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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Orchids--



kyunki tym nai mil raha likhne ka pehle jaisey.. aur itni sari stry strt ki thi pagalpan mein update bhi nai karti sab stry.. so its better to reduce d load,no??😊

itni sari kaha di???? Bas 3 hi toh hai 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

itni sari kaha di???? Bas 3 hi toh hai 😲


3 nai 4.. ek SS bhi toh hain..😛 type toh uskey liye bhi karni paring..😆😆
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thank youu..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Amazing please update soon



thank u soo much..😊😊
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Once again HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY (AAYUU)...❤️
here's ur second b.day gift.. promise ki hain toh rakhni toh padegi,na..😊
hope u'll like ds update... t.c dear... luv uu..🤗



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PART - 17


"bhabi??" riddhima asked after slightly opening the main door of her Rahul bhaiya's house..

"riddhi.. aa ja.. mein kitchen mein hoon.." simran said aloud making riddhima smile at her luck all over again.. no doubt she has done something good in her previous life dat she got such a kind hearted family like them.. she has long ago shifted to their outhouse but never they treated AR as paying guest.. in fact for them riddhima is the daughter of their house having full freedom to come these building anytime dat too without any permission or knocking.. if that wasn't enough, simran forced riddhima to keep the spare key of the main house saying how imp they (AR) to them now nd for simran, armaan and rahul are same while riddhima is nothing but her own lill sister... so they have full right to possess the spare key feeling completely homely around...


Smiling heartily ridhima entered the kitchen only to squeal in excitement nxt moment.. "yeh aap kya bana rahe ho bhabi? Kitni achchi smell aa rahi hain.." riddhima said enthusiastically rubbing her palms in a child like manner while her gaze was fixed longingly at the door of the microwave oven.. simran laughed at her silly lill sister.. truly she's a kid sometyms.. "pineapple cake.. armaan ka favourite.. birthday hain,na aaj uska?" simran said d last line so sweetly dat at once riddhima's heart swelled in gratitude.. "par bhabi.. iski kya?" but simran at once cut her stopping her in between.. "zarrorat hain riddhi.. aab hum apno ke liye, unki khushi ke liye, itna toh kar hi saktey hain,na? waisey bhi armaan aur rahul ek hi toh hain.. dono hi iss ghar ke betey hain.. aab agar mein rahul ki b.day pe cake bana sakti hoon toh armaan ke b.day pe kyun nahi?" riddhima smiled in between her tears nd thn hugged simran tight.. "dunno wat good we did bhabi ki humey aap sab ka sath mila.. kitna kuch kar rahe ho aap log armaan aur meri khushi ke liye aur hum hain ki kuch bhi nahi kar patey aap sab ke liye..." riddhima said tightening her hold feeling more grateful wth each passing second.. "sshhh riddhu.. aisa nhi kehte bachcha.. we all love u both.. isi liye toh humey fikar hoti hain tum dono ki.. abhi tum dono ho hi itney achche ki bina pyar kiye koi reh bhi toh nahi sakta.. hain na??"riddhima nodded kiddishly in between her tears.. "I luv u bhabi... bas ek aap hi ho jinkey wajah se mujhey mumma ki kami mehsoos nhi hoti.." riddhima said after disentangling herself.. "achcha?? Aur mujhey laga mera devar tujhey kisi aur ke barey mein sochne ka mauka dega tabhi tu kisi ko miss kar payegi,na? waisey bhi jab dekho dono room mee ghusey rehte ho?? Karte kya ho yaar har waqt room ke andar??" simran said teasingly only to get an extremely embarrassed "kya bhabi aap bhi??" from a completely red tomato like riddhima.. "hahahaha... chal ja jis kaam ke liye aaye hain wohh kar le.." simran said in between her laughter while giving riddhima full chance to flee away.. and as if she was waiting for ds opportunity only becoz as soon as simran completed her sentence, riddhima at once rushed upstairs without wasting any further minute.. finally reaching the guest room, closing the door behind, she settled herself on the bed still trembling in shyness nd nxt momnt she quickly palmed her face feeling too embarrassed of simran bhabi's wrds... nd nxt moent she lied down on the bed all blushing yet smiling contently... "yeh armi bhi na.. humesha mujhey rok leta hain ghar ke andar.. dekho abhi kitni tang khichayee hui meri.. huh! Khud toh besharam hain.. koi fark nhi padhta aur mujhey bhi aisa samajhta hain.. pagal armi.." riddhima said pouting in between but then smiled divinely wen she remembered how exactly he alwaz stops her going away making silly excuses or cute faces!.. "oh I love him.."

nd thn smiling brightly, she enthusiastically got up... nd went to the corner of the room to give his birthday gift a final approval before handling it to the actual owner... standing in front of a big canvas, she slowly unveiled the portrait behind.. it was all she was doing from last 3 months.. she was capturing their 1st meeting on this very canvas wth not only the artificial colors but also wth d colors of love, affection, care & all positivity she possesses... smiling fondly at the teen armaan, she slowly ran her fingers softly caressing his image while stepping onto their memory lane...

