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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's reaction was of a mature person and very graceful.
Liked the fact that she didn't tell the reason for doing internship than writing. People always try to find something off/sad about someone to discuss and gossip, good that she didn't gave such person any of the feed for gossip.
Renewable energy discussion was good. It brought our various perspectives through people present there - where some are happy and some are unhappy about the current situation, government and for some future is bleak.
My personal opinion is mixed. I've seen rural areas where there is sufficient light and then there are some where provision is but electricity is not provided, where it'll come for limited hours.
So I am of the opinion that it varies from state to state and government to government. e.g development in rural areas around Noida happened the most around Mayawati's village. So every leader tries to secure their vote bank by doing for their own area and for the rest of them it never truly matters much. There must be few in the government who wants t do good work but with the whole system so messed up & long government process it becomes difficult.

Payal & Akash - they are funny. I thought Akash won't be able to confess his feelings but boy he did and in quite a good way - straight forward without beating around the bush.
Fan of RabbaVey seriously!!!!!!
Why the name of EBP?????😡
I remember the day its promo came out, my sis said that she has a good news for me smiling wickedly much like Payal here. "that your fav. show is coming again with a new season & cast"🤢
As if I care for those morons who are cashing on our beloved show's name. Out of titles may be!!

Oh boy JP with ninth kid!!!!!! Koi to usko roko...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

Alright Twigs!


So I read the chapter and now I have so many thoughts. I will proceed in the order in which they impacted me.

1. Akash and Payal had quite a moment there. Fun filled and very young couplish. A little like that side love story that we love to read but really you are waiting for the real thing :D. Not that anything in this story is less than real. Even the Payal / Akash moment is as real as conversations between couples who are on the precipice of a change in their relationship - the confession was a proof of that.

2. The Shekhar - Khushi confrontation. I am fortunately one of those people who never inspire enough confidence in anyone to openly be envious :P, but this is part of the corporate world and I don't know if this is even part of the main story - but people like Shekhar use such tricks all the time to undermine you, and when you don't budge, use the information to ensure that it is twisted to their advantage when it comes to opportunities and recognition. I hope Khushi is smart enough to know when things are changing around her.

3. The renewable energies target had me reading with such concentration - one I usually reserve for special occasions and rare newspaper reading bouts :P The argument about the government doing something or not reminded me of the Swades debate and honestly I think it is not all dark but there are veryfew people who want to do anything other than make money for themselves. And sadly enough, I am even OK with people making money as long as there is some good out of it. At one time, I used to think that the government has too many issues and there are more important things that take precedence than energy - food, safety, health, education, but I am wiser - these are just excuses given by weak governments and weaker politicians!

4. I am very interested in the origins of Arnav and Khushi's relationship - not because I am a romance / SKD fan - that is just one part. I sort of want to know that Khushi isn't with Arnav because she believes he is a project that her contribution will make a difference to, if you know what I mean. If you follow House, sort of what House tells Cameron - about her wanting to fix damaged goods being the key reason for her interest in him. Again, I know that reading in parts gives you the disadvantage of asking questions that may be judging too soon. If that is case, please ignore. Actually, it's just a musing, I don't actually expect an answer - it's just what I want to see in some form in the story. Again, if that is not what you planned, I will respect that too...don't hate me :D

Ah this is the most time I've spent on an FF since Parinay ended. Most times I feel more than think...Welcome change. I love it


You mention my story and Parinay in one line.. main dhanya ho gayi 😊

I would like to think each character in this story, much like all of us, has a lot to learn in life. There is always something to learn, something new. And I hope by the end of this story, they would have moved a few steps ahead.

About the governance and "priorities", they could also say eradication poverty takes precedence over say controlling AIDS or preserving forests and biodiversity or curbing the rate of crime against women. Excuses, all of them. Everything has its importance; aren't we facing this whole issue of energy security today because it was ignored in the past? We cannot afford to repeat that mistake. You only need the will to do so. A single IAS officer managed to eradicate every trace of plague from Surat within his term, something the Govt. could not achieve in decades.

About the Arnav-Khushi background.. hmm. I'll keep that in mind, let me see what I can do.

