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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome os ...

luved it ...

u have used heavy words ...

i have to again and again consult google to understand the meaning of those words ...

overall

th os was just fabulous ... :)

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Oh Ehm Gee...PJ...

are u kidding me...

i mean this was f*ckingly ahmazing...

i so love you for this...

or i love this OS more...😆

from the beginning there was some kind of passion and desire between them...

KR are spy agents...ahh correction sexy spy agents...

and then their convo...

then their bet and kriya losing it...

and ofcourse than that red Saree...*u know i thought k that was a two piece for her...excuse me for my tharki mind..🤣*

and finally their romance...with a Rose...

you wrote it so beautifully...

i can't tell you how much i loved it...

ho ske to ese OS's aur likha kar...😉

Hugs and kisses from my side...

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Superb...

Totally loved it...

I was actually confused in the start but then when she came in the Sarsi thought they were in love n were just gng to confess...

But unsurprised me in the end...

Loved it!!!:):)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Not at all confusing, rather very wonderful and it got even more amazing as the surprises kept coming in.

Beautifully written! :)

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

WOW

IT was indeed a beautiful os

Just in an os

Never let personal life be affected by ones work

By the time i reached the end

Every word made me blush

Trust me it was intoxicating

Most of all

The anniversary came as an element of surprise

You portrayed a very beautiful relationship- competing at every step yet passionate

And I love Detectives so i found it even more exiting

I must compliment your choice of words aggressive yet subtle.

All in all - I just fell in love at first sight

Hope you can write more such os👏

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Very sorry Di , couldn't comment earlier 😳...

Wow!!! Was all I could say about this 😃...

Inna Hot and Happening tha g ...

Ek dum mast istyle 😎...

This was one of the most 'Unique' way of celebrating an Anniversary 😉...

Starting was cool types...

The way Rey was teasing and irritating Kria , i had no clue that they were married...

Race scene was Amazing ...

Pool scene was Hot g ☺️...

Didn't knew Spys can be this romantic 😆...

Being a spy and celebrating their Anniversary in 'This' style , niceee 😉...

It was Fabulous ,'great choice of words 😃...

Loved it ❤️...

Do write stuff like these 😛😳...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awssummm...!!!! Supr dupr grtt ... Nd concept is damn grtt... I thought they may be couple bt didnt expect husband wife... Too gud yaar... LOved it yaar... Nd plZzz update sacred lov too...

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

nd kinjal thanxx 4 dis osssommm os link...:-) pallavi toh bhul gyi pm krna...:-( bt bt finally i got this nd asusual it's awsum...:-)

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha
nd kinjal thanxx 4 dis osssommm os link...:-) pallavi toh bhul gyi pm krna...:-( bt bt finally i got this nd asusual it's awsum...:-)

ur welcome shalini

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

WoW

DAT WAS SUPERB

AWESOME

AMAZING

FAB

SPLENDID

MARVELOUS

FLAWLESS

the way dey were revealed to be HUBBY-WIFEY was amazing n were SPY agents
dere race n all was super funn :)

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