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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

super awesome os...👏

jst loved it..

thanks for the pm

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poonam

@shan.ss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome os as always!!

"pyaar ke side effects!" love it!! 👏

the emotions were really well written

u r very very very very very good writer!

just love ur woks 😃

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

it was lovely, I want a continuation of this OS...

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

omg...thats wat u can an os!!!! awsm jst awsm...how can u people write so so so so so so so so so welll...and if u can why the hell u r not writers...abt the os...loved to read a current track os from u...it was stunningly awsm...so cute sharon wanted swayam to drop her...poor swayam...cudnt do dat...keeping windows open for her prince and cherishing the past moments...awww...dreaming of him...n dat to so romantically...OMG...emotional swayam like always...caressing sharon...again awww...sharon grabbing his hand...wow...sleeping together...waking together at 1 pm :P...rey of course how can he miss it...i jst love rey teasing swaron...so cute...side effects of lone :D :D...

it was a completely awww os...

Rohan 😊

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Beautifull one shot..Its just awesome..i loved it..So first of all,i like the way u showned sharon's feelings for her love swayam..She is now wanting to be with him..wanting to confessed her love..
Emotions are very well played with writing..Just loved the whole dreaming part of sharon..She was dreaming of swayam..Talking about how much she loves him..And then swayam was there..to make her dream fulfill..
Loved the complete scene of SwaRon and their beautifull confession..Amazingly written..And last both realizing and getting back to their sense becoz of rey's call..😆..
Beautifully written and great work
Sorry,i am here without PM

Prateek

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Ami Patel

@amipatel2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OMG it was so cute!!! Amazing os

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

awieee such a cute and brilliant os👏👏👏👏👏
loved the post confession bliss that both of them were feeling😊😊😊
sharon dreaming of swayam and then the whole cuddling scene was so cute.
lol the kiss😳😳😳😳 thinking it was a dream was a nice touch.bechaara rey in dono ke lie cover karte karte pareshaan😆😆😆
the ending was just as sweet lol pyaar ke side effects😉😉😉😉😉
absolutely loved it keep writing more

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

The amazing work from your side after a long time! Its just full of emotions and every word inscribed here is best to explain their state and love for each other. A big applause to you for that because explaining these feeling in mere words is a very big task. I felt felt every word. I want to comment very long but now life is not less than what we call a complete mess. . I would edit this if i get enough time. For now i can't promise anything.

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Firstly.. I love ur DP! 😳

I hope u remember me 😛 We met only yesterday n wen I dropped into d forum I saw SwaRon OS by Megsy. So why not read it? And thank god I did!
This is so amazing! Sharon hugging d pillow tight n dreaming abt Swayam n Swayam watching it from d windoe.. Haayyyee! And both of em end up dreaming in d morning n al dat was a reality! Awww... I loved hw Swayam threw his phone n aaid Sharon n me r nt coming to d college!

You write wonderfully.. This is d first work of urs dat m reading n I loved it <3

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Hey aaj aapki n aapke os ki bahot tarif suni maine so i was very very curious to read ki aisa Wat was it..
After reading dis os i feel u truly truly deserve all d appreciation which i heard today for u 😳
Dis os was absolutely magical i loved each n every bit of it 😳 i was blushing smiling continuously while reading dis one 😳 ur really a brilliant writer. . I feel aaj agar yeh miss karti toh bahot brilliant sa Kuch miss kar deti 👏
I loved d way u portrayed der post confession feelings loved d way swayam told rey v r not comin to college today 😳
It created magic it touched my heart.. D way u have written it down was awesome.. Aur Kya bolu am in lack of words...
Simple one word mein i can say dat it was KHOOBSURAT 😳

Am actually new here just few months hue hain i ve read very few os.s out of d ones i ve read deepu di has become my favourite writer but now after reading dis i can say ur also in my favourites now 😳

Dis is first work of ur.s which am reading n i totally loved it 👏 👏 👏 n i ll make sure dat i read all ur works as n wen i get time..
Pls keep writing u create magic 😳 😳 i so wish ke v get a scene like dis in d show 😳

Ps: sorry for such a long comment but could not control myself... V don't know each other much cos from d time am here i haven't seen u around n i heard dat ur inactive.. Lookin forward to talk to u in person..
Lovely os 👏 👏 👏

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