Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED] - Page 37

Originally posted by: zk456789

Wow awesome update
Jaha swayam ho waha to Sharon ko tension lene ki zarurat hi nhi he
Love there passionate lip lock
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon
Please I don't want this ff to discontinue

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

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unres

i was really disheartened when i read ur note 😭

dont discontinue tis ff its a request

as a writer yu definitely stood up for me

your writing material is a complete blend of romance n emotions

coming to ur update

i really liked how you are focusing on sharon n swayam's relationship

by giving it a stability .

thr were few sequences tat were very subtlely put

bringing out the passionate side in a relationship

the kiss in the car was hawt ☺️

even the way swayam was lost in sharon 😳

the very description of how he was staring n observing her

was very beautifully penned

very excited to see how swayam n the gang will help sharon

do update soon

looking forward to ur updates 🤗

ps tanvish i was a silent reader of ur ff for very long

but ur impressive n exceptional style of writing

forced me to convey how much i appreciate ur work

do write more n post it soon

Originally posted by: trisha19

Awesome update..👏.loved it..😊

loved the swaron romance..

waiting for the next chapter..update soon..

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Awesome update tannu I loved loved loved it..❤️.
The punishment made me blush along with Sharon..😳. Swayam ne Phd hi kar li hai Sharon no wonders he knows every damn thing bout her..😆.
The site inspection scene was fun to read I could imagine Swayam's confused face when Sharon asked him to comment on her layout..😆.
Then the Khoobsurat moment made me melt like never before the abruptness of it was so damn good to read..😊. It was awesome..👍🏼.
Siren wala moment toh class tha..😆. You've got an awesome sense of humor tannu sachhi I was rofling while reading the shuddh hindi part mast likha tha..🤣.
And ofcourse the end of the update was lovely serene calm and beautiful..❤️.
For the record bol deti hoon you aren't gonna discontinue this FF please yaar I love this one please mat karna tannu..😭. Next chapter ka wait karungi main..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗

Originally posted by: shanaya_shanu

awesome update dear👏👏
ahh... swayam is so caring to her angel...😳😳
loving this seriously😊😉 and the kiss...😳
update next soon😉

Originally posted by: kriti094

I m reading this ff for d first tym
but i m glad u sent me a pm
this is anamazing ff
just read all d 12 chs
n i must say u write too well
i read a very few ffs on swaron but i simply loved dis one
i liked d way story progressed n d way swaron became good frnds n how finally sharon confessed in her different style
i m really lokking fwd to d big event n how sid will teact aftr knowing abt swaron
so plz updt soon n do pm me

Originally posted by: -Suni-

lovely one dear..thnx for d PM

Originally posted by: swaron1107

Really nice update. Loved the way you depicted original Sharon Rai Prakash, one we all love.

Also liked the cute Swaron relationship, Swayam solving Sharon's problem. Would love to see alot more of punishments in the story.

I just wanted to say Please do not discontinue this. I love reading your work and this FF is also very beautiful.

Originally posted by: sonii

Just read all the chapters!

It's amazing! Great concept! And so far it's been handled really well!!!

Loved every out burst and laughter shared between SwaRon! They really have come a long way! :)

Very interesting ..Wondering how Sid will react to this!

Do continue soon! This is brilliant work! :)

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

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unres

please..please dont discontinue the FF!!_/\_

coming to the update..awesome!

the punishment...😳..'red as a rose is she' this line wud have perfectly fitted sharon..

and swayam's confusion on looking at the layouts..😆 reminded me of my reaction when we started genetics in school..😆

swayam lost in sharon when she was explaining and 'khoobsurat' 😳

loved the way you described Siren sharon..😆you got a good sense of humour tanvish..

and the shuddh hindi dialogue..😆

the St.louis team is back in action! loved it when swayam gave the solution to sharon's problem..

great update..

eager for the next one..

thanks for the PM😃

cheers

nishi