#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Main aa gayi, Twiggy.

I can't express how touched I am. I burst into tears when I read it.

I'm so happy to have you back to updating regularly.

I read Sandy's comment and I too get a feeling that Arnav and Khushi have more of an easygoing relationship like old married couples. But that is quite normal in their case here. They have known each other like forever and must be totally at ease with each other. That crazy passion lasts only in the early years of a relationship. Here, it might not be the case.

I loved our description of Khushi's colleague's house.

It reminded me of the times we too used to line our bookshelves with newspapers before placing the books there. The description was so vivid. The shoes lined up outside as nobody is allowed to wear shoes inside a Brahmin household. Love this about your writing.

And Vignesh is not the other guy here. I was so hppy to see him behaving so normally with Arnav and Khushi.

How I love south Indiand filter coffee. Its my favourite coffee. When do we get the dosas now? Waiting.

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

First of all...I'm really, really sorry for this shockingly late unres... AD has been crazy busy these last few days..

Coming to the update, I really love the mature, easygoing relationship that Arnav and Khushi share. Seems like they have been together for a while now. Would really love to know how they met etc..and how their relationship progressed.I love your Arnav. He is just so real...the kind of guy you can very well imagine sitting in your living room and working his charm on everyone around him...be it kids or grown ups!

I like Khushi too and I don't think that she loves him any less. Loving someone does not mean having to shelve your individuality and your dreams. The whole trick lies in achieving a balance and setting your priorities right and in my opinion, there hasn't been anything in Khushi's demeanor to suggest that she puts her dreams before Arnav. Let's see how you take this forward.

Loved it as usual and looking forward to the next..:)

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Wow an update😃

Res for last chappy.

Edited!

So payal here is kind of a hitler one whom akash is afraid of? I am loving their peek-a-boo relationship.
I am glad arnav is always able to make her feel better by his mere gestures.
Sorry for short comments

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

This Res for the this update.

Edited!

Wow! This was just perfect. I am loving the relationship they share. One is always present there for another to soothe him/her whenever needed.
Its good to see that he mingled up with all so soon! Looking forward for more of get together :)

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Res

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Payal applying kajal, singing intezaar songs is a huge for her.The image of Payal and Aakash that forms in my head is that of a couple who in their teens dated books and exams. Considering that they have probably never broken a rule in their lives, their love for midnight trysts is totally believable.

Now Aakash has gotten himself in a fix and no matter how much he might attempt at changing the topic Payal is not one to miss. Really eager to see him spontaneous.

Khushi is maintaining a smile on her face despite the fact that she doesn't enjoy her job. The fact that she doesn't keep complaining regarding it is inspiring, but curious to know how long this can go on.

I have coffee once in a while at night and it doesn't affect my sleep either. Twiggy I was smiling ear to ear during the Arnav Khushi part of the update. First Agnes and her unicorn, then dosas and later the most important of them all Filter coffee; Superr twiggs. I completely agree with Vignesh, coffee made by vending machines and in cafs are not good. Now big hugs for this update🤗 ...

Saiyu I love you and Twiggs equally and this will not change even if filter coffee enters the equation. In your words 'Bas!'

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

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Prayers for your freind!

Now that was a very enjoyable read !

I love the contrasts you show between Arnav and Khushi as a couple ..when one is down and out the other takes charge of the situation.

The faith they have in each other is extremely satisfying to read in this story cause we mostly get to read the typical Arnav and Khushi who will first fight , rile up each other till a happily ever after in the end and here we get to see a couple in love and how this equation blends into their daily lives.

The bits about Vignesh and his amma were very well written ..it reminded me of the fun times i had when my friends came over at my moms place!

I hope Arnav finds a way to reach out to Aman.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Ah! Finally! Res. (May be slightly delayed in getting this edited. Hope it isn't a problem :D)

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Kostin: Can Arnav not take up the case? Or is that where this is going (yay!) I'm so saddened by a fictional Aman and his sister's situation, Twigs…because I know there are these real people out there. I have seen them – people / women with degrees and jobs face situations that they would ever dream of being in.

I love this couple. They are so perfectly for each other…a couple in every sense…standing up for the other when s/he is down and then making an effort to ensure that s/he is OK. I am now ready to take on Anjali – these two are good for each other. Wish she would see this side of Khushi.

Saw your reply to Sandhya on the physicality of their relationship – all I will say is..don't worry about how the words sound. Let the audience decide and I personally promise to give you honest feedback (like I am some big master of intimacy writing :P) whenever you do write.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Awesome update ..

Good luck to ur friend

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

This was awesome! And after such a long time! Phew! 😃
and i think i already told u hat i love the arnav in your story! He is charming, caring, generous, and a gentleman!
And khushi makes me proud!

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

Ps- your friend will get well soon! 😊