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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

prologue was like wow.good that here arnav confessed his luv soon b4 misunderstandings came in.plz pm me

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reemamariyam

@reemamariyam

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow so nice dear
u have so much improved in writing
keep going

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Ksh

@Kushkushi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Woww nice concept...
Looks interesting :D
plzzz continue further... Wud love to read more...
Nicely written...

ALL THE BEST ON UR FIRST FF :D

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princesssheena

@princesssheena

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Yes u should continue this sounds interesting please send me a pm :)

Thnanks

Sheena

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arshilove14

@arshilove14

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow superb pls continue

Edited by arshilove14 - 12 years ago

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

@evrydayirabbave

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

you should seriously continue this cuz not many ppl actually write from this time of the show

it'll be interessting to see how arnav behaves when he eventually finds out about shyam's truth

will he believe khushi? or will he doubt her like he did in the show?

my guess is that they'll be marrried by then and when he hears shyam's lies, there will be heated, passionate, gutter-minded update? 😳 😆 😃

please update more and pm me!

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

seems to b interesting continue soon ok

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💗as

@aapkibandhu_Vas

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: evrydayirabbave
you should seriously continue this cuz not many ppl actually write from this time of the show
it'll be interessting to see how arnav behaves when he eventually finds out about shyam's truth

will he believe khushi? or will he doubt her like he did in the show?

my guess is that they'll be marrried by then and when he hears shyam's lies, there will be heated, passionate, gutter-minded update? 😳 😆 😃

please update more and pm me!

hahha thnq soo much 😊

well even i'm w8ting for dat guttery nd passinate moments 😉