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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Liana.Wink

Awesome Update Aroma..I Am Speechless.. All The Moments Between Kriyansh Were Just Beyond Cuteness..I Just Loved That..But I Have One Complaint.. "Why Is Kriya So Immature?" firstly m glad that u loved this work ah why kriya immature there is some reason which i will explain in next update i hope u will understand after my explaination ...😆

I Mean I Know That This Is Your OS..And You Have All The Rights To Portray It You'r Way..But Still..I Mean..I Like Kriya's Character..But I Found Her Way Too Immature..I Want Her To Do Something For Rey..Or Atleast Act A Little Maturely.. see chill u r my reader so u r all point of view ko samza mera kaam hey ... tabhi to pta chaleg na ki main kha kuj gaalt kar rhi hoo so thnaku but i will tell u my point of view in next update😊

Anyways..I Loved The Storyline..Whatever You Write Is Easy To Relate..And Is The Story Of Every Second Girl..One Thing That You'r OS Lacks Of In My Eyes Is Matureness And Pinch Of Reality..
hmm i think maney kahi mistake ki hoo but according to my point of view m showing this but still wait for next part 😊
AnKriya's ..And I Just Loved Kriya's Room..!! i loved that also 😉

Aroma No Hardships Yaar! I Just Said What I Felt..I Hope You Will Read This 😛 And Give A Thought To It.. sure m giving ...main poori try kroogi apna best deney ki and thank u


Sheetal.

Ps-If Anyone Remember Me..I Am arsha_sheetal The Writer Of "We Are One-Kriyansh FF" And I Abruptly Left IF Due To Some Personal Reasons..But I Am Back.. 😊 Hope You Remember Me! I Was You'r Reader.. Chal Dekh Kitna Bada Comment Kara Meine..Thanks Bol! Hehehe (Kidding)




yes i remember sheetal
but its long ago
but wel come back to IF
glad u r back
thank u for this review
hugs
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_devil_himu

Awesome update


Loved it

Rey so nice..

Kriya so cute

Hope they confess soon

Thanks for the pm

Sorry for being late.




ahh my baby wel come back
don't b sorry jaana
aww so cute thak u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvkriyansh-anu

Mein Bohot late hogayi... Sorry di... 😔
its okay bacha

Now coming back to the update...
okay
Hmm... Where should I start?... jha sey tum chaho
I loved all of it... aww thank u
Really...
Aww Rey is such a cutie... ahah cutie pie he is i know
Breakfast banaya bhi aur khilaya bhi... Wah kya baat hai...☺️ nice na tu blushh kyu kar rhi hey 😆

Oh lol his state seeing Kriya in a towel and hehe the water droplets loved that bit a lot...
And Kriya is so cute... kuj yada he
How she got the ice pack out... Aww

And admission ke baad shopping...
Hehe Rey to kooli hi bangaya... 😆 he pyaar mey kya kya karna parta hey u know na
That was wo bloody sweet of him... When he said wear whatever you want to Kriya... This was awesome...

So understanding update was outstanding... thank u bacha

Loved the dress you chose... It's beautiful... 🤗 nice thi na 😉

And all of it was beautifully written... 👏 so cute

Must say... This Rey is like the perfect husband... So dreaming yaar... mein to dream karne gayi... no comment meri already bohat leg pyll ho chuki hey

Sorry late commenting... My Internet played up... Sorry... 😔 its okay

Love you... 🤗love u to

😊


~Anu~



love u to bacha
so cute
Aroma/-🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arushiii

read ol d parts 2day..

loved 2 d core..

thanx 4 d pm..

update nxt part soon,,

waiting...

luv ya..,.



thank u dear
m glade that u love this
aroma/-😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chappy 4

Its almost two week and Kriya is completely comfortable with Rey . Rey pampering her a lot . Basically he is treating as his baby . Kriya and Rey become really very close . As someone said friendship is first step of love . So now they crossed first step . Rey teaches her how to cook which she gladly learned . Their bond with each other become really very strong .

