(Swaron OS) The Wait... - Page 6

Wow.. thats just so amazing.. beautiful.. splendid..

Well I will fall short of words to describe this particular OS.. post-confession OS..

Sharon being an absolutely different person.. Diva becomes Laila.. Mr. Majnu ki Laila..

pehle she wants him to drop her home.. par boys ne Sharon ke saare armano pe pani fer diya 🤣.. Simi smelling something fishy about the two.. chill girl, your friend is in love..

and now sharon feels he will visit her once done with boys.. pyaar sach mein logon ko badal deta hai.. pehle kabhi Swayam ka window se aana pasand nahi tha.. and now she expects him to get into her house through window.. ajab..

She is dreaming about majnu.. OMG.. Diva falling in love.. aur toh aur neend mein hi Swayam ko feelings express kar di..

Swayam enters through window. ab toh official boyfriend hai.. toh door se bhi enter kar sakta hai na.. pata nahi kya mazeh milti hai window ke through stunts marte huye aane ki..

but I loved the morning scenario the most.. both dreaming about Sharon.. and then Kiss 😳 and the most hillarious part.. Tu hai toh I will be all right.. initially I thought it would be Simmi.. but its Rey.. Its 1 in the afternoon.. kitna sote hain yeh log 😲 That last line 'pyaar ke seide effects' was so cute..

I just loved it... keep writing more.. thanks for the PM..

dat was simply awesome... 😃

Pyaar ke side effects, indeed.
Wonderful sequence, beautifully penned, extra ordinary OS.
It feels so good to see them so much in love, thinking about nothing else, reveling in each others' arms and drowning in pool of love they feel for each other.

now isnt this how a couple in a new relation behave😳

hey, well i have read almost all ur work but commenting for the first time..😳

Awesome OS

SUPER LOVELY

SPECIALLY PYAAR KE SIDE EFFECTS :)

awesome.. from d time sharon s waiting for swayam n d end of swayam's words pyaar ki side effects were nice... awesome... sharon sleep talking to swayam n here swayam listening to everything with with tears n wide smile... sharon pulled swayam n slept hearing his heartbeats... d morning kiss was splendid.. swayam too dreaming abt sharon which s of no doubt that our majnu ll always do.. rey disturbing them n d way they reacted after realizing wat s happening s awesome.. but our manju wanted to spend time with sharon n said he n sharon r not coming to coll was nice... but d end part was beautiful with sharon asking wat happened n swayam telling pyaar ki side effects was brilliant... awesome...