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"hey.. tum ro kyun rahi ho? Kisiney kuch kaha kya??" a kid of age 14 asked concernedly to a crying gal of similar age who was sitting all alone in the crowded park while others were too busy playing n laughing themselves..

"kya hua hain?? see.. u cn tell me.." he again probed softly after settling himself comfortably on the grass beside her..

She quickly wiped off her eyes only to be teary all over again nxt moment.. "kuch nahi.." dat is all she managed in between her hiccups..

"arrey kuch nahi toh y are u crying like this? Pagal ho kya??" he said d last sentence teasingly nd as expected got a scowl from her side..

"kyun tang kar rahe ho mujhey? Ghar mein bhai yahan pe tum.. sabko mein hi kyun milti hoon humesha.." she said so painfully dat he quickly dropped the plan of teasing to divert her mind.. clearly she's in pain..

"hey.. I'm sorry.. mujhey laga tumhey tang karunga toh tum bhool jaogi ki tum kyun ro rahi thi aur firsey mushkurane lagogi.. I really didn't mean to hurt u.. truly.." he accepted his stupid plan sheepishly while waiting for her forgiveness.. she kpt on staring at him wth her round big confused teary eyes but then gradually smiled, 1st a lill but then wider.. "it's okk.. tum mujhey help hi toh karna chahte the.. ho jata hain kabhi kabhi... dnt wrry.." nd her innocent gorgeous smile infected him too mking him beam in thankfulness...

"thank u.. by d way, I'm armaan.. aur tum?" he asked enthusiastically clearly showing how much he wants to befriend wth this innocent angel..

"riddhima.." she too said smiling..

"riddhima? Wow.. nice name.." he praised only to get a shy "thank u.." from her side..

He laughed heartily seeing her so shy for such a complement.. "friends??" nd stretched his right hand hoping in his heart earnestly to get a yes' from her side and as if his wish got heard by God as she, too, shook her hand wth his wth equal happiness nd enthusiasm...

"achcha riddhima.. abhi hum friends ban gayee hain,na.. toh ek baat bataogi??" he asked choosing each wrd carefully while she nodded in 'yes'.. "tum ro kyun rahi thi? Kuch hua hain kya?" his voice was full of concern..

She took a deep breathe but continued anyway.. "nahi armaan.. kuch nahi.. yeh toh chalta rehta hain merey sath.. actually bhai thodey strict hain,na.. toh kabhi kabhi unki bato se aisa lagta hain ki he's ashamed dat I'm his sister.." she paused wth a lill hurt face nd he frowned.. "kyun?" he was unable to understand how can one be ashamed wen he has such an angel in his family!

"wohh mein di ki tarah ambitious nahi hoon,na.. u knw.. bhai abhi se papa ki business ko lekar bahot serious hain.. he alwaz says how he wants to tke papa's business to the sky aur di.. di bahot pretty, smart nd intelligent hain,armaan.. class mein topper.. dancing mein topper.. sports mein topper.. in fact unhey bhi pata hain future mein kya banna hain unhey.. she wants to be a fashion designer.. ek bahot famous fashion designer.. abhi tum hi socho mein odd one nhi hui un dono ke beech.. kyunki na hi mein ini beautiful hoon, na hi itni talented aur nahi merey sapney unkey jaisey hain.." she said softly..

Armaan who was listening to her attentively finally asked the main question he was curious to know.. "toh tumharey sapney kya hain riddhima??" she got conscious nd bit her lower lip in nervousness.. "wohh armaan.. wohh.." nd this juz raised his curiosity to its peak.. "haan riddhima.. bolo?" he asked so earnestly dat she closed her eyes nxt moment nd replied in one go.. "mujhey future mein koi job nahi karni armaan.. mujhey toh bas mumma ki tarah banna hain.. an ideal woman.. a perfect daughter, sister, wife nd thn.. mother.. I know bahot old fashioned soch hain par merey liye rishto ki ehmiyaat carrier se bahot zyada hain.. mujhey bas merey har rishtey mein achche marks se pass hona hain.. jaisi mumma meri idol hain.. I want to be d idol of my children oneday.. i want my family to be proud of me for my virtue not for the sky-touching, high money-making achievements.. u knw armaan.. I saw mumma waiting patiently for papa on every spcl day but he has no tym for her or us.. he's juz too busy to mke more n more money.. bhai nd di are busy in their own wrld but mumma nd me alwaz waited for him n his call for every spcl day but he never remembers.. or may be he never considers us important.. it was alwaz the two of us celebrating each festival on our own.. I saw mumma crying all alone in spite of having all luxuries, armaan.. I saw mumma waiting longingly for months.. nd I dnt want that to happen to me.. I dnt want to enter their money-making, robotic wrld.. I want to breathe, armaan.. I want to live.. but at home.. everything is just suffocating.." she paused but then apologized quickly after a few minutes wen she recollected wat she juz confessed.. "oh srry srry srry armaan.. mein bhi kya batein leke baith gayee.. but dunno aaj achanak aisa kya ho gaya dat I opened up my feelings to someone for d first tym.. but I'm really sorry for making u bored.. wohh.. wohh bass.." she was ranting her apologies so fast dat finally it forced armaan to smile in between his tears.. he was soo lost nd touched by her words dat at once he understood how pure nd spcl ds gal is.. no matter wat happens but he won't do any mistake to lose this friendship ever in d future.. till now he has seen enough selfishness nd rejection in relations, finally getting an angel all noble nd honest, he felt as if he too can get humanity from life.. he, too, can get a true frnd..