It's Kriya's first day in university . She is really very nervous . Because of her nervousness she is chanting something to herself . Where Rey , poor soul from last 30 min waiting when Kriya is gonna stop . But there is not a single hope . Because Kriya is in her hyper mode . Next min Rey hugged her from behind . Kriya rest her head on his chest and become silent . Rey rests her chin on her shoulder . His hot breath is tickling on her neck . Kriya felt butterflies in her stomach . Kriya hold Rey's hand which resting on her waist .
"Shhh , it's normal . Don't be nervous ." Rey whispered in her ear .
"Hmm" she only replied this . She just love this feeling . They way he hugged her , he hold her , kissed her forehead . she loves this feeling . she thought is this love . Is she finally falling for him . Rey kissed her on forehead lovingly . "Shall we?" Rey showed her his hand . Rey dropped Kriya in front of University gate . "Kriya main tumhe college ke baad pick kar loonga" Kriya ran toward him and gave him tight bone crushing hug . "No main ghar khud jaugi , ap apna office ka kaam kro" Rey agreed with her "Remember one thing i love you . " Kriya nodded and smiled "Listen" rey turned as Kriya called him "I think i am falling for you Mr Reyaansh Singhania." Rey crossed his arms across his chest "I am waiting for you , love" she wink at him and walked in university .
Ray shook his head and gave last look toward university .

During lecture Kriya found a couple sitting next to her . Both of them holding hand and having masti and fun . When that boy kisses her girlfriend on her forehead . Kriya remembered how Rey everyday wake her up kissing her on forehead . Kriya blushed on this . "Kya hua mujhe yaad kar rahi ho ?' Rey hold her hand . Kriya looked at Rey with open mouth . "I know i am looking really very handsome . But don't stare at me like this . you know i am all yours ." Kriya hide herself in his arms ."Tum blush karte huye bahut cute lagti ho , love" Kriya looked at Rey and smacked him . Rey moved closer and same with Kriya . Kriya closed her eyes . They are about to kiss when bell rang . Kriya open her eyes and found herself sitting alone . She hit her head . "Main pagal ho rhi ho rey k liye ."

Kriya is walking in college campus when she found Rey standing in corridor . Kriya hurriedly run toward him . But he is not there . Kriya become sad . Its tenth time when she imagined Rey around her . Kriya finally entered in canteen .
She placed her order . As her order arrived . she looked at cup of coffee . "Rey you making me crazy. apkey barey mey scohey bina main kuj nahi kar sakti ."

*Facepalm* "Why are you so sweet ?" Kriya found fortune cookie in her plate . Kriya opened the note . "Finally you are in love ." Kriya opened her mouth O "How he know?" Kriya bite her nail . *sigh* Kriya slipped that note in her bag . While walking Kriya bumped into a girl . "I am sorry" Kriya handed her books . One book caught her attention "Love , My love " Kriya blinked twice .
Kriya shook her head and walked toward her class . When she is passing through music room . She heard a sound .
(Same song jo update jo maney lgaya hey ...😉 i know foreign college hey but INdian har jgha hotey hey rey 😆 i know filmy ho gya 😉 main hoo he filmi 😳)

Same time her cell rang . "I love you ." . It's message from Rey . Kriya finally smiled . "yes i am in love . I love him . " Kriya start jumping . she hugged a girl "I love him' That girl hugged her . Everyone clapped for her . "Yes i love Rey , My Rey.'

Kriya she just walking here and there in whole house "Kya karu kya karu kya karu " . "Khana" she run toward into kitchen . Other hand Rey , He is missing her baby . "I am missing her badly . Usey pamper kiya bina mera din nahi nikalta ." Rey finished his work . On the way to home he buy chocltes Kriya's fav . Rey entered in house . Rey heard few noises from kitchen . "Kriya" he ran toward kitchen . The scene in front of him made him laugh . "What are you doing baba.' Kriya made baby face . "I thought , apkey liya khana bnau' Kriya completely covered her face with flour . Rey with the help of cloth wiped her face . Rey hugged her "Shh stop crying . You know i hate when you cry." In between her hiccups "Mujhe kuch bhi nahi aata' Rey placed a kiss on her cheek "Okay main help karta hoo khana app he bnana okay' Kriya gave him confuse look . Rey turned her around . Held her both hand in his hands lovingly . He rest his chin on her shoudler . As soon his hot breath touched her nape . Kriya closed her eyes . Rey smiled "Focus baba"
Kriya hit him with her elbow. "Auchh . Sorry baba ." . Both of them enjoyed a lot . Rey teach her how to made food . But during this Kriya basically staring at Rey . Few time Rey caught her staring at him . "Why are you staring at me baba ." Kriya hugged him "Bus asey he" Rey also hugged her . He pinned her hair behind ear " I think you are in love " Kriya looked t Rey from head to toe . "Asey kyu dekh rhi hoo'
Kriya placed a kiss on his cheek "I think you are right.' and she run toward her room . Rey he was stunned "Really , love ' He shouted from living area . "Lagta to hey" Kriya replied from her bedroom .
Rey pinched himself "uff its not dream . Meri shy baby bold ho gayi" re also walked toward his room for freshen up .

