Taarey OS-Ishaqzaade #4

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So finally am here with Ishaqzaade#4...

Thank you so so much guy's for demanding for this OS or else i had totally left writing stories...wrote this after month's so don't expect muxh from this...It isn't hot in any sense so i don't know why i kept this namešŸ˜†

So please do forgive me this time...Next time for sure i will try to be better😳

Dedicating this OS to all the one's who demanded me the OS even after so many month's of ishaqzaade#3 and that includes megha,Shivangi,annie,ritzy and everyone else who wanted part 4...!!! love you all...!!!!!





Ishaqzaade #4

He was in the terrace of the college'..the very same place where they had their first date.He was sitting at the exact place where they were sitting that day with there hand's entangled,having their romantic time and getting to know each other better.The place where she told him that he was her first boyfriend and not Shivam.That moment when he had learnt the truth had been so special for him,a time which he could never forget.Infact any second spent with her could never be forgotten.

The only difference today was that she was not there with him.She was not there to hold his hand when he needed her the most,she was not there to listen to his inner turmoil,she was not there with him to support him when he was going for any dance competition or any other assignment the D3 gang got. Taani had simply stayed away from him since months,avoided him in every way possible.

Rey had wanted to tell her the real reason behind his breakup but''ha there was always's a big but!!!!!!!Why always's with him?????? Couldn't he just stay happy?He wanted Taani back in his life,but alas she was in the mission of "Stay away from Rey."And thing's had worsened with Rahul's entry in college'Taani's supposedly best friend'Best friend my foot..!!! "Couldn't Taani just see how Rahul would be passing lovey dovey look's at her'"Rey thought to himself with disgust.He didn't like Rahul,he hated him.No,No,No,he was not jealous of Rahul,but he simply hated him.Rey tried keeping Rahul away from Taani by awakening the possessive bhai in Swayam up,but Swayam would always's chuck it up saying that they are "BEST FRIEND'S." which ended up with Rey mumbling in frustration "Kamine Swayam ko mere saamne hi apna possessive bhai ka avatar dikhaana hai..!!!!"

Rey ruffled his hair in frustration as all these thought's passed through his mind.

"Doesn't she miss me?Even today?"Rey questioned himself with a shattered heart.,It was 1 year today.Not 1 year from their confession,but a full 1 year from the day he had realized his love for Taani.1 year'..that was the day when he had for the first time opened his heart out in front of Taani in the rehersal hall,the day where for the first time he had realized that Taani belonged to only him,the day where for the first time when he was close to Taani,the first time when she had allowed him to be close to him,the first time where he told her what she meant to him.The day where he thought about Swayam not as his best friend,but as her brother.

Taani had not come to college that day.He knew the reason behind it.She was avoiding him even this day,which mean's she remember's the day too.But did she hate him so much that she didn't even wan't to see his face today???He was shattered,crying.He didn't know how to live without her.All he wanted in his life was her.He didn't know how but he wanted her back in his life.He was ready to leave anything and everything just if she would be his again .Couldn't she just see what a lifeless soul he had turned into without her???

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Taani entered the college with a smile lingering on her face as some memory flashed through her mind.She had not attended college in the morning to avoid him.This day was special to her and she didn't want him to catch her red handed,she didn't want him to realize that she still loved him as much as she used to do before.She preferred staying with her memories which she never wanted to loose than having a fight with him specially on this day.

She was wearing the same white top and white haram pant's as that day.She wanted to relive those moment's again.The moment's of bliss where she felt for the first time when she realized her Prince Charming too loved her."He is no longer your Prince Charming Taani" Taani reminded herself.She shook her head as if correcting herself when her eyes fell on the door of the rehersal hall..!!!!!!!!

Unknowingly her legs moved automatically toward's the RH and the smile which was plasted on her face got more big.She reached the entrance of the RH and glanced toward's the mirror.The same mirror where Rey had cornered her one year back and asked her an explanation on why did she always's misunderstand him.

Whoa wait wait'"she had never misunderstood him!!!!! It was always's he who misunderstood him." Taani said to herself continuing "If I had misunderstood him,I wouldn't let him touch me,if I had misunderstood him I wouldn't allow him to pull me to him,I wouldn't allow him to kiss me and I wouldn't allow him to'" and it was then that she realized what she was talking about and stopped mid way.A blush crept up her cheek's as the thought of Rey's kisses came in his mind. His kisses alway's had some magic which would make her forget everything around.Something which would make her melt.Infact even a touch of Rey's was enough to melt her down.She didn't know how could he have that spell on her,even now but yea he had.

She missed him.She missed him real bad.Yes the decision of their breakup was her's but does it ever come with a certificate that you will be happy with whatever decision you took.!!!!!! But what could she do???? They were not meant to be together and that's why she did it.That was the reason she was avoiding him.To ensure herself that what she did was correct.

She turned away from the rehersal hall'she didn't want to stand there anymore or else she would end up crying.She decided to head toward's the terrace to enjoy the weather alone and remember all her treasured memories with Rey.

