VirMan : Sanjog Se Bani Sangini (Part 5 Updated -Pg 29)

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shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing update
Loved it
Continue soon and please do pm me!!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Res

unres

hiii... i am naina...😊 i did read almost heaven in the beginning but then i lost track of it...

but coming to this ff... its just mind blowing...!!!!

its just perfect... u know as ppl say " perfection at its best "... -----> this is what i want to say for this ff... 👏 👏 👏

loved both the parts... woww there were soo fresh n full of virman... 😃

virman getting attracted to each other n all...

i am already loving it especailly the part when they were texting each other...😃

do update soon n if possible pm me...

sending u a buddy request...

all the best for the ff... 👍🏼

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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Cintila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Wow !! You write so beautifully !! This start was wonderful. I'm just confused whether virat still lovs maya or does he love manvi now ? Because he is quite concerned about manvi. You hav writtn it just sooo beautifully. Would love to read further :-)

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: keertu
hey welcome bck after long time for writing...
i am waiting for ALMOST HEAVEN
it has soo much hw virman got married and wat is btw dadaji and virat in ALMOST HEAVEN so update soon
and now coming to this i really loved to rad
virman are gng on date after marriage
i have so many doubts and questions
and the answr will be in ur update so update super fast

Thank you so much Keertu...😊😊😊 I know there is much revelation in Almost Heaven, I hope I can continue it soon. Just need to be in the right frame of mind to write, something that I have been lacking of recent.

Glad you liked this story of mind, was pretty skeptical initially. There is also many stories to unfold and all your doubts will be answered as the story moves along...

Once again for still remembering Almost Heaven till today...It means alot to me

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: roshreb
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Take your time dear...😊

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: LV88
loved ur story.. plz conyinue soon and plz do send PM to me. plzzz...

Thanks for liking the story. Will continue soon and it's my pleasure to know that you want to read the next part, will send you the PM when I update next😊

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pink1
nice start both part was nice
they going there date after marriage
and waiting u r another story should
continue ALMOST HEAVEN

Thanks for the lovely comments, will update Almost Heaven soon... 😊

Really sorry for keeping all of to wait for long but I will try to update soon. Thanks for still remembering my work despite so many months, it means alot to me.

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Huma0301
wow ur a really awesome writer n I jus love the concept of this story - the way the story flows n everything is sooo nice feel sorry for both virat n manvi - really cnt wait to read next partcontinue soon plz 😉

Thank you so much Huma for your compliment. Glad you liked the story and the concept as I was initially a bit skeptical about it.

Hope the upcoming part will also not disappoint you dear😊

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rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ShivRajput
Rev u r back.. yay.. And I read dis ff already on fb.. Just loved it.. And perfect title sanjog se bani Sangini.. How dey gt married for der siblings fallen in love.. hayee.. bt now Manvi want divorce.. waiting for next part.. how Virat handles Manvi 😉

Shiv my dear Shiv... Your one of the reason I actually posted this else it would have the continue rotting somewhere. I hope you will like how the story progress further as well.

Thank you so much for lovely edit which is so apt with the title...😊

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

arrey i forgot to mention that i loved the title... n the moment i read it i was reminded of iqbal's serial " sanjog se bani sangini" that used to come on zee... 😃 😃