Arnav Singh Raizada's musings... Link to Thread #2 on Pg1

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

This is damn good...girl,u CAN write...I am deeply falling for ASR's musings...its awesome...now I have to read Nidhi's work soon...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Geeta,

What a perfect story for ASR to pick...Nidhi and both her FL and now THT are so well written, and you have written this so well...am glad he read it too!

The story and your writing brought out the character really well...thanks for the pm!

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Thank you Gita for dedicating one of your musings to me. I truly appreciate you being one of my readers and have always enjoyed your feedback.

I'm glad I've been able to make lunch time more enjoyable for you. Thanks for always sticking by my work.

I appreciate the effort that went into writing this excerpt, you are a very good writer and should think about starting a SS or FF.

Thanks for the birthday wishes!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wow, that was an amazing part...
Although i havent read any of the stories you have mentioned in this part, i just loved the way you wrote everything about all that goes on in Arnav's head.
Seriously india forums is a real damn addiction ;)

And Payal and Akash kissing before marriage, my my i cant even begin to imagine that !!!!!
I think now i really need to read Nidhi's stories :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Came across this by chance, Gita. Brilliant work. I really widh you would write a full length story. If its anything like this it will be brilliant.

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Haha . .thanks fr da pm. .

Read part 2 n 3.

Khushi was blushng n Arnav's like she got allergy due to gol gappes. . . Lolz 😆

Arnav was listning to Payash's convo. . .
Nice one . . .

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happy_cupcake

@happy_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

This was so damn awesome

Loved ur narrative style

Totally lovin this ASR's Musings

Arnav's reactions were hilarious

Waiting for the next part

Tanx for the PM dear :)

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gifttag

@gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

First of all thank you for making me laugh hysterically..I was literally on the floor laughing reading the things Payal was saying to Akash and his non responses and top it all the musings of ASR listening to the conversation. Brilliant write up. Listen to me take up writing, you can start with SS and then go on to FFs, I am very sure you will do a amazing job.

Coming to Nidhi's writing what can I say...she writes the best romantic scenes ever, they are more like a poetry, simply beautiful. The characterisation is amazing her Arnav is completely drool worthy, a perfection, real gentleman and a gem of a person.
Writing style is beautiful and the story lines are awesome. Please continue to write all these wonderful stuff.
You don't know me Nidhi but at one point I was I silent reader of your stories but a while back I gain confidence and came out of my shell.

Thanks for the PM.