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Posted: 12 years ago
I hate it. I hate it that I can't seem to hate Rishabh. And I really wish I did.

I guess this was the reason why we never really got to see Khushi's perspective. Well of course, like every teenage, she had a crush and was head over heels I love with him, but circumstances was not in her favor to get the guy. I feel terrible for her! She shouldn't have to hear those words.

Oh Arnav! Sweet heart, you need to get up and fight for your love! Make Khushi realize that you're the only one for her. There could be thousands of Rishabhs along the road, but there can only be one Arnav, and he's all hers!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'll admit, I'm HIGHLY prejudiced! My brain is functioned in a way that it does NOT make me want to see Khushi with anyone else BUT her Arnavji! :D hahahaha!! :D

But hey, when Arnav takes up a challenge I have faith in that man to live upto it and WIN it at all costs and the RIGHT way. I'll admit, I understand Khushi and Rishab's rapport considering they've known eachother for so long and taking in the fact (Quite unhappily) that Khushi had a thing for Rishab. But I'll assure you I'll try NOT to be an irritating reader who'll tell you that "HEY, I hate Rishab, don't let him near Khushi or I'll break his bones" LOL! That would make you HATE me! :D I know you as a writer and I know you'll eventually bring Arnav and Khushi together so I'll go with the flow and I'll PROMISE that I'll enjoy it :D

Ok, enough of my idiotic rant for now, but I must admit, Rishab is quite the charmer. But may I say one thing? He has had a good life and I understand he loves Khushi but I have this gut feeling that he can NEVER love Khushi the way Arnav does. Just look at how Arnav treats the lady and how Rishab treats her. It is so clear from the chapter that Khushi thrives normalcy in life and due to certain events she has admitted that she was being labelled a handicapped because she really is one. Now because Khushi is a strong willed, happy girl she has her guards steady and is happy and content with what she has. But really, why should the girl not long for the same life as her Shreya chachi or Lavanya di? Being handicapped is not frigging reason and Arnav has steered clear in that department right from the very beginning.

Well I've known Rishab only one chapter so I'll not be so very judgemental, and I can't wait to see how he is treated by a certain Mr 'I love solitude and Khushi is mine' Raizada! :D And honestly, I really hope Arnav doesn't give up on his dreams of attaining Khushi. The last few lines kinda scared the shit outta me.

Oh dear Arnav, yes, YOU. HER. can SOOO happened! :D Just never give up! :D

Oh my GOD! You are simply BRILLIANT! I love how this story is proceeding, I can't wait for the next update now! :D Please update fast! :D I love you for writing and I love myself for actually discovering your writings! :D haha! :D
Edited by bunnylovessunny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome chapter !

Felt for Arnav.
I hope he doesn't retreat back into his shell.
Poor thing, once again, he faces the prospect of being alone.
But this once, i think he will fight . He wont let her go so easily.
ANd i somehow think khushi has outlived her crush for rishabh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update A! So the new phase has started...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thats a great move dear!!!!!!!! excellent update as always!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey
Sorry for my late comment...My internet was not working

First a BIG HUG for PM me..
That's a wonderful update...
Hope Arnav will tell Khushi what he feels or atleast give her some hint..
I don't want any MU between them

and i think bcoz of Rishabh Arshi will come close...

Awaiting for next...

Love
Trisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update. I hope now Arnav takes some action😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...

Nice update, and the intrigue surely is building!! 😊 Arnav now raging with jealousy and quite possible feeling unreasonably 'betrayed' by Khushi...as if the poor girl committed a crime in having a friend other than him! 😊

Khushi actually having had a crush on Rishabh years ago adds a touch of piquancy to the whole situation 😉 And Rishabh himself, seems a very interesting character too. Am glad he's a strong character and not just a namby pamby. Eager to see how this plot line develops.

Am a little bit confused about Rishabh's feelings for Khushi, though, hope you could clarify this for me. In the last update, you mention for Rishabh:

""Not that he was looking for commitment right now either, and even if he was looking he could wait for her a lifetime now that he knows what she means to him."""

So is Rishabh ready for commitment himself, but willing to wait for Khushi to come around? Or do you mean Rishabh himself is not ready for commitment?

Sorry if I am over analyzing this 😊...but would really love to get clarity on where the characters stand, in your imagination...

Cheers...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh I feel so sorry for both Arnav and Khushi.

Khushi because that lovely girl with a heart of gold thinks she doesn't have it in her to attract the opposite sex. Rishabh was unaware of her feelings and Shyam crushed her heart, even Arnav made it clear he did not want to marry her - how is she to resurrect her lost confidence? For someone who talks so much, the girl hardly even talks about her deepest fears and insecurities. Sigh. But it was great to get some insight into her, gives more perspective now.

And then there is Arnav, I have always maintained I find his situation worse here.. never being loved by someone and afraid of loving another human being - what kind of existence is that? Khushi had a bade papa and Chachu - at the end of the day she had a childhood, Arnav on the other hand was deprived of that. And now that he has finally let someone in, Rishabh's entry is making things difficult. Oh the poor guy!

Rishabh also isn't at fault, us bechaare ko kya pata tha ?

Now I want to know what happens as a result of Rishabh's entry and Arnav's insecurity. So excited!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your reflects a lot of maturity. It's a treat reading your stories, please update soon :)
Edited by Chocochips - 12 years ago

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