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OK Guyss Here I M Wid Next Update...Bt I Seriouslly Dnt Knw Wat I Had Written I Cmpltly Lost My Mind In Writing I Guess So Plzz Tolerate Ths Two Part...N Plzz Suggest Me Or U Can Also Criticise It ...I Will Be Glad If U Will Do It [:) ]
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PART 17 :- Asad Went To His Room... Changed In His Night Clothes...Lying On Bed He Was Staring At Fan Blankly...He Closed His Eyes N Saw Blood N Quicklyy Got Up Wid Jerk...He Paced in His Room For Sometime...Still Feeling Restless Atlast He Went To His Wordrobe N Opened It...Opening Safe Locker Behind It ...He Took Out Photograph Frm It...Carressing Tht Photo He again Took Back Thr N Locked Tht Locker...Closing Wordrobe He Went Back To Bed N Lay Down ... Closing His Eyesss He Mumbled Sneha... FLASHBACK : Asad Was Going To Office As It Was Urjunt Meeting Thr N Thnx To Traffic He Was Already Quite Late... ASAD : Ya Allah Itna Jyada Traffic ...Aaj To Bht Garbad Hone Wali Hai Asad Abbu Tujhe Mar Hii Dalenge...Sameer Ko Bhii Aaj Hi Jana Tha...Pata Nhii Aaj Jo Bhi Naya P.A Aane Wala He Use Mere Kam K Bare Me Sab Kuch Pata Bhi Hoga Ya Nhi...He Was Lost In His Thoughts Just Thn Suddenly One Small Kid Came On Road To Take His Ball ...Asad Saw Tht N To Control His Car He Quickly Turned His Car To Wrong Side...N BANGGG...thr Was Thud Sound of Hitting Something To his Car ...Stopping His Car He Quicklyy Came Out Too See Wat Happened...He Saw One Scooty Was Thr Lying On Road ...He Try To FindOut Owner of Tht Scooty Here N Thr...Hearing All Ths Noise People Quickly gatheraround...Asad Was Trying His Best Nt To Create Any Scene As He Was Already Too Much Late Bt He Forgot It Was Late...People Came Thr Like Flood ...In All ths Everyone Forgot Tht Poor Soul Who Was Lying In Kichad...Her New White Dress Was Cmpltly Brown N His Black Shiny Hairs Were All Stickyy Thnx Too Kichad Beside Road She Screamed Loudlyyy Aaa...Hearing Voice Asad Ran to Back Side Of Car N Here She Was... ASAD [thinking] : Crapp Ladkiii Asad Aaj To Tu Gaya.. He Quickly Went To Her N Gave Her Hand Inspite Of The Fact Tht He Was Biggest Cleannees Freakkk...She Glared At Him Angrilyyy Bt As Thr Was No Optionn She Took His Hand N Tried To Get Up...N Asad Pulled Her Slightly Bt Coz Of The Sudden Pull She Went N Crashed to Him...Asad's Formal Black Suit Had Kichad's Stab Everywhere Nw...Seeing Ths He Got Angry... ASAD : Wat The Hell U R Doinggg ?? GIRL : Excuse Me ?? I Should Be One Asking Ths Question Too U ...Wat The Hell U R Doing ?? Jab Aapko Gadi Chalanii Aati Hii Nhii To Kyun Chalate Ho Aap ?? Asad Realised Ths Is Nt The Time ...So He Quickly Gather Himself N Said Calmly : Dekhiye Miss I Knw Meri Galti Thii.. I was Late ..Was Going Little Bit Speedy N Suddenly... GIRL : Exctlyyy Yahii To Problem Hoti He Aap Raisezado Kii Gadi Mili Nhii Nikal Gaye Fullspeed Me Bakii Sarii Duniya Jaye Bhad Me... ASAD : Dekhiye Aap Galat Samaj Rahi He I Was Going To Office N Bt Tht Girl Cut Him Again : Office Ohhh Nooo Aaj I Had My Firstt Day At My Office ...Boss Will Screwed Me urghhh My Scootyy...My New Dresss Nooo ASAD : Dekhiye Dnt Worry I Will Repair Ur Scooty n Abt Dresss Umm Giving Her Some Money...Plz U Can Buy It New One ... GIRL : urghhh Tum Apne Aap Ko Samjte Kya Ho ?? I Will Kill U... Someone Frm Crowd Said : Police Ko Bulao... ASAD :Wat ?? Police ?? Heyy Mene Kuch Nhii Kiya Wo Waha... Bt Girl Intreptted him N Said Han Police Ko Bulao... Just Thn One Lady Came Wid Child N Said To Asad : Thank U Saheb ..agar Aapkii Jagah Koi Aur Hota To Pata Nhii Kya Hota..Mene Kitni Barr Chintu Ko Samjhaya Hai Kii Road Pe Mat Jaya Kar Lekin Ye Sunta Hii Nhiii... ASAD : Its Ok ..Lekin Plzz Next Time Khayal Rakhiyega... Lady Told To Everyone How Her Son Came Between The Road N Hw Coz Of Him Asad lost His Balance...Everyone Said Sorry To Him N Left Frm Thr... After Tht Asad Looked At Tht Girl N She Looked Down Feeling Guilty N Said Sorryy..She Was Abt To Pick Up Her Scooty Bt Asad Offered Her Help...Hesitantly She Agreed...He Dropped Her At Her Home N Saying Sorry Left Frm Thr As He Was Getting Late For Office... When Asad Reached Meeting Was Over...Seeing Asad Rashid Glared At Him...Seeing Him Angry Asad Was Afraid ..Bt Thn After Thn He Explain Everything Too Him...Hearing Name Of Accident Rashid Quickly Got Up Frm Chair N Asked Him Worriedly Tum Thik To Ho ?? Main Abhii Doc Ko Phn Karta Hun...Asad Told Him Tht He Is Cmpltly Fine Nw...N Chukled Tht His Father Is Back Again :P... He Went To His Cabin N Asked For His P.A Bt More To His Badluck His New P.A Was Also Absent On Very First Day At Her Day At Office...He Asked Manager To Contact His P.A N Asked Him To Warn Her N He Want Her At Office In 10 Mins Otherwise She Will Be Fired Before Joining...Otherside She Reched To Home Half Cursing Asad Half Thanking Him For Droping Her Home..She Was Changing Just Thn Her Phn Ringed N she quicklyy picked Up The Phn N Hearing Otherside's Voice She Was So Scared Hearing Tht She Have To Reach Thr In 10 Mins...How The Hell She Gonna Reach Thr In 10 Minsss...She Quickly Changed N Locking Her House She Ran Outside To See If She Can Get any Auto...
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PART 18 :-


FLASHBACK CONTINUE :

Asad Glanced At Watch Almost 10th Time In Mere 20 Minss...He Called Manager Again If Her New P.A Is Still Here Or Nt...

Sneha Reached Office...N Quickly Went To Reception N Asked For Mr.Khan's Cabin ...Receptionist Saw Her As If She Was Some Alian...Seeing Her Look Girl Got Irritated N Asked Her Little Loudlyy Excuse Me Can U Tell Me The Way To Cabin Of Mr.Khan ?? Suddenly Everyone Stopped In Her Tracks Hearing Her Voice...Seeing Everyone's Faces She Felt Embaracced...Rashid Was Passing By...N He Went To Her...RASHID : Aapko Mr.Khan Se Milna Hai...I M The One Say ??

GIRL : Woh Sir...Just Thn She Sat Down To His Legs...N Started To Plead Sirr Plzz Main Time Pe Hi Aa Rahii Thii Lekin Raste Me Ek Raiszade Ne Mere Scooty Ko Takkar Mar Dii Main Gir Gayii Aur Mujhe Late Ho Gaya I Knw First Impresssion Is Last Impression Bt Trust Me Sir Ye First N Last Iske Bad Kabhii Late Nhii Houngii I Need Ths Job Sirr Plzz...Hearingg Thss Rashid Quickly Backout...N Ask Her To Standup...Seeing Her Crying He Quickly Asked Peon To Get Some Water For Her...After Drinking Water She Calmed Down Little...Rashid Took Her To His Cabin...Where She Explained Tht She Got late Coz She Met Wid Acciddent N Hw U Asked To Come Here In 10 Mins Bt As She Live Quite Far Frm Here Its Impossible To Reach Here In 10 Mins...Rashid Understood Abt Wat She Was Talking N Abt Whom She Was Talking...He Very Well Knw Hw Much Asad Hate Irregular Emplyess...N Being His P.A. She Should Be Here Before Him At Any Cost...If She Will Meet Him Nw Thn Surelyy She Will Be Fired...N Seeing Girl He Genuinly Felt Sorry For Her...So He Told Her Tht He Is Nt His Boss...Jiski Wo Bat Kar Rahi Hai HE is His Own Son...He Asked Her To Go To Asad's Cabin ...N Ask Her To Told Him Tht She Is Recommanded By Rashid...Hearing Ths Her Face Broke In To Big Smile...She Thanked Him N Quicklyy Ran Out Of Cabin...Before Rashid Could Tell Her Way Of Asad's Cabin..N Just After Few Secs She Returned Back To Cabin To Asked Way Of His Cabin Looking Sheepshly...Rashid Smiled At His Childness n Told Her Way...As Soon As She Went He Callled Asad N Told Tht One Girl Is Coming To U She Is Recommanded By Me...So Behave Nicely Wid Her...Late Koi Bhi Ho Sakta Hai..U Was Also Late Today Dnt Forget Tht...Hearing Tht Asad Nodded Bt Realising Tht He Is On Phn n Rashid cant See Him He Said Yess Abbu...He Put Reciever Hearing Knock On The Door...He Started To Read File Asking Tht Girl To Come In...Girl Came In ..She Was Looking Down Coz Of Fear...N Started To Say Again Whole Story Of Her Accident...Hearing Her Voice Asad Felt Tht He Had Heard Ths Voie Before Too..Just Thn He Noticed Wat She Was Saying N His Eyes Become Wide Open N Looked Up Too See Tht Girl Infront Of Him Again ...Just Coz Of Her He Was Late On His Office First Time...Hw He Wanted To Kill Her Thr N Thr...Bt Being Nice Guy He Helped Her...Bt Couldnt Stop Hating Her When Rashid Litrally Blasted On Him When He Reached Office..Just Thn He Realised Tht She Made Him Villan Of Her So Callled Accident's Story Inspite Of Knwing Tht He Wasnt At Fault...He Quickly Got UP N Went To Her N Blasted On Her...Wat The Hell R U Doing Heree...Security Ne Tumhe Andar Kese Aane Diya ?? He Hold Her Frm Shoulder Rudely N Dragged Her Out Of His Cabin...Seeing Him She Felt Like She Is Seeing Some Ghosttt ..She Pleaded To God..Plz God Ths Cnt Be True...Just Thn Rashid Came Out ...N Saw Asad Scolding Her Like Anything...He Went Thr N Asked Him To Shutup...Asad Tried To Explain Him..Bt Rashid Told Him Tht She Is His P.A Nw N He Have No Other Option N Ths Is His Finall Decision N Went Frm Thr...Asad Knew He Cnt Change Rashid's Decision..So He Just Glared At Her...While She Looked Up At Him..N Seeing Fire In His Eyes Quickly Turned Her Gaze Just To See Rashid Winking At Her...She Sighed In Relief Atleast Someone Is thr To Support Her...

PRESENT

Asad Smiled Remembering Tht Day...She Came To His Life N Some Kind Of Tufaan Came To His Life...Before Tht He Was Living So Peacefull Life ...Thinking He Fell Asleep...

Next Day Morning...

Kumud Went To School Without Breakfast As Always...She reached School N Saw Asad's Car Where New Highschool Was Buiding Up...Tht Again Reminded Her Of Him...God Why Cantt She Think Anything Else Except Him...She Think To Herself...She Went To School N Thankfully Her Attention Was Diverted By Kids...

KHANVILLA :

Asad Woke Up...Remembering Last Night Thoghts He Pushed Thm Aside N Went To Washroom...Coming Out In Jacket N Tracks He Grabbed His I-Pod N Went To His Usual Jog...Asad [Thinking] : Muje Insab Yaadon Se Bahar Aana Hoga...I Have To Move On...I M Ignoring Everyone's Feelings N Love Just Coz Of My Own Feeling...I Have To Become Thier Old Asad Again...Just To Make Thm Happy Again...

Deciding Ths He Smiled Little...Feeling Something Different Yet Familiar In The Air...

New Life Is Waiting Ahed !!
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mein ne toh is mein bhi jj ko hi imagin kiya as sneha.. n kumud toh hai hi jj...


haye... loved the part...
kumud ko pyaar ho gaya...
asad ji aap bhi kumud ko dekho ... hahahahaha...


osome part...
continue soon...



yo yooo i m first
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome as alwazzz...waiting eagerly for d next part ..,
update sooonnn...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum part mansi di :)
luvd sneha alot... Bt what happen to her??? Hahaha asad is obidient son lol
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Originally posted by: shraddha130

awesome as alwazzz...waiting eagerly for d next part ..,
update sooonnn...😊

Thnx Will Try To Update On Next Sunday Nw 😊

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