ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

bith r well educated people in this story... what happened all those 10 yrs back ??????

why arnav hate kushi sooo much...

intresting and curious...like one of u r story scandalous or secrets...

looking forward to read more...

thank u

kushiarnav1.

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

wat a sensational start?!!! ten yrs ago kya hua??

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Please dont hit m with your danda. LOLz. Im sorry yaara 4 da unexpected delay in cummenting.

So let me begin by saying that I absolutely loved the prologue and the 1st chapter. I feel like I'm watching a fast paced thriller in say an I Max cinema. there is so much happening and I'm waiting with bated breath wondering what is going to happen next. The prologue was kick ass but you have outdone yourself with the first chapter.

The intensity is fabulous, this Arnav and Kushi are literally breathing fire in your story. I like the set up of this story, very different from the usual.

I just cant wait to see where you will take this.

I'm too (S)excited (S)expelliarmus. 😳

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veil_of_roses

@veil_of_roses

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Wow what an update can't wait for next part!

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

wow. Intrstng. Political background. Diffrnt plot. Khushi is a ias officer. Sum twist in story. Waitng 4 2dys update

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Their pasts are connected... wot made Khushiz family to run away from there... derz clearly a miss understanding... were they forced to keep quite n for Arnavz sake dey did so n left that place???

dis is very very intriguing Juhi... n when i read the prologue again now... im wondering if it was the nafrat which Khushi has seen in Arnavz eyes when she found him n Sheetal together.. was he takin sm sort of revenge still the MU nt nt gettin cleared...???

i hope m follwin the story correctly!!!

waitin fr the nxt update :)

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

Just caught up with this SS.

It's brilliant.

Politics.

Nafrat.

Arnav, Khushi.

What past? Kya hua tha?

I can't wait to read more.

Please update soon!!

Stalking!!

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

This is so intriguing, well which work of yours is not?

Secrets, secrets & secrets!
Was arnav married to khushi sometime 10 years back?
Has khushi committed a mistake?
I have so many questions that I can't give a proper comment on this update!

But yes, you have written & described beautifully👏