Destiny's games ||KR OS|| Update Pg 30 :P

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Amazing...

In the start u scared me...

Thank god it's nt tht naani...

Write ,ore OS...

Ur an amazing writer!!!:):)

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

firstly thnks a lot for doing the update...

kya update hai...

loved it...

superb ..

u r an awsome writer dear

keep writing...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

amazing update

it was like anything

but i wanted ki rey aur tad pain 😈

you see im very bad !!!!

loved it

thanks for the PM

do write more

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

awsumm update dear,,,👏

luv ur wrks❤️

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Neha

@Neha_KR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Awsum update
finally our kriyansh are together
kriya apne pyar ke bulan par uth gayi
loved it
bahut cute ending thi yaar
thnxx for pm

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

just Mindblowing update/ENd

Awosm wrk love it

Write more like Commedy waale chahiye isbaareee 😆😆

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

unres
haye la
kyab aat hey
maney to abhi
1st res unres nahi kiya ki story ka end ho gya
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chal ek saath comment kar deti hoo
hmm okay for 1st part
wow i loved it
i mean Rey ney Kriya ko insult kiya
sab k samney :(
then uska accident ho gya
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But still Kriya
ney rey k liye fake realationship ka natak kiya
kirna kiya usney
sarey gift b they uskey pass
but phir usney slap kiya very bad
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one more shock
Rey ko sab pta tha
usney jaan booj k kiya
tears****
OMg
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then Kriya ka accident
shit***
finally Kriya was okay
Kriyaansh happy ever after types
i loved it
amamzing story yaar
loved it
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God bless u
best of luck
Aroma/-

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Awsum ending i luv it alooot reading it again and again

Thanx for the pm :)

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

super awesome...really great.
after reading the first chappy i was so angry with rey for slapping our angel.
but it was aa a drama.thank god atlast kr became one
loved it completely.