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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum as usual
sorry for commenting late 😒


loved taani n rinni bonding and rey cares for rinni
hope same care taani ke liye bhi ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its nice and bit cute love the relationship b/w
Taani and rinni
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Loved the bond between taani - rinni & rinni-rey. Its really sweet of Taani to think about changing rinni's surroundings. So how much of the conversation did Rey hear?Aww Three of them having breakfast together , was that Rey's way of spending more time with taani and rinni.
And about the tea, Rey seems to like irritating Taani or is basically looking for an excuse to interact with her. 😆😆
Its all right if Taani wants to give this marriage a chance, but hope u don't show her as an abla nari.
About the note you wrote in the end, I think everyone was just surprised and happy because it was rey's first turning point .
Awesome Update !!👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Happy Sunday to All my wonderful readers/friends🤗

So, before moving forward, it's important for me to know how you think about this Dark TaaRey FF (meaning written first page). As this story is going through few sensitive phases, I urge to know how you all want to see your favorite story/character here. Please fill it up with your honest feedback, this will help me to evaluate my work. You can answer all of these following questions or someof them.

I request to all (active, silent, busy readers) of you to take out few moments of your valuable time and fill this up please for me.😊


1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?


2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?


3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?


10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)


Acknowledgement - Questions are inspired from "Prithvi" by kautilya04


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Thought to write my own feeling too. Though I am the mother of this FF😳 and love everything about it, still I want to criticize my story too😊

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

A/N- I read few TR story before I started writing this one and found everywhere Rey as a simple, sweet majnu/lover boy/business man/ashique/arrogant man with a beautiful heart etc. But. I wanted to give him a negative shed, entire new one from the current show. But I was little apprehensive if this Rey would be accepted by all or not. And frankly, initially many of readers couldn't think this Rey (not even)😛. But I will be successful if they love Rey. I was also not sure if this matured relationship based story could be readable by the teenagers(D3 viewers are mainly students), but I didn't know they are really matured enough from their thoughts. I am glad that they have appreciated me and loved my work.

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

A/N - the entire TR marriage. I enjoyed a lot writing that scene because I had to do some net surfing and research for writing North Indian (Rajpootana) marriage.

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

A/N - Reyaansh Singhania. Yes, please don't be surprised😳 and I am portraying him visualising KAS😛. "bari siddat se maine aapko banane ki koshish ki hai; ke har zarre ne mujhe aapse milane ki saajish ki hai"😳. I want to see him as anti hero. So, Rey is a man who is basically lonely from heart, tries to take revenge not only from Taani but from every girl, can't show his feeling (neither happiness nor sadness) in front of everyone, killed his inner kid many years ago...but but but, he didn't misbehave with Taani. This is not the case that he doesn't know to respect women (see his sis - Rinni and Simmi, Chachi and Granny), but don't care for them, sply her lady love.

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

A/N - No one..I can't😛

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

A/N - When your would be husband is offering you some deal about the marriage and you have no other option left with you

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

This story is very close to my heart , and has made me laugh , cry , sad , pity, happy with its updates . This story has a special place in my heart because it has taarey and secondly because its written in such a natural and beautiful way which attracts the readers more 😳

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

The thank you and Sorry scene is my favorite scene 😳

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

Taani is my favorite character , because she is a simple , sobar , sweet girl with high moral values . Although she was forced to marry Rey , still she is trying to befriends with the family members , and help them in whatever way she can . She takes helping others not as a duty but as a pleasure 😳

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

SFPC (Stupid Face Pack Chudail) and Simmi ji , i hate them the most , because , if they were kind at heart , they should have atleast once tried to know taani .😡

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

I follow the story , because this story is absolutely different from others , this story , has a love story , which is not rushed . Just flowing with its own speed . And I have told you this alot of times that I love the way you write and you are a fab. writer . Even the concept is awesome , a dark fan fiction is something which is really interesting , but gets spoiled when is not presented in a unique way . This story has a unique concept , and an awesome writer , thats why , this story is too special for many people , and is going so well ! 😳

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The scene where Rey asked Taani for sugar in his tea but after irritating Taani , He said that he don't want to have tea 😆

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The rainy night scene when Rey saved taani from the goons , that was superb 😳

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

When it was relvealed that Rey made the whole MMS.

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

When Taani 's family blamed her for whole the whole MMS .

