ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

I am looking forward to this story. the prolugue has caught my attention and I want to know what bought Khushi till that room and why does it hurt so much

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Awesome start! I'll totally be stalking!

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Woah another ss from you..yayyy
Amazing prologue
Looking forward to the story

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Awesome description.. Loved the prologue and the banner.

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NISHI

@nishi22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Amazing prologue...that man is arnav rite...there is sumthng deep down in these story..waiting..thanx for pm

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Woo Hooo! Another story from your quiver of lovely tales, J.

What a dramatic prologue! The image of the discarded blouse on the floor of an otherwise immaculate room was so symbolic - superb touch of narrative technique, tells a whole story in itself.

Am looking forward to the next few weeks - a super story to read based on that iconic, unforgettable promo of the show, before the asli duniya draws you back into its busy arms. 😊

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

oh lovely!!! you do know how get grab attention with the simplest of the words..it was just brilliant how you created the entire setting..right down to the shattered vase and the plush persian carpet!!

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Awesome...she dreaming about him when she was searching for him want to dream a new life with him and then seeing the sight crushing her dreams and living her shattered...loved the start...waiting for frst chp and the start of dis story thanx for pm