"sshh.. riddhima.. kitna bolti ho tum tum yaar.."he said making riddhima choke her nxt wrd in shock.. he smiled seeing her unbelievably cute expression nd thn continued again.. "good.. abhi let me speak,ok? Riddhima.. I didn't feel ur thoughts back dated, neither I felt it embarrassing.. it's like.. we all hve diff kind of priorities.. kisi ke liye paiso ki ehmiyaat sabsey zyada hoti hain toh kisi ke liye rishto ki.. but trust me.. aisey bahot kam log hain joh rishto ko paisey se upar mantey hain.. u knw.. wen mom-dad died in d car accident, all my relatives came crushing in my house to tke care of me par jab unhey pata chala ki dad ki bahot heavy loan due thi nd uskey liye humari sari property ja chuki hain, no one stayed back to take care of me.. I was only 8 then.. bas aath saal ka ek ladka jissey kuch nhi pata tha life ki hurdles ke barey mein, bas ek accident ne uski duniya hi badal ke rakh di.. us din ke baad shivayee selfishness, greed, rejection aur hatred ke mainey kuch nhi dekha.. thnx to our father, who gave me shelter at school's hostel nd issued scholarship on my name.. dunno agar father nhi hotey toh kya hota mera.. bas wohi ek aisey insaan hain joh mujhey humesha jeene ki ummeed detey hain.. joh yeh believe kartey hain ki still humanity exists.. but trust me till now I nvr believed ds assurance of him.. after facing all those horrible days, the wrd humanity started seeming completely vague to me but thnx to god ki aaj mein hostel se bahar aya.. warna kabhi yakeen hi nhi hota ki tum jaisi angel bhi rehti ho iss duniya mein.. u knw wat tum bahot achchi ho riddhima.. I dnt knw kya problem hain tumharey bhai ko tumsey but juz kp in mind ke yeh dost humesha tumhara sath dega.. chahey kitni bhi mushkil kyun na aa jayee... bas ek baar yaad se yaad kar lena..." he paused nd ds tym she smiled in between her tears...

"hmm.." she said sighing in contentment knowing very well dat this friendship will definitely change her life for better...




_______________to be continued_______________


lotsss of luv,

sargam

🤗


Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
haila ridhima makking a collage type potrait for armaan as his gift.. haye kash koi meri bhi banwa de... sisi ridhima se meri bhi potrait banwa do with un dono kesaath hi... hahaha😆😆

chalo chodo... i loved the part sooo waalllaaa much ... i can't telll...
but na... but na... mein ne armaan ko dher sara miss kiya...😃😃

chalo aab next paart mein mujhe pata hain arman and ridhima honge bus aur koi nah hain na...😉😉

luv u sisi...
mujhe inna acha gift diye vo bhi do doo.. haye.. mein mar jawa...😳😳😳
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

unres...
Wohooo...
Awesome Part Sugarpie...
Love ittt...
continue super soon...
just waiting to know about Armaan;s reaction :)
takecare
love u muwaahhh :*
Edited by RihooHaws - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum part...
14years me itni heavy heavy baatien...!!!

Who said ridhima is nt beautiful???? She is a angel... Huh://// rishabh i'll kill him sumday... Plzz use mere samne mat lana bhagwan nhi mere haato ek murder ho jayega.. And i can't afford that 😃


hehehe armaan nd his cute antics 😳 😆
Edited by Prizi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Orchids--


3 nai 4.. ek SS bhi toh hain..😛 type toh uskey liye bhi karni paring..😆😆

hehe mujhe laga bina typing k hume parts mil jate hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

hehe mujhe laga bina typing k hume parts mil jate hai 😉


how intelligent of u !!! 🤣🤣

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