#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016

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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

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'Come over for breakfast tomorrow and you can talk to Papa then! Just be...spontaneous? 🤣

I never loved Payal-Akash section in this story like I loved it this time. Akash is SOOO damn cute. God! I had this huge grin on face while reading it and totally cracked up in the end. They like 'meeting' yeah...they like to meet. 🤣

Eat flax seeds! Have oats! I swear I feel like a horse when I have that stuff.

DITTO 😔😳

Coming to the update, it was fab as usual. I am hoping that this Vignesh guy does not spell trouble in their crossword infused haven. Just saying, coz this is the second time you have mentioned him and now this coffee-dosa party. Hame daal kaali lag rahi hai...kya karen ;)

Well, you did manage to make me believe as well that Khushi is finding the work if not interesting atleast fulfilling and she is KINDDA happy now. But no. Poor soul is trying to live upto her name. I want to read more about that!

And Arnav, last but not the least. love him. Like he loves his black coffee. Nothing is better in comparison, specially how you have written it. His easy going relationship with Payal came to fore in this update, which even I liked. And his concern and understanding of all feeling concerning Khushi is just beautiful :)

Waise for me, this was predominantly a Payal redemption update. Much needed for me atleast after Payal insulted my golden-hearted lawyer!

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Good to see you back!

Nice update, Twiggy.

I liked the Payal-Akash part, and now Akash is stuck between a rock and hard place, isn't he?

Both are hesitant about naming their relationship, can't wait to see how this talk goes.

Chocolate-walnut sandwich sounds like heaven!

Arnav and Khushi-that was the picture-perfect image of a couple who is comfortable with each other and shares everything with minimum drama. I like how Arnav picked up on the fact that Khushi seems to be passionate about her work, and I loved Khushi's reply as well.

However, I still feel that there will be a point where this facade (?) will crack, and she will just say 'Bas!'.

Can't wait to find out if my prediction comes true!

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

hi, read 5/6/7 together, really enjoyed. beautiful writing and a quiet energy in the words. lovely. i'm slightly smitten with arnav in any and all forms. so his "contagious" smile, that smile against her kiss before kissing her back, just that little bit of discomfort with vignesh, and his clear instincts about khushi make me puddle.

khushi's quandary is classic and believable. this struggle within ourselves set off by our love for those who matter, in so many places this kicks in, and all those compromises we settle for... very nice.

anjali is sure khushi is good but not enough for her a tender loving bro is touching.

thanks for pm. looking forward to 8.

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Hey twiggy:)
Till yesterday, I had always known you through Saiyu and your comments. I had never known you could write so well.

Whenever I read meera's or Basanti's works I feel at peace and they are a source of solace. Not clichd but tug at your heart's every emotion, they have bumps and cracks but their khushis are strong , commendable women . Now I really have doubts if you three aren't sisters. I know I shouldn't make comparisons but that's what you all do to me.

Its a pleasant change to read about the already fallen in love happy couple arhi instead of the build up to their relationship. And I love the crossword and literary feel to this story.

Bas sex ki kami hai :p

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

I loved it!! Now Akash and Payal hesitate to put a name to their relationship.. I think Payal is not so comfortable to do any 'girly' things... And the free and honest relation of Arnav and Khushi! I hope Khushi doesn't crack down while living up to her name.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Everytime u give such a update

Beautiful, the simplicity which spells everything in this update

love arnav khushi relationship, they aren't love birds, they are partner, life partners, with whom they shared everything, who understand each other inner turmoil

Akash-payal...this story payal akashi are something

love payal and her comments on akash

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aura9

@aura9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

its quite strange that the younger sister is allowed to nightstay with Arnav while Payal is hiding her relationship with Akash. Arnav going from Shashi uncle to Shashi not bad. Vighnesh well he has been mentioned so many times by Khushi.

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Love the A-k relationship... different from the other stories I have read!! True love/friendship needs no words!

No crossword clue solved?

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

have seen u commenting on many wonderful stories..

read all the parts in one go..the story is too gud so far...arnav and khushi shares a very special and strong bond..khushi is a writer...and arnav is a divorce lawyer..shashi is wrong coz at not supporting khushi..

i understand his worry but one should support his kids..amazing story so far...do pm me when u update next part..😊

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

gave insight into Payal & Akash's bedroom rendezvous 😉 ...so they have been only "meeting" each other all this while?!...ah,they have a meeting relationship!

Arnav's so freaking sweet & understanding!...ya,agree wid Anjali dat Khushi does take him for granted...wenevr they talk it's only abt her,her well-being,future,wat she wants to do,wud like be doing instead,her worries etc...

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