Thanks for your feedback Meera!
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Posted: 12 years ago
the way khushi handled shekhar question was bang on..
their discussion was quite serious..loved aakash and payal conversation..he is a adorable guy...he confessed his love for her..
brilliant update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
But not much of arshi :(
i loved the latter part...
Akash is seriously behaving like khushi in our ipkknd... Devimaiyya,jalebi,rabbavey and what not...
Thnx fr pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
stalked & found it awesome.😊...hope Arshi's bonding won't get affected by others...I liked that Khushi is the best..& I know that Arnav is always best..😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res !!

Sorry Twigs for commenting after such a delay ! But here it goes...
This first half was the eternal tug of war between what the heart desires and the what the mind makes you do.
People like Shekhar are always sitting in the front row not wanting to leave even one opportunity to bog you down...it merely reflects on his own insecurities ,,,, but i am so glad that Khushi did not rise to the bait.
The topic of conflict very wisely chosen ...i will not say much into the matter since i do not know my facts about the same but i will say that even if Khushi was being naive it does not take away from the truth that she actually is making an effort however small it might be in lieu of the bigger picture but its a start and some one has to do it.

Payal and Akash as a couple are adorable ...and i am completely warming up to Payal !
The confession was cutely written ...no high funda declaration of love it filled with authority and want.

And yes we all hate EBP !😡

Alo i know Arnav may not be present through out the entire update/story and he is not much of a talking with chuddy buddy kinda guy but i missed him ...
Hoping to see more of him both individually and with Khushi ...😳


Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

That Shekhar guy sounds like a misogynistic, envious jerk...and probably all offices world wide have atleast one person like him. Really admired the quiet confidence and poise with which Khushi gave befitting replies to those preposterous queries. The energy issue in India...have made a mental note to google it soon. Sounds like an interesting debate and one with potentially far reaching implications.


Ha..ha ..so like a true fan, Aakash is rattled by EBV, the ugly syhthetic cousin of IPKKND.


Aakash dreaming of rabba veing with Payal...and Payal's reaction..


No what did you say? Something about rubbing?
she said blinking her eyelids furiously.

That made me LOL..😆

Wonderful update Twiggy...Loved it...:)
Edited by IPK007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007

That Shekhar guy sounds like a misogynistic, envious jerk...and probably all offices world wide have atleast one person like him. Really admired the quiet confidence and poise with which Khushi gave befitting replies to those preposterous queries. The energy issue in India...have made a mental note to google it soon. Sounds like an interesting debate and one with potentially far reaching implications.


Ha..ha ..so like a true fan, Aakash is rattled by EBV, the ugly syhthetic cousin of IPKKND.


Aakash dreaming of rabba veing with Payal...and Payal's reaction..


No what did you say? Something about rubbing?
she said blinking her eyelids furiously.

That made me LOL..😆

Wonderful update Twiggy...Loved it...:)



IF is acting crazy...I am not able to change fonts and didn't mean to type it in bold either..:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
First, ramanchi! you wrote you are nervous and all that...And I was expecting some major rabba veying...coz isnt that FF writers normally become nervous about :) And I was reading and reading but you never got to the nervous part 😆

Ok, I must tell you that this update felt like a college assignment until the Payash part happened! Throughout their discussion about renewable energy, I found myself researching for information and ended up knowing a lot more than I knew when I started reading this chapter...got to give it to you twiggy! A thought provoking update indeed! But like AquaSandhya says, even I dont agree that the government is doing everything that can be done..We can start a debate on this topic here and I am sure many would be of the same opinion. And yes, as individuals even we arent doing much and I love Khushi's attitude about the whole thing!

The best part of the update was how Khushi didnt give up her parents while discussing her career choices with her friends!

Ha Ha...whattey way to vent out your frustrations about EBP! very creative indeed!


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Posted: 12 years ago
i am so sorry*kaan pakad ke*, i am very late, like really late! so sorry again!

it was a mixed feeling update for me! first i figure out that arnav is very supportive to khushi! then khushi is really fighting with her two minds! and then i think that nobody should barge in to somebody else's life and ask something which he clearly knows other one didnt like bas! i like khushi's spirit of fighting for what she is doing now! she is giving her 100% i think!

i so love akaash! he is so cute and adorable! they really did icicng to your update! and finally finally akaash said it, yes, PAYAL IS HIS GIRLFRIEND with all rights ya?

wonderful twig!👍🏼

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