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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awos m

love it 👏👏

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

yet another amazing update...

i really loved rey's guest appearance here though..

aah papa shekhawat... i never really liked him much... he's pain !

sharon aah my dearest... i loved her the most today... and swayam's out burst was the peek point of today's update...

do continue soonest and ty for the pm !

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

kanks, this update left me sad, because of swayam's past,

but its amazing the way rhea left him upon her death, yet she still reaches out to him---takes care of him through others.

your plot seems well thought out---and---its getting good.

love--medha

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

I love sharon!! She is so cool man, saviour in a true sense!
Swayam's father is depressing, poor family n rey.
I am damn curious to read sharon's point of view and more than that her state of mind.
She is epic, Na Na Na Seriously ? 😆
But i definitely love her.
Looking forward to the next one.

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

nice update...👏

waiting for sharon's POV...

thanks for daily updates...😃

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Nice chapter! I loved how you described the tension between swayam and his dad 👏

Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next update!

Edited by kamlesh32 - 12 years ago

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

just read part 4 & 5..
both were beautifully written.. 👏
loved the way u described the situations...
willing to read more..
waiting for the next part..
thanks for them PM 😃

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Entry of father at some points remainds me of father of krish from two states ..
I just loved this sharon..

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Last three chapters were an heck of an update. And I am more than happy to learn you'd be updating everyday. It cheers up my mood.

Coming to the updates, I really love the way you have written them, and the way you are so intelligently proceeding with the story-line. It's become a pleasure to read this story.

Your writing is what keeps up the audience up with the story, not that I criticize anything of any sort..

Loved it. :')