ❤️ : "But nothing suits you better..."Arnav whispered over the sound of the water as he unknotted her towel.

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46 - BRILLIANT ENDING! ❤️ A Beautiful End to a beautiful story! ❤️ The Breakfast Romance and the scene in the Garden...

"Promise me that you will never leave me, Khushi. Tumhare bina..." Arnav gulped. "Tumhare bina main jee nahi paaoonga..."

Khushi hugged him thoroughly. "Then you will live a very, very long life with your Sanka Devi." she promised against his lips.

This was the perfect ending!

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OMG!! This story is OVER? 😲

THIS STORY HAS BEEN ADDICTIVE THROUGHOUT! Way to go Smita! Kudos!

Cheers to the Victory!



@Smita - Will really miss this story! 😒 Waiting for your next shot! 😳 🤗 The Name itself is pulling me towards it! 😉

'LOVING KHUSHI'

Wowww... Me in dreamland already! 😉 😃 😳 ❤️

@Rash - Thanks for the PMs! 🤗 Will be waiting for ur PM on Monday! 😉

Love, ❤️

Mrina
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow that was the perfect end to this magnificent story, absolutely phenomenal.

The last update was simply Amazing and brilliant.

Awww Anamika and Ganesh planning on having a army of babies was so sweet and adorable.

Loved the way the family was teasing Arnav it was so funny, loved Arnav's reaction when they said they were going to come to the farmhouse.

Loved the part where Arnav and Khushi had breakfast together, lovely moment.

Wow the last part was amazing, Arnav took Khushi to his Maa's garden, so touching, tender and beautiful moment.

Loved the story and it has been a wonderful read from start to finish and each update has been written exceptionally well,

Eagerly waiting for the new story, will that be a sequel or a new storyline?

Thanks for writing this amazing story and the PM xx

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it looking forward to loving khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much Smitha and Rashmi. I loved both the stories and waiting for Loving Khushi.

It is because of you that we keep coming back to IF again and again.



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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely FF and such a fitting ending. eagerly waiting for the next one.

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