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Rey was in his dreamland of Taani when the sound's of payal brought him back to the real world."Even Taani used to wear payal's!!!" Rey thought as a smile reached his lip's thinking about how cutely weird his Taani used to be.

He decided to leave the terrace anyway's if someone else was coming there when his eyes fell on the sight who owned the payal's in front of him. Was it the same same girl standing in front of him whom he was thinking about' ???"TAANI'HIS TAANI!!!!" And to top it all she was wearing the same dress 'the same white top and white haram pant'this meant she was there for him??? Just like he was there for her??

Taani couldn't believe her eyes.Rey was there in the terrace and the intense look he was passing her way was making her face trun all red. Why was he here???at this time????this late?????many question's were running through her mind and she didn't realize when he had walked and stood in front of her,just a few inches away.So close that she could feel his breath on her.Automatically a she lowered her head as she didn't want him to catch her blushing and took a few step's back which just made her to be blocked by the wall,and the next moment she was taken captive as he blocked her way from both sides as he held his hand's on both sides of the wall. Taani had her eyes shut.She was breathing heavily.He had not touched her but he being so close to her itself was sending shiver's down her spine.

"You remembered????" were the first word's Rey asked Taani which made her shut eyes to open and look up at him.She could see the anxiousness with which he was looking at her waiting for her answer.She wanted to hug him then and there but she couldn't.They weren't meant to be together.

"What do I remember??" Taani asked Rey with a straight face."You don't remember??" Rey asked her with his eyebrow's raised.In the process he had come more close to her making her more conscious of him.

Taani preferred not answering to him and replied instead "I got to go!!!" and tried moving away but Rey held her arm and pulled her back to the exact place she was before.

"Yes or no?" Rey asked again to which Taani replied "I don't know what you are are talking about!!!" and again pushed him to go away when he again held her hand from behind.There back's were facing with each other and he was holding on to her hand.

And worse of all it started raining that very moment."why had it to rain now itself" Taani thought.She had never dreamt of meeting up with Rey today and now to top it all he wasn't letting her go'what was she to do'??? Luckily he left her hand,but she was scared to move from where she was as she didn't know where was he.

He looked at her as the rain droplet's drenched her silently'made her wet from top to bottom and continued to drench her further.Rey had till now only seen the cute side of Taani but right now when he who was facing her,watching her getting wet all he could think was how hot could she be.She was becoming irressitable for him.Her wet hair sticking to her body and some strand's of hair stuck between the string's of her backside of the top.

He himself was drenched but all his gaze was on Taani.He took step's toward's her slighty one by one and stopped when he was just one centimeter away from her.From behind he moved his hand toward's her waist and pulled her to him and she crushed against him.

His wet hand touching her stomach made her shiver.Instantly she held on to his hand but didn't push him away too.This just went as an indication to Rey as he pulled her more close to him by her waist.

He could see Taani's eyes shut taking in deep breath's.She was getting more dangerous for him.

He gave her a slight kiss on her neck making her moan.He removed the few strand's of hair to the other side that was blocking him.Slowly he removed the strand's of hair from between the dori of her top touching her skin,sometimes unknowingly and majorly knowingly.

He bent down and kissed her back.He let out all the love he had for her in that kiss.One by one he moved up and reached her shoulder's.Taani's heart was racing a thousand mile a second.Rey again hugged her from behind as he kissed her shoulder's sucking in the water droplet's that was lingering on the shoulder playing with her.Taani moved her neck to give him better access and he obeyed her kissing her along the neck giving wet kisses over her wet skin.She gave a featherly move when he kissed her earlobe.

He turned her around.Her face was pure red,he could see that even in between the rain.The rain was playing havoc between them.Taani for a split second felt like moving back when he pulled her back with all force and she came crashing direct to his chest.

He was looking at her intensely and she could not avoid that gaze .He cupped her face and brought his face near to her's.She knew what he was about to do.She always's used to stop him,but today she didn't have the willpower to stop him.And the next moment he placed his lip's on her's.She kissed him back the next moment.She needed it that time.He pulled her even more closer to him as he deepened the kiss.Taani was lost,lost again in her prince charming.She moaned in pleasure and slowly her hand's moved onto his chest pulling his shirt to her.

They stopped when they were out of breath.Rey looked at Taani,but she had turned the other side.Rey pulled her back and again kissed her.Kissed her passionately,intensely with all the love he had.

The rain stayed witness to the lover's which were getting back together.

The day itself was special for both of them.Last year the day had made Taani and Rey into Taarey and today after one year the system did not change'!!!!!

