#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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Elle.Frost

@Elle.Frost

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Awwee why did you left It there
please update soon 😆

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

u portrayed khushi's inner feelings very well dear and really ASR has come to get her back to RM?

poor khushi but just cant hate ASR at any cost hahahha, (very loyal and diehard phangal of ASR)

amazing update dear and thanks for the pm and thank god finally u updated hehehhe. take care dear

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Emotional Update.

Poor Kushi😭

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mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Very nice and emotional update from Khushi's point. Loved it. Hope Arnav does not say some thing stupid to break her heart again.

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naajuka

@naajuka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

thanks a lot. its is too sweet like jalebi

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

updatse afetr ages!!!

anyways it is worth vait...

lovely1..

vaiting for next

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

nooo! you CANNOT end it like that!! arnav's here! why has he come after upsetting khushi so much and making her go through all this? his sorry doesnt make a difference, atleast not to me if i had been in khushi's place!😳
pls update soon!! 😊

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

well written. your words makes the readers feel the pain of Khushi.. awesome. Waiting for the next chapter where arnav and khushi come face to face.

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sumond

@sumond

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Hey lovely update, you know what I did not miss you being late for this update because I was reading your other work, the one where Arnav is Khushi's boss and I was having a laughter riot all by myself. You sure do have many funny bones in your body my dear, thanks for your hilarious writing, you sure do keep my spirits up. Thanks for the pm