ARSHI OS: U ARE BEAUTIFUL JUST THE WAY U ARE! Part 2 pg 21

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PaRud_AddicT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: MamiaRehman

see i hold my ears ... >>>

Maaf kardoh...

LOVE u too Dear...

awww thats so sweet

chall

maaf kiya

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MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ..blessy..

awww thats so sweet

chall

maaf kiya

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i know u cant stay mad at me for long

but sachhiii... fabulous OS ... loved it

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PaRud_AddicT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: MamiaRehman

i know u cant stay mad at me for long

but sachhiii... fabulous OS ... loved it

planning part 2

but not now

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MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: ..blessy..

planning part 2

but not now

Sachhiii ... Blessy already m waiting ...

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PaRud_AddicT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
What a beautiful message

thank you😳

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annys

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Heyy blessy this is really beautiful .. we love people not their body... i really love thiss ...

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LilButterfly003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Aaaw!!! <3

That was so cute and beautiful!!!😳

Truly loved it!!❤️

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..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

it was beautiful os...i loved it soo much...don't blush balloon lol...had tears at end...

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humi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

i have to start with that

i never lie in my reviews and i wont lie her

im in love

and im speechless

this!! was beautiful

you set me on a roller-coaster no joke

and it was wasnt the storyline that did that to me

it was emotion you made me sit through

i LOVED it

there only a few writers who make me emotional (including preet and shree) and you just joined the group!

by the way you nearly broke me phone 😉

i dropped my phone on the table i think 2-3 times when it was a scene i could read.. i had to stop there

my favourite parts!!!!! ALLL

lets start from top!

loved the words you used to describe Khushi's feelings (they were touching)

i could feel her pain and was sooo real... if your writing like this now how great will you be in few years time 😲

there best friends Awww (i like this story line!) love that he's there for her to protect her but still teasers her.. every relationship is like that

Lavanya OMG so evil wanted to separate the two and arnav had a Crush on HER! i knew she was evil the moment i knew he crushed on her

then the video (i dropped my phone her) that was painful for me to imagine, i think i have seen it in a movie.. was so painful for the girl .. it even reminded me of 'the Cinderella story' movie similar thing happens there. i was hurting inside here!!! 😭 😭 had a tear drop at the end of my eye.

his question left me speechless, glade she ran off she wouldnt of been able to speak then

then she ran

when he said 'i love you'

knew she would belive i understood both of them here!!! thats how great your story is

if i was in Khushi's shoes i wouldnt of believed it

and in Arnav's shoes i would be mad too

wait his confession OMG 😲 😲 😲 ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

a girl he's always loved

the whole Lavanya thing was to hid his feelings

the deept of his love how hie hid it

my favourite line 'princess of my heart'

then he wins her over this little kisses awww.. she still say no constantly.. then he runs away 😡

and he pikes her up😆 awww

but the way it all fixed up

perfect!!! (more than perfect)

Amazing story my love

i really am so Proud of you!!!

sorry i read it late

but its shocking that i replied this fast 😆 😆 blackmailing works with me 😉

i love you!!!

and love this story

going to share the link with me readers 😉

it touched my heart!!!

i cant blame you reader for wanting to kill you if i wrote like you i think my readers would kill me too 😉

Edited by babyhumz - 12 years ago

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Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

LOVED THE OS 2 D CORE AND WAS SPEECHLESS FOR SOMETIME bt then decided 2 say as it forced me 2 say that it was truly FANTABULOUS...

the best part of this OS s
Arnav: look at it'see who is there..you know who is that girl? She is my love. I loved her since we were kids..i fell in love with her when I first met her in aashram. But I decided to be her friend. Because I was scared of her reaction..dont know how she will react..? then another girl entered..i acted like im in love with her just becoz of my friend..i don't want her by any chance to know that im in love with her..because of the fear that she will leve me..

Kushi's eyes filled with tears..she gazed at her reflection

Arnav: did u see her? Her face..how cute..just like a kid..she is my laddoo. Her cheeks are so chubby..when we were kids I used to pull them a lot..and the blush on her face..its not make up..she is a natural beauty..the princess of my heart..but she'she thinks that she is not worth of me..i love her so much..very much'but how should I tell her that her personality doesn't matter..she is always beautiful for me..i need her..but she is asking me to let her go'what should I do..how can I convince her that she is the queen of my heart..

it showed how much Arnav has noticed her both inner and outer beauty and he is ready 2 do anything 2 convince her that HE DESERVES HER...

was crying seeing Khushi's insecurity and pain as i can understand it very well bcoz even i am fat and am always made fun of...Khushi feels that she s ugly and Arnav deserves much better person than her...

this was truly FABULOUS WONDERFUL and HEART TOUCHING OS...

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