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Posted: 11 years ago
please update naa... it has been a long timeee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He frowned as some noises disturbed him and squeezing his eyes tight and twitching his nose he wrapped his leg around her pretty form but wait?? Where are her legs?? Where is She??

He is searching her still eyes closed and hands finding her on the bed when a noise disturbed him again and that followed with a groan. He frowned in his sleep, that voice shouldn't be coming from far away back of him. Opening his eyes with difficulty he turned and sat on the bed and looked at the horrible state of their room. Half of her dresses are on floor.

"Kriya kya kar rahi ho?? "he asked in his highly sleepy tone trying to get up stretching his body. But she looked at him once , pouted sadly and continued her search.

" Oh meri pyaari si sati savitri bataogi bhi?? " he yawned once and asked her.

"Sati Savitri?? " she asked quite confused.

"Haan! Mujhe bhole nath bolti ho na " he chuckled but she rolled her eyes and next a orange dupatta came and hit right on his face as he walked towards her.

"arey subah subah pati pe atyachar?? Dupatta se maarti ho? Zulmi aurat!! " he continued her drama when she groaned glaring at him and sat on the now empty shelf in the cupboard looking sad. Sighing he walked towards her and standing before her he wrapped his arms around her waist and kissing on her nose tip he asked.

"Meri Kriya itni udaas kyun hai? Wo bhi subah 5 baje ko?? " he nudged her by his forehead to look up at him and she finally looked up at him.

"Mere paas rehearsals keliye kuch dhang ka dress nahi hai , jo do teen mere paas the wo mai ghar pe chod aayi. Ab salwar suit ya shorts mei rehearsals thodi kar sakti hun "

" Aahhh!!! Itni si baat?? Check my cup-board. Go !! " he moved back and signalled her to go. "Kyun??"

"Arey check na ! " he pressed her cheeks and bought her down on her feet.

"Wo tumhare liye " confused she grabbed those shopping bags and walked to the bed to see what they are. Opening them she is surprised to know that he had brought four pairs of dresses for her already. Grinning wide she turned to him,

"aap kab laye the?? Maine haan toh kal raat ko hi kiya na?? " she frowned.

"par mujhe apni wife pe bohut trust hai , wo mereliye zaroor haa karegi !! Isiliye I made all the preparations before hand. " he gave a cheesy grin.

" Aap bohut bure ho !! sab aapki plan haina ?? aur aapne mujhe fasadiya. Blackmail karke. "

" Nah!! Mai toh sirf apni life partner ko dance partner bana raha hun!! I don't find anything wrong in it !! " he grabbed her waist pulling her towards him and gave a quick peck on her lips startling her.

" Ab jaldi tayyar hojao!! I may be a sweet husband but I am a bad instructor. " Kissing her forehead he walked back with a naughty grin and grabbed his towel to get ready by the time she gets ready .

***

He stood in front of the mirror dressed ...well..ummm. K He looked at himself and made a face. Stylish shoes, a plain sleeve less t-shirt and a jacket on it, and low waist jeans , but

" God!! I look horrible. " this is the time he cursed his brother having that perfect die-for muscular body which makes anything and everything good. And being the thin , tall , person not everything suited him and more over he is highly uncomfortable in them. How is he gonna impress her today?? He removed his jacket and threw it away somewhere when he heard someone bark at him.

" Chote!! Ye bhabhi aur devar ne kya laga rakha hai , subah se mere muh pe hi kapde phek rahe ho !! " Rey barked irritated.

"bhai aap itne subah mere room mei?? " asked a surprised swayam.

" Haan!! Aaj se donon workout karenge so Kriya waha freshup ho rahi , meri time waste ho rahi hai so mai yaha aagaya par tu itni subah kaha tayyar ho raha hai ?? "

"shoot keliye " swayam sat on the bed sad.

" Arey yaar aise sad sad chehre mat banao subah subah, kya problem hai aur teri shoot toh 10 baje ko haina chote?? Abhi se kyun tayyar ho raha hai ?? "

"Bhai!! Mujhe tension ho rahi hai I don't know why aaj mai Sharon ko impress karna chahta hun , and I don't want to leave a single stone unturned. Aur dekho na , ek dhang ka outfit nahi select kar pa raha hun . "

" Bas itni si baat?? Mere bhai , Sharon ko tumhari simple avatar sabse jyaada pasand hai , she even said me. Trust me on that. So jaa ek white shirt nikal aur pehanke jaa. Impress hojayegi!! "

" sach mei bhai?? "

" You trust me right?? "

" so much. " " toh be simple, aur ab mujhe jaane de , mai late nahi hona chahta.

***

It was hard. f**k , hard is not even a perfect word. It was hell. She sat on the floor defeated seeing him workout , with the same energy as he started with even after 30 minutes. Here she is hell exhausted. She is not able to balance on single foot. She dances good but she is not that flexible and she knew he is determined to make her one. Rey stopped seeing her sit through the mirror. He walked to her and raised his eyebrows asking her.

" Rey mai thak gayi " she made the cutest face but even that failed. He nodded his head and lifted up on her feet and asked her to bend forward balancing herself on one foot and stretching the other leg back. She tried but failed. When she is about to give up she felt two palms hold her waist firmly, yet softly. She looked back at him when he smiled at her. He stood on her right side , her right foot balancing her on the ground , and his right arm slid down her waist supporting her to be erect and his left slowly passed through the length of her waist on her left side towards her thigh and he gripped her thigh and lifted her leg up making her bend front . She was shivering and blank on what he is doing. But her mouth fell open when she saw him through the mirror with a flushed face and he winked . That's when she realized, he is enjoying her reactions yet he made her position perfect. She is being the fool thinking he is going to do something to her, but all he did is the practise. Pouting she tried to get up irritated but he held her in position and nodded his head in negation. She had to do this and she finally stretched her hands front and closed her eyes finally trying to practise with whole heart without any other thoughts.

"Breathe in !! " She followed him. "Close your eyes " came his command and she like hypnotised followed him.

" Listen to me careful Kriya, stage pe tumhare saamne bohut saare log honge but you have to dance like no one is watching you , just like you are alone with your dance partner, i.e., me in that big place. No one else , just you and me. We have to just dance for each other. So make sure iss chote hall mei yaw aha uss big stage pe , har jagah tumhe sirf mai dikhunga , aas paas kuch bhi nahi. Koi tension nahi , ki dance kaise hoga ya tum steps bhool jaogi ya nahi, just trust in me. Just let yourself flow with the flow. Let music sink in your cells and let the passion wrap itself around you , feel the energy, feel the power it gives you , NOW!! Step forward. " He moved a step back and she stepped forward still concentrating totally on his words. " Two steps more " he moved back as she moved two steps front. "Turn back " she did. "Open your arms. " and she opened her arms in trance.

" Fall back, let yourself free. Trust in ME. " he whispered slowly two steps back of her. She followed him , he stood seeing her fall , he waited, not one of her muscle moved, her hands stretched the same making no effort to save herself from hitting the hard floor, her knees still straight. When she is finally about to hit the wooden floor he wrapped his arms and secured her and lifted her up.

"Open you eyes " and she opened just to see his smile. But that small smile in a sense made everything around her clear and bright.

" I need this trust Kriya. Bas mujhpe trust karti jao , I promise to never let you fall and get hurt. "

"I trust you Rey. Right from the day you first touched me . " he looked deep into her eyes and kissed her forehead .

  1. Trust . - Check.
  2. Chemistry.

He winked at her making her blush for a second.

"Toh tell me are you comfortable with me being this close to you ?? " he walked to her , so close that his lips almost touched hers.

" Isse jyaada bhi paas honge toh I am comfortable. "with that she captured his lips taking him by surprise . They pulled back after the quick kiss. "And if I hold you like this?? " he wrapped his arm around her waist and the other tugged her left thigh and lifted her against him her right leg stretched and as she held his shoulder for support.

"More than you imagine " she whispered in his ear . He was quite surprised with this sudden bold turn out in her. But he loved it . The dance he planned for them, needed this. This comfort level, the trust and focus. He smiled a victorious smile seeing her looking right at him even after he put her down on her feet and pushed her back holding her palms and pulled her back into his torso. With a wet kiss on her cheek he walked back and the loss of contact kind of bought her out of her trance. She felt heaven looking into his eyes , she barely knew what he did with her once he dropped her down. But the look on his face made it clear that he is satisfied with today's workout.

"Chale?? Academy keliye nikalna hai " he stretched his hand for her and she placed her's in his and he led her into the house.

" Mai bhi?? " she asked as they climbed stairs.

"Ofcourse !! There is a lot of work I should do upon you Kriya ! I should sharpen your lines. Aur bhi bohut kuch " he opened the door of their room and handed her the towel and grabbed one for him. "Here have some water "

" Par ghar pe mom ki help ... " she was cut .

" Kaam keliye servants hai Kriya and maine mom se baat karliya , ab jab tak humara performance nahi hoga you are not doing work. Tum mere saath academy chalogi. Now get ready fast , we