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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Edited my post on pg : 9

PS: You updated chapter 3 already? Why didn't i know of it?

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Kankshita i am sorry, was occupied with some work as you mentioned in the list of your obvious reasons, but i made a point to read this one, as couldn't afford to avoid your creation.
And yes even i can understand how it feels if someone doesn't pay heed to your write-ups, so sorry once again.
Now i will proceed 😆
My eyes are heavy but your portrayal of the first chapter allured me to go further with it.
I like your technique of writing, you put just one word to it and its enough for us to gauge it.
Sharon's description is i can say i have never read anywhere so its different but mysterious too with positive attitude n unpredictable reactions but anyways her character has not yet unfolded so i can chill 😳 But i like her. She has brought some positive vibes in swayam's life.

And swayam here is shaken up totally, his narration was quite amazing in the start of the story, where he came to know that he had nothing of his own and how he felt not so comfortable in crying, even when alone.
Ah, i really liked your ref. author's note in every chapter. But I loved the jane austen n JK's!
Okay so i would be regular with my comments as you deserve on this truly.
And i like the progress of your updates, keep updating once or twice in a week, as it would give us a little time to comment. Rest depends on the patentee herself 😆

And these three were,for me eye-opening-updates 😳 (Sry,Too lame😆)
Stupefying kankshita 👏
can i call you kanks? 🤔
Keep it going, the concept is truly fantastic. 👍🏼

And i m done now

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Simply amazing update..
needless to say that I just loved the way u wrote it.. 👏
the description of dawn was just too good.. it was magical believe me!! 😳
simply loved it to the core ❤️
I would be more than just happy if u update regularly 😃
thank u for the PM 😃

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

hey kankshita right??
first of all thanx for the pm...
in on word your work is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...
I literally love your sharon here... full of positivity and a whole lot mysterious... she is totally unpredictable...
and the sunrise you descibed is so beautiful... i could literally imagine the scene with sharon and swayam standing there...
and lastly my feel that sharon loves swayam is a bit stronger... from the last parting lines between them .. that is when swayam asked "why she is behaving like that he is her best friend in the world " i would say i liked her half truth answer i guess...
please do update whenever you feel so... because i cant wait to read the next update...
lots of love
aditi
and by the way you have a beautiful name

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Reserved.

I am going for admission in a college today (:

So, I'll be reading it afterwards, just making sure I don't miss this. =]

Thanks for notifying me Dear (;

I'll be up with my comment soon.

Edited by Incandescence. - 12 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

I read the Author's Note , Hell yes, We want Daily Updates =) (;

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Pankhuri295

@Pankhuri295

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Hey update this as soon as possible... And do pm me

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

amazing update👏👏

loovvee d way u writee❤️

waiting for d nxt part😳

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reflections.

@reflections.

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Great chapter. Found it quite interesting. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 😃
-Aishu

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Incandescence.
Reserved.

I am going for admission in a college today (:

So, I'll be reading it afterwards, just making sure I don't miss this. =]

Thanks for notifying me Dear (;

I'll be up with my comment soon.
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I am just wh**ed out right now, after standing in a long queue for about 2 hours.

And yes.. I finally red it whole.

Girl, you write so amazingly!

I so damn Loving Swayum in this fiction! And Sharon too. Both their characters are showed in such a blissful way.
And regarding the concept I'v already said, Imma loving this big time. =)

I just looking forward for more. (;

Superb Job Dear!

Simply Marvelous.