ARSHI SS: Between the Lines-CHP 9-PG 133/Link 2 Th2! - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely amazing update.

The first half was cute and adorable and the second half was all intense and a treat to read.
All in all a beautiful chapter by you:)

Coming to the initial part of the update, Khushi is cute, she was stammering looking at half naked body of Arnav and Arnav was actually enjoying it. It was a lovely scene.

So Arnav was going to kiss her and is happy about his self control but the issue is how long is he going to control himself. Attraction between them is inevitable. He is thinking in such way just because in his entire life he was alone and he didn't want any change now. Poor guy doesn't know he can't possibly do anything to drive Khushi away from his heart and thoughts😉

And the best thing is that he knows that Khushi is attracted towards him too😳

Now the second half of the update, it was absolutely amazing. Arnav's kid brother Akaash is mre successful than him, as per his father. But the truth is that Akash holds this position just because of his FIL. I have always abhorred this type of competition and comparison between two siblings by parents. Poor Arnav. Moreover his dad wants to get him married to Lavanya because of the money?!
I hope Arnav gets all the happiness he truly deserves:)


Continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Khushi's awkward rambling about naked/half naked men😊 I wonder what she will actually do or how she will react when Arnav will kiss her (as he plans to do)!

Arnav has such a complicated relationship with his parents. It's a shame that he has to hide his true reality from even his family.

Really liked the part where Khushi was so ecstatic over Arnav's reasons for not choosing the other homes he visited that she made him coffee herself was a really sweet gesture.

Can't wait to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
0oo s0 Akhash runs an empire?? And Khushi has seen half-naked men but n0t naked men??? R0FL!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated my comment on page 99:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow love you for updating this before time...loved the update...especially khushi's verbal diarrhea..."Embarrassed? Me? Pfftt..its not like i have not seen naked bodies before...I mean, naked men...ha..half naked men...I have never seen those...fully naked ones that is"...lol it was damm funny...desperately waiting for next update...kya karain subar nahin hota:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...lavanya here as well...please don't say sheetal also lurking somewhere...oh i hate them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow both are affected by each others presence... What n encounter ... I wish it was me instead of khushi :P ...
Oh Arnav's relationship with the family does not seem to be on good terms ... Hmm :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Each of them are affected by each others presence, a semi naked Arnav gets Khushi flustered, but so sweet that she thought of making him coffee... Arnav's parents are oh so complex, I genuinely hope he returns only after marrying Khushi, take that Dad..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving every bit of the story...its such a beautiful story with a different feel to it...the way arnav found flaws in other houses was hilarious...poor vk...he was taking trouble for no reason...lol...
then khushi's reaction on seeing arnav in a towel was too good..hahaaha..i dont blame her for behaving like that...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is attracted to Khushi as she is to him
but i wonder what is to happen to make him take the plunge
as of now he is quite against getting into any relationship, especially with Khushi

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