SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

really loved this chapter ..
loved swayan n simmi arugement..
what's next??really wanted to know so update soon ;)
thanks for the pm:)

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Amusing Chapter.
Swayam roasted chicken 😆 sharon is going nuts!
Simmi n swayam's argument was so cute. Adorable bond!
I just want to read the next part real bad. Its getting so amazing day by day mahn!
Sharon stayed cool even though she was hurt inside nd swayam so cutely came nd said it all out to sharon. Cuteness at its peak!

Amusing Update!
Waiting for the next.

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Edited on page : 26

I will edit chapter eight's comment in a day for sure.

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

LOL roasted chicken😆and gay car 🤣 gosh i love ur updates too much...

sorry i wasnt able to comment after i once commented on chapter 4 coz i never realised that u were updating everyday😵 anyways i just now read the left out updates and they r all too gud...love this ff...

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Sharif.Badmaash

@Sharif.Badmaash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Read all the chapters in one go...
Really entertaining read...
Waiting 4 the next...

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Myra.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Edited on page 24. Sorry Im late!

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Swayam and Simmi are a blast!😆
She thought he was being a roasted chicken the wrong way🤣
That was one hilarious dream!
Finally found something common between your Sharon and the show's Sharon (the one that used to be),they both hide their hurt.Yours does it under boisterous cheeriness while the latter used straight-up denial.I like yours better
I found this chapter more significant in terms of Swayam and Sharon being together than the one you mentioned though😕
If I haven't said it before,you are a fabulous writer👏

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

The updates were beautifully written.. loving the way you are building the story n describing the situations.. Im in love with dis swaron.. waitg for nxt update

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

loved the 6th chp

sharon n swayam😳

someones falling in love❤️❤️❤️

this is getting more interesting n i am loving it

thanx for d pm

update soon

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Unreserved

Chapter-8

Its awesome and enjoyable update..Loved the all conversations part of SwaRon and simmi..In begining college reunion part was beautifully described..I really liked the bond of simmi and swayam..and their fight was sweet..Sharon dreaming about swayam as a roasted chicken..!! quite amusing fact..Now i liked swayam to came there at her place and said it all..Courageous man..So i am just waiting for next part..The story is becoming more and more interesting day by day and update by update..So do update as fast as possible...

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago