#2 thread of Arshi FF:- My slave,My family - Page 21

Thank u so so much musa for such a long update👍🏼
khushi is imroving slowly that's nice
I m waiting for that day when she recover fully
Arnav teaches good lesson to sheetal she deserve much more punishment for destroying such an innocent soul.
Wanted to know what doctor advice him to do know
Hope her all fear get disappear soon
Fab and superb update loved it so much🤗

Awesome...

Lord...!! what should i say m feeling sad for being unable to describe my overhelming reaction after reading ur ff..
although m very boldie to appericiate those things i like.. 😆
but this ff is hell wonderful..m bowing my to u..
Dark yet so well bounded concept with hell kind of twists..
pure from a innocent soul of khushi n a truly dark character of arnav who buys her for lust his own need butvas ur story progressed he ended up falling for her badly..while khushi's feeling for him is nothing less in her own innocent way..
you have no idea how beautifully u write their story wid the humour of ur presentIon of ur updates..i liked it. 😆 once when it seems all beautiful u wid very smartly begin the dark to cover everything.. what he did wid her in his rage was hell merciless n animalistic ..n shook the hell out of me..
u write so good arnav's agony n his redemption after knowing the truth.. n khushi's pain superbly described..after every update i fell in love wid this ff n ur writing..
still i feel my comment will never be uble to convey my heartly regard to work..m obsessed..i was going to log out when suddenly i started to read this..n trust i did'nt stop until i finished whole 22 chapters of this amazing work.



[B]plzzz pm me dear ..i'll wait for the update..u did a great job n doing..Happy ramzaan..take care 😊

Finally Sheetal is out from their lives...

Arnav is trying to get back the trust that Khushi had on him...but its going to take a lot of time...

Loved how he ate her left over khichdi...

Continue Soon...😊

Two three days back i came across ur story while browsing FAN FICTION FORUM; i started reading , when i stopped it was 5.00am N 21 chapters in one go. U have written it so beautifully . The anguish, The helpness of Khushi, u described it so well in ur writing anybody can feel 4 her. it gives me goosebumps 2 think anybody in Khushi's place . It makes me think of the mental & physical condition of those victims who R going through this torture in real world N MIND U... it happens. I M NOT GOOD WITH WORDS SO I CAN'T EXPRESS MYSELF PROPERLY but i tried 2 convey my feeling. NOW i m waiting 4 changed Arnav , THE LOVER. PLS PM me when u update. PARDON MY ENGLISH.

Loved it. My heart goes for khushi's condition,

nice update...hope khushi get well soon...

Awsommm story...i'm newbie & i read da whole story in 1 go till da lst n i cried laugh did curse arnav 4 his cruality...man i m just simply fan of dis story...innocnt khushi & cruel arnav der journy till now finly he accptd he luvz hr though aftr such a disastr...but den datz arnav jab tak he won't do ny blnddr he doesn't c som senses...ovrall itz a fab story & 4 da lstest chp well arnav is repnding he cried well he sud he desrvz it aftr putting da innocnt soul through such hell...sheetal finly got wht she desrvd...hell i wntd arnav 2 give gud slaps but den got sheetal trapd lyk dat wasn't bad eithr hez taking khushi home n finly he'll shw his luv...i knw many wnt khushi 2 giv arnav tough tym n make him repnt but den if khushi bcm cruel lyk him den khushi won't b khushi & arnav won't b arnav n her suffring 4m dis stage 2 bcming lyk old khushi wud b hell tym 4 arnav he won't need nyodr punishmnt & it says somtym 4givns hurts more den punishmnt so if she 4givz him he'll b able 2 himslf...nxt chp soon :)

Very nice and emotional update! Arnav's determination to bring back Khushi is the best part.
Sheetal got what she deserved 👏
Pls update soon thanks for the PM.