ARSHI SS: Between the Lines-CHP 9-PG 133/Link 2 Th2! - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the pace of the story ๐Ÿ‘ Awesome update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

So Khushi has started feeling acidity already? ๐Ÿ˜† They both seem.to be equally attracted towards eachother ๐Ÿ˜‰

Naughty Nannavv ๐Ÿ˜‰ ASR's mind seems to have permanently shifted into gutter ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† the tiniest of ther actions seem to lure him into the gutter-mimd wali territory ๐Ÿ˜‰

Dang! He was so close to kissing her! Just a teensy weensy step more and voila! Kaant hojana tha ๐Ÿ˜† But I'm glad they did not warna jitni thorii buhat bhi frienship hai woh bhi naa rehti

The female protagonist is based on her? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Just wondering how will she react if she gets a whiff about it ๐Ÿ˜† Faint hi hojayegi ๐Ÿ˜›

Looking forward to their journey ๐Ÿค—

Take care and update soOn ๐Ÿ˜Š

Anddd annddd I updated my comment on pg 65 ๐Ÿ˜ณ I know very late and I'm extremely sorry
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome I read all 6 chap in one go
writer arnav n handy lady khushi quite new but amazing combination
he is attracted to her wow khushi to no less then him
she was really disappointed he was leaving love story ended before it start but to her or say their attraction didn't let him rake that step n what was he about to do kiss her I think so he lose himself for a moment then left from there abruptly just saved himself from embracement but not far from the day they r going to do kiss n much more the attraction is mutual so the next step is obvious
loved the story very beautifully done looking forward for more
good job dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah arnav stayed back...both were deeply attract by each other...lets see wen they will release this...loved the chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
aww he is staying der...
waiting for nxt one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like where you are going with this story. Love the setting and the characters. We need mystery right, so the mystery author it is. She becomes his muse and get his mojo going again with his new story. How can he leave now? I love how they are both falling oh so slowly into each other. This Kushi is a keeper, she knows how to do things, fix things and speak her mind. Arnav may be too reserved again but you do need time to open up to new people. These lips were tempting him weren't they? Are you gonna throw in a drenched Kushi in the rain as I think our Author will not be able to resist that somehow?
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops. banana. ๐Ÿ˜†
n why dint he kiss her. he should have. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but he IS staying. hurrayyy.
n she is gonna be his inspiration for his story. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
n she wear an anklet. aise kaise. she wore shorts ri8. so wont it look weird.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raila1014

I really like where you are going with this story. Love the setting and the characters. We need mystery right, so the mystery author it is. She becomes his muse and get his mojo going again with his new story. How can he leave now? I love how they are both falling oh so slowly into each other. This Kushi is a keeper, she knows how to do things, fix things and speak her mind. Arnav may be too reserved again but you do need time to open up to new people. These lips were tempting him weren't they? Are you gonna throw in a drenched Kushi in the rain as I think our Author will not be able to resist that somehow?


Lol...did u get my manuscript btw??? Cause the rain scene is exactly what m planning soon...after all what is an arnav-Khushi romance without a rain scene! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

oops. banana. ๐Ÿ˜†
n why dint he kiss her. he should have. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but he IS staying. hurrayyy.
n she is gonna be his inspiration for his story. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
n she wear an anklet. aise kaise. she wore shorts ri8. so wont it look weird.


Haha...good question! But the anklet she wears is a single strand of silver...and on her left foot only...so it kinda goes with her bare legs n all! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

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Awesome update.
So finally he decided to stay.I am so happy๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Khushi was kinda pissed off when he said that he was going to search for a new house, does that mean not only Arnav is attracted to her she also likes him?๐Ÿ˜‰

Loving both of them

I am happy that finally his story which he is writing is back on track, thanks to Khushi.

Wow the last part was awesome, was he going to kiss her? Kar deta toh kya ho jata ๐Ÿ˜”
Waiting for the next part eagerly๐Ÿ˜ณ


Hmmm...Jaldi hi kar dega ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...
Khushi will be the heroine of arnav's new story...๐Ÿ˜‰

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