When Rey entered in living area . He found dinner already served . As rey sat to eat . Kriya held his hand . "Main khilau ." She is really looking cute . Rey nodded . Kriya she become really very happy . for the first time Rey noticed that Kriya behaving mature . After dinner "Rey coffee . ' Rey pulled her "Please at last coffee to bnaney do" Rey pouted "Okay" Kriya agreed .
Rey entered in Kriyas room with coffee mugs . Rey handed her coffee mug . "Kriya "
Kriya looked toward Rey"So you are in love . To tumne abhi tak usey btaya nahi that you love him ." Kriya simply said no . "Why ?" Kriya sat in between Rey's leg . She hold her both hand "Because i am planning something special for special person ." Rey hold her tight "Apney is dost ko to bta do." Kriya twisted his nose "Nahi bta sakti , Kyu ki tum merey hubby ko bta dogey na chahtey huye b ." Rey rolled his eyes "Oh to ye baat hey .'

Next day when Rey Wake up . He found everything ready . His clothes placed on sofa . his office bag , hanky everything . after shower Rey entered in living room . See breakfast is also ready . "good morning Rey 'Kriya speak from kitchen . "breakfast is ready . bus coffee nahi kyu ki app bohat achi bnatey ho." Rey gave her good morning kiss on her forehead "Main abhi bnata ho . But Kriya tum acha nahi kar rhi ." Kriya sadly lookd at REy "Asey mat dekho mujey tumhey morning main uthana acha lagta hey . Tumharey liye khana bnana acha lagta hey . Or main thing mujey meri wo immature Kriya achi lagti hey , after all maney us sey pyaar kiya hey ' "But main apkey liye kuj karna chahti thi' Rey held her from waist "sirf ek ajj k liye jo karna hey kro , perkal sey j sab main he krooga ." Kriya agreed . Becasue Rey knows that Kriya planning some thing special for him . He knows she gonna confess her feelings for him . From inside he is really very excited . After all Finally she loves him .

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Kriya ki planning
Rey shocked
kya kiya kriya ney esa


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okay guys here is fourt chappy

but personally
m not happy with this part
it turns out totally crape

i know this time every one gonna b disappoint
m really sorry for that
still waiting for ur feedback
luv u all
aroma/-

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Edited by -ARMA_RUBHARU- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1. Liana.Wink (Sheetal) your question why Kriya is so immature ?
First welcome back to IF 🤗
My ans : See sheetal basically everyone is not mature in this age . See i am also 19 and i am not mature . My mom always shouted at me for this . okay leave this .
Kriya is not immature basically this is her excitement which looks like immature behaviour . See according to me when a person become excited and happy then that person behaves like a kid . Kriya is a girl who always feared from her mom . But Rey is one who fulfilling her dreams , wishes . So this is all excitement and emotions . Still their is a kid in Kriya's heart .
I hope you satisfied with my answer . This is my point of view 😛.

2. Why Kriya is not doing anything for Rey ?🤔
My ans :
Guys it's only third day . Rey is pampering her because he already knows his feeling for Kriya . But Kriya still discovering those feelings . In future track i will show you . Kriya gonna do so many things . So please have patience . I will not gonna disappoint you all .
Please don't kill me .

3. Only 2 part left . But after this part only one part left .
Thank you all . I am amazed that you all loved this story
thank u🤗
luv u all ❤️
Aroma/-
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Edited by -ARMA_RUBHARU- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update tom. . .
Realy sweet. . .
So finaly kriya ko realise ho gaya ki she have fallen 4 rey,and nw wants to make rey feel speical. .wow. . . .
M so loving it. . . . .
Yaha rey tadapking and is excitd to see kriya kya kerna chahti hai . . .
Wo.w. . .
Nxt part jaldi update kario. . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Tum ne pukaara. .
Hum chale aye. .



jerry a gyi 😆 or mera Babu b a gya arey wahh i thought ajj shanti hey 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -ARMA_RUBHARU-



<div align="center">jerry a gyi 😆 or mera Babu b a gya arey wahh i thought ajj shanti hey 🤣
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hehehe. . .aise thoughts mat laya ker.:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari


hehehe. . .aise thoughts mat laya ker.:-D



mujey koi tension nahi kyu ki tu ajj akeli hey akeli kya kar legi jerry 🤣

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