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

I really want to see how Taani helps Rey to overcome his past , his fears . And I want to see TaaRey friendship .😳


Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES!!
Gotta go now
Padhayi... 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

startng me thoda cnfusd thi bt nw its becam a prt f my if lyf

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

taani sharing her feelings wid rinni

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

i ned to write taani bt for me my fev charectr is rey

not taani bcz, middle cls girls lic taaani gt da lstn 2 support her husbnd & in lows in any & every situatn 4m childhood. so taani s just following hr tradision

rey is a heartls casanova. bt he didnt tak any advantag f taani & nt misbhaving wid hr.

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

i hat taanis bro(sry) .instred f supporting taani , he s acqusing hr

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

f curse 1st resn s taarey

bt its concept s so natural nt artificial. its a next door stry f our country

also ur writing style s mind blowng di. i cn fl da emotins while readng .

lst f al , its syricly nt a tim pas

i lv da stry 4m my hrt

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

taareys tom & jeery scn

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

taarey hug aftr da grons running

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

rey & aashis intimat scn😡😡 😡

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

grany & taani talk

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

i wnt to c reys trust on taani coz trust s da 1st step in any reltn

Acknowledgement - Questions are inspired from "Prithvi" by kautilya04

Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

Its really very awesome story... Mysterious and thrill as far as I read... And the story also contains emotions which I felt them... And the characters are really very well characterized...

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

My favorite scene is when Rey said "Sorry" and "Thank you" to Taani... That touched my heart... And their friendship scene was awesome...

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

Its Taani cause of her simplicity and helping nature and understanding nature...

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

At first I hated him cause of his behavior for other mainy Taani but now knowing him more that is somehow vanished... And presently I cant really say but chachi and Simmi's behaviour I'm not liking...

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

Because of the concept and ur writing style... U know what u portray every feeling very well and the concept is mind-blowing...

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

I will tell u two scenes... One when after becoming friends Taani and Rey were fighting on movies and all... And second the tea scene... Where Rey was asking Taani to add more sugar and then rejected it... As I said I was firstly shocked then recovering from shock I started laughing...

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

That rainy night scene of which MMS was made...

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

After that MMS fiasco... Its really very depressing because of the state of Taani where her family members were blaming her unneccesarily...

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Taani's helplessness at that time and the time when she came to know why Rey did it all... And Granny and Taani's talk...

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Want to know Rey's past and how Taani will help him to come out of that + romantic scenes... And want to exactly know that what exactly happened with Rinni...


I hope My Answers will be satisfying...

Edited by PRASSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

I love mysterious stories and this is one of the story with full of mystery ... This story is totally different from other stories ... And the characters are described very nicely ... !

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

My favorite scene was the marriage proposal ... Taani's dialogue you can also enjoy Tom and Jerry with me properly was my favorite dialogue ... !

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

My favorite character is Khan chacha because of his kind and helping nature .. ! And Rey and Taani are my all time favorite characters and you know why 😉

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

I hate chachi's character because she is so rude to Taani 😡 ... !

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

I follow this story for the concept and the mystery hidden in the story ... ! And also for TaaRey ... ! 😊

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The most funniest scene was the movie and rapunzal story fight 😆 And also the sugar scene 😆

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The rainy night of which the MMS was made 😳

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The MMS fiasco ... ! And Taani's family blaming her for the MMS ... !

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

The most emotional scene was Taani and Rinni's scene where Taani was telling her that she want to spend her life with Rey ... !

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Want to know Rey's bitter past ... ! And Taarey's bonding grew more ... ! Some romance 😳 and cute nok jhoks 😉 ... !
Love you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

feeling is mixed like rey's shades in character and taanis determination.

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

first meet of daadi and taani.

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

taani, rinni (not sure looking forward in the character)

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

taani is chaaci and so called brother too selfish even her sister

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

concept and taarey

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

taani rey first meet in hotel

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

rey,s planned scene in jungle coming close while saving taani

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

when rey reveals the truth of mms and taani loosing her job as well as taani enters rey's house without any rituals and welcome

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

not any till now for me

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

1.rey opening up his feelings to taani as well as trusting her with his past to taani saying about his pain which he got in life.

2.taani patiently handling the situation bringing out original rey which his hidden some where .

3. taani rinni relation developing.

4. lastly an arrogant rey transfered to a passoinate rey loving and trusting taani a lot.

5, taarey coming closer.


amar expectation ki khob bashi debu??? jaani na


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