Phew finally completed'I know I know it was not up to expectation's'wrote something after month's'. I know it's pathetic'.so ishaqzaade#5 mat maangna please

Anyway's do hi the like button if you happen to like it in any chance and give in your earnest view's

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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
first of all , ME FIRST 🄳🤪
Okay , so when i got your pm I was like "omg ishaqzaade 4 !!" and then I resvd the first place , you can't even imagine how happy i am ...
Coming to the os ,
What to say , its just perfect ..
From the concept , to the conclusion , just perfect .šŸ‘
The way you portrayed Taarey's emotion was just marvelous !
I loved it !
In the starting it was a bit emotional seeing rey carving for taani's love , but the way you described it, presented it, was just beyond perfection .
Coming to the terrece part , it was beautifully written ..
And now ..
I need ishaqzaade 5 jaldi !!
Got it
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago
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res/unres

awesome OS šŸ‘
loved it šŸ‘
ufff 😳😳 their romance in the rain 😳😳
amazing šŸ‘
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

arghh someone give me some weapon to kill sreejuwat all bad words were u using on this os.i literally thought u were serious😔...huh kamini...hamesha joott boling...
haaye the os was
me tho dead

kamini sreeju i loved it.it was way too gud...finally end of long wait
and nw waiting for the next part aka 5th part.which means new wait

haila last part was so hot
but i wan't hotter than this.now go and write the 5th part...jaa jaldiii...warna
tu abhi bhi yahi hai
chal jaake likh

me waiting see

🤣
acha thanks sreeju for changing the font.gosh only i knw hw i managed to read them whole.chalo koi nai...happy that u wrote this part.waiting for the next part...




Edited by sreelu094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :D
This I can't wait to Read .

Unres
Even after a long time you penned it down beautifully Sreeja. The concept is nice and different from the rest we usually read. Loved it how you described Rey's emotions and Taani's . The ending part was hot 😳 Though I wish it was a little more continued with Talks after the moment. Nevertheless it is even perfect this way 😊
And , yes I definitely enjoyed reading this 😊

I want Ishaqzaade 5 🄱
Edited by ...Tansy... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

Haila sreeju me dreaming i guess 🤣 u kammz lazy ladki finally wrote it thanks fr writting this 😳

U knw hw much i ws disturbed while reading it 🤢 uff my parentz nyways finally jaise karke i read it afterall its ishqzaade hw cn i miss it šŸ˜†

Ok now coming to this os ...I really loved the way u described their emotions 😊
hw much they want to be with each other hw they rmbr each n every step of their relationship beautifully described sreeju 😃

Nd Then coming to the hottest part ā˜ŗļø naughty rey always...never leaves his beshrami😳
lol he kissed her as if she is his gf nyways loved the agressive rey I always luv agressive rey

Thanks fr giving rasiya part 2 i wish we get something like this in d3 too šŸ¤—

Thanks fr giving bhaav to our demand after 4 mothns of pleading 🤪

Ab ishqzaade 5 dedo


Edited by patie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love u for this šŸ¤—

unres-

Now that was one beautiful piece of writing sreeju.Platonic and beautifully romantic indeed.I just loved the way you described their feelings in such a wonderful way.Their pain their emotions their feelings their love their craving for each other gosh everything was just so aesthetically written.Loved it to the core.It was indeed a treat for all of us.And btw coz we'll defo want u to write many more ishqzaades to come but u can take ur time.But remember not much time haan or else everyone will kill you šŸ˜†
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res
ab mai bhi aapko staungišŸ˜ˆšŸ˜›
aapne bhi to itna stayeya hai😭
unres
vaise unres krna nahi chahti thi but kya kre itna accha os read krne ke baad rha hi nahi gya😳
first of all
was so happy after seeing ur pm🄳
was feeling like jumping
and after reading it
me blushingā˜ŗļø
ye kya kr diya aapne di😳
agar kisi ne puch liya ki mai kyu blush kr rahi hu to kya reason dungi😔😭
RAHUL😔
humare romeo ko jealous😲 ooops not jealous!!!!!!!šŸ˜†
he simply just hated him!!!
its not jealousy 🤣
and this line
Rey tried keeping Rahul away from Taani by awakening the possessive bhai in Swayam up,but Swayam would always's chuck it up saying that they are "BEST FRIEND'S." which ended up with Rey mumbling in frustration "Kamine Swayam ko mere saamne hi apna possessive bhai ka avatar dikhaana hai..!!!!"


OMG!!!!!!!🤣
humara bechara rey!!!!!🤣
and then next
when rey quetioned himself that
does taani miss him? this is the same day when he first time was so close to her... does she remember this day??

it made me so emotional
my eyes were little wet😭😭


and then taani's entry
with same clothes which she wore last year
dam it was so heart-touching!!!!!!
and she remembering there all moments was so well expressed dišŸ‘

and on terrace
rey asked that
did she remember this day ??and she is denying the fact🄺


was so goodšŸ‘
and after that kya huya
us pr jo bhi comment kru
kam hai😊
it was hot like hellā˜ŗļø
i knw understament hai but
pls isi se kam chla lo na
aap mere pyari di hai na😳

Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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koi unreserve karega ya nahi😵..😔
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Haha you finally gave into the pressure and wrote another one!! Loved it :)

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