AsMud SS : Opposite Attractss [Note - page 43] 1-11-2014 - Page 14

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#CC0000">saw.. nd trust me it'll not only hlp me but ur othr readers too..😊
thanx for it too.. u were indeed fast..😉😃</font></font>

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Originally posted by: --Orchids--

<font color="#0066CC" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">wow.. sneha.. indeed a thoughtful selection of name..
if manshi hasn't mentioned d reason behind choosing ds name, i wll nvr b able to crack d hidden puzzle behind ds selection..
i must say...
gr8 job parinita...</font>👍🏼

Kya Karuuu Possessive KaJeniann Hehe :* Bt U Will Surprise Knwing Fact Tht Pari Is KSGian N She Suggested Ths Name 😃 She Is Indeed Good 😊

Originally posted by: -Mith-

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Love yaa... ❤️

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Hey Guysss ...Sorry I M Late As Always... Bt Here I M Wid Two Parts...As Thr Will Be No Net...So I Wont Able To Update Til 20 N After Tht Diwalii So I Have No Idea When Will Be Next Update Plzz Dnt Kill Me I Will Try To Update As Soon As Possible Trust Me... Till Thn Enjoy Ths...Trust Me I Had No Time Stilll I Typed Ths Two Parts I Knw Nthng Much Happened In Ths Bt ...Cnt Help...Soryyy 😊

PART : 9

He Was Walking To His Room Like A Robot...Tumhare Sath Koi Ladkii Reh Bhii Kese Sakti He ...Motu Akdu Asad Khan...He reached To His Room N Sat Down ...Againn Voice Came ...Tum Samjte Kya Ho Apne Aap Ko ?? Uff Tumhare Sath Koi Ladkii Reh Hi Nhi Saktii... Saduu Asad Ahmed Khann...N He Closed His Earsss N Shouted Nooo Aahhh Kyunnn Kyunnn Kyunnn Sneha Kyunn Chalii Gayii Tum Mujhe Chod Ke ??? He Was Crying Badly...
Dugba Came To Check Asad ... Seeing Him Like Ths She Quickly ran To Him N Sat Besides Him...Asad Saw Her N Hugged Her N Cried Like Babyy... No One Said Anything...He Slept In Her Lap...Night Went Like Tht Onlyyy...Otherside Kumud Wass Feeling Guilty For Saying So Much Harsh Words To Him... She Couldnt Able To Sleep Whole Night... N She Decided Tht at Morning She Will Ask For Sorry To Him ...

At Morning Asad Woke Up...Seeing Dugba Last Night's Events Came To His Mind He Got Up N Went To Shower...

Dugba Woke Up N Realised Asad Is In Shower She Went Frm Thr Thinking She Will Talk To Him Later...

In Shower ...Asad : Kyun Main Yaha Aaya...Kyunn Mene Fir Se Koshish Kii Jeene Ki...Kyunnn...Kyunn Mene Kisi Ko Apne Kareeb Aane Diyaa...N He Decided Nw Tht Again He Willl Make Tht Wall Around Him N Ths Time He Wont Let Anyone To Break Tht Wall...After Shower He Wore His Track Suit N Ran Out Of Haweli... His Dailyy Routine... Asad Ahemd Khan Can Miss Anything Bt He Cant Miss Hiss Jogging At Morning...

Otherside Everyone Woke Up N As Per Routine...Kumud Was Doing Aartiii...

Mann Mohana aaa
mann mohanaaa
Kanha sunona aaa
Tum bin paun kaise chaina
Tarsu tumhi ko din rain
Chodke apne kashi mathura
Chodke apne kashi mathura
Aake basao more nain
Tum bin paun kaise chain
Kanhaaa
Tarsu tumhiko din rain
Ek pal ujiraya aaye
Ek pal andhiyara chaye
Mann kyun na ghabraye
Kaise na ghabraye
Mann jo koi dhara ha
Apni rahon mein paaye
Kaun disha jaye
Tum bin kaun samjhaye
Tum bin kaun samjhaye
Raas rachiyan brindavan ke gokul ke basi
Radha tumhri daasi
Darshan ko hai pyaasi
Shaam shalone nand lala krishna banwari
Tumri chab hai nyari
Mein to hoon tan man hari
Mein to hoon tan man hari
Mann mohanaaa mann mohanaaa
Mann mohanaaa mann mohanaaa
Kanha sunona aaa
Tum bin paun kaise chain
Tarsu tumhiko din rain
Jeevan ek nadiya hai lehron lehron behti jaye
Ismein mann ki naiyaa doobe kabhi tar jaye
Tum na Khewaiya ho to koi tat kaise paaye
Majdhaare rehlaye
Toh tumri saran aaye
Haan tumri saran aaye
Mein hoon tumhari hai tumhara yeh mere jeevan
Tumko hi dekhon mein
Dekhun koi darpan
Bansi ban jaungi in hooton ki ho jangui
In sapno se jalthal
Hai mera maan angan

...Hearing Ths Asad Stopped In His Track ... He Was Just Came Back Frm Jog N Seeing Everyone He Decided To Go To His Room Directlyy Bt Her Voicee...It Stopped Him In His Trackk...Tht Voice Reached To His Heart N Asked Him To Go To her... Ask Him To Come Back To Himself...N as People Says Ise Dill Pe Kisi Ka Zor Nhi !! Unknwinglyy Asad Went to Mandir N Stood Behind Kumud... Kumud Turned N For A Second They Had Eye Lockk... Both Were Staring Eachother ...When Yash's Voice Broke Thier EyeLock...

Yash : Aree Wah Asad Bhai Jii Aap Subah Subah Daudne Bhii Jate He...Mujhe Bhii Uthaya Hota Na Hum Dono Sath Me Jate...

Asad [He Didnt Realised Wat Just Yash Was Blabbering ]: Kya ??

Suddnly Dugba CAME ...

DUGBA : Yashh Ja tujhe Kaka Bula Rahe He Kuch Kam Hai...

Everyone Went After Taking Aarti...Onlyy Asad Kumud N Dugba Was Left Thr...
Kumud Went To Thm... N Stood For A Second Asad Didnt Realised Wat To Do Thn Kumud Showed Him How To Take Aartii N He Took Aarti...N Took Blessing Frm Dugba... Dugba Was Abt To Say Smthng Bt Asad Excused HimSelf N Went To His Room... Kumud N Dugba Stood Thier Staring At His Back...

Breakfast Time On Dining Table :

Everyone Was Having Thier Breakfast N Suddenly VC Asked Asad : So Asad School Ka Kam Kab Tak Pahocha ??

ASAD : Mene Zameen Dekh Li He Kaka Jo School He Uske Piche Hii khali Zameen He Waha Highschool Ban Sakta He... Mene Contractors Se Bat Kii Magar Ise Waqt Yaha Koi Nhi Hai... So Mujhe Kuch Contractors Se Bat Karne Surendranagar Jana Hoga... So Me Soch Raha Tha Kii Aaj Hii Nikal Jaun Taki Kam Jaldi Se Jaldi Shuru Ho Sake...

VC : Aree Wah Ye To Achchi Bat He Beta Magar Tum Waha Jaoge Kese ?? Ye Ganv Tumhare Liye Anjaan He Aur Waha Tumharii Gadi Bhii Jayegii Nhii Subah Ek Bus Jatii He Tumhe Usi Me Jana Padega... Tum Ek Kam Karo Kumud Ko Le Jao Aapne Sath.. Wo Bht Bar Bachcho K Sath Ja Bhi Chuki He Picnic K Liye To Use Pata He Sab Waha Kyun Kumud ??

Kumud Was Shocked Before Bt Still She Noded As Her Bapu Said...

ASAD : Nhi Kaka Me Akele Chala Jaunga...

VC : Mene Kaha Na Tum Akele Nhi Jaoge Naye Ho Yaha ...Aur Tum Hamare Mehmaan Ho Hamarii Zimmeddari Ho !!

Hearing Ths Asad Had No Courage To Argue Back... He Just Stare At Dugba Helplessly ...N Soon Her Eyes Went On Kumud Who Was Just staring At Him ...

Recape : Vc Asked Kumud To Join Asad at Surendranagar !!

PART : 10

Asad Was Staring At Kumud... he Had No Excuse... Otherside Kumud Thought She Will Ask For Sorry...

It Was Time To Go Thr... Both Left Frm Haweli...Asad Started To Call Driver...

KUMUD : Hame Bus Me Jana Padega Asad ... Waha Car Nhi Jayegii...

ASAD : Janta Hun... Lekin Busstand Tak To Chalegi Na Car ??

KUMUD rolled Her Eyes Here He Starts Mr.Sadu...

Asad Was Calling Driver Since 15 Mins...Bt Thr Was Network Prob...

KUMUD : Shayad Yahi Kahi Gaya Hoga ... Tum Drive Kar Lo Na Yahi To Jana He ...

ASAD[Rudely] : Main Drive Nhii Karta !!!

Aur Vese Bhi Hum Bus Me Jayenge To Car Wapis Kaun Layega ??

Kumud Shut Her Mouth n Both Were Waiting For Driver...As Soon As Driver Came Asad Scolded Him Badly ...Seeing Ths Kumud Thought : Huhh Saduuu ... Aamir Baap Ka Bigda Hua Beta...Wo Bhii Insan Hii He Uske Liye Kam Kya Karta He Ye To Use Bichare Driver Ko Naukar Hii Samajne Laga...He Dnt Deserve My Sorryy Bhad Me Jaye...

Both Reached busstand...Thr Was Only 1 Bus Available...They went Inside Bus...Thr Were Only Two Seats Bt It Were Far Away Frm Eachothers... Asad Asked Kumud To Go Ahed ...She Went N Sat...Asad's Back Was Facing Her...

Kumud Sat Thr Uncomfirtably As Some Gunda Types Boys Were Staring At Her ...She Ignored All Tht...Bt When One Man Tried To Touch Her She Got Up N Went Back To Asad...As She Got Up Other Man Sit On Her Place...So Nw Thr Was No Seat For Her... Asad Saw Her Angrily...He Got Up N Asked Her To Sit On His Place...As He Cant Sit When Kumud Was Standing...Kumud First Denied Bt As He Glared At Her She Sat Thr Quitely...

Asad[Thinking] : Ye Ladki Mujhe Pagal Lagti He...Achchi Khasi Seat Mili Thi Aa Gayii Chod Ke ...

Finally They Reached Thr...As Everyone Were Going Out...Kumud Was Before N Asad Was Behind Her...As She Went Outside...Tht Gunda Types Boys Again Stood Infront Of Her N Circled Around Her...Kumud Tried To Looked Brave...n Said : Dekho Mujhse Dur Raho...Tum Jante Nhi Main Kaun Hun...

One Man Said : Jante Nhi To Jan Jayenge Janemann...

Kumud : Mujhe Jana He...N She Tried to Go...Bt One Man Stopped Her N Picked Her Hand...N Said : Itnii Bhii Kya Jaldii He Janemannn...N He Was About To Kiss Her Hand...Bt Someone Punched Him Hard...As He Just Fall ...N Look Up Too See...Who It Was...Kumud Tried To Stop Him...Bt He Held Her Hand N Push Her Behind Him...As Other Men Looked At Thier Frnd Who Was Bleeding Badly Just By One Punch Of Tht Man... They All Attacked On Him.. N He Beat Everyone badly...Just In 5 Mins Everyone Was On The Floor ...Kumud Was Staring At Him Dumbfounded... She Saw His Hand Was Bleeding ...She Quicky Tied Her Rumal On His Hand... N Blow Her Hand Lightlyy... Asad Was Staring At Her Blankly...As She Looked Up At Him... They Had Eyelock...His Eyesss...They Were Totalyyy Blank...

ASAD : Tum Thk Ho ??

N Thr She Saw Little Glimps Of Care...Pain...Bt As Soon As They Came..They Went...Again His Eyes Were Blank...

KUMUD : Han...Wo...Tumhe Ye Nhii Karna Chahiye Tha Asad... Ye Ganv Hai...Aur Ye Unka Ilaka Hai... Hum Yaha Naye He...Agar Ye Log Ratnanagri Me Hote To Main Hi Unko Sabak Sikhati..Magar Yaha Ese Logo Se Dur Hi Rehna Achcha He...

ASAD : Tum Pagal Ho Kya ?? Tumhare Kehne Ka Mtlb He Ki Wo Kuch Bhi Kare Hum Unko Bus Ignore Kare ?? Ese Logo Ko To Tabhi K Tabhii Jail Bhej Dena Chahiye...

Kumud : Asad Ye Tumhara Bhopal Nhi hai... ye Chota Sa Ganv Hai... Yaha Police Ki Bhii Koi Nhi Sunta...

ASAD : Just Forget It... Hame chalna Chahiye Vese Bhii Bahot Late Ho Gaya Hai Yaha...

KUMUD : Han Chalo...

They Went ... Asad Talked To Contractor ..He Agreed To Work Wid Him For School... After Meeting ...They Decided To Leave... Bt Contractor Stopped Thm N Asked Thm To Have Lunch...They Denied Bt After So Muchh Haaa N Naa They Have To Lunch...They Left ...After Lunch...When They Reached To Busstand They Got To Knw Tht They Missed Noon's Bus...Nw They Have To Wait Till 5...

As They Had No Option They Decided To Wait...Kumud Saw One Mandir N Went Thr.. Asad Saw Her N He To Went Behind Her... Bt Stood Outside Of Mandir...Kumud Came N Asked Him To Come Upstairs N They Can Wait Here Till 5...Bt Asad To Asad Hai... He Didnt Agree N Asked Kumud To Find Some Hotel Where They Can Wait...They Were Finding Some Hotell...When They Saw Dhaba...Though They Had Already Lunch They Decided To Stay Here...

As It Was 4:30 Both Decided To Go Bacck...

Both Were Walking Bt Suddenlyy Someone Hit Hard On Asad's Head...n He Collapsed On The Floor...Kumud's Eyes Wide Open Seeing Thss...She Turned Too See Whom They Were N Shocked To See All Tht Men with whom they Had Fight At Morning...

One Man : Tera Hero To Gaya...Aab Kya Karegii Janemannn ...


Precape : She Screamed His Name...Bt He Wasnt Reacting...She Was Crying Badlyyy Bt He Was Thier As If Lifeless...

awesome part

Finally you updated !!! awesum parts...👏
will be waiting for ur next post !!
continue sooonnn..😊😊
take care..

Omg 2 two updates ek sath... 😲
Yaar tu kamaal kar ditta... Nice updates... 😃
Toh Asad has his part of past... 😔
Kumudz wordz hurt him so much, k woh firse back 2 his shell... 😒
Accha hua VC sent Kumud vt Asad... 😛
Hayye ye Asad n his fights r wow... 😆
Aur unki itni himmat k woh firse aagaye... 😡
Precap se darr lag raha hai... Plz dnt make dem hurt both n Asad toh big nooo... 😔
Amazing updates dear, lowed it... 😳
Try 2 update next part soon... 😛
Love yaa... ❤️

Woahh double update ;)

Great work..but ohh Precap :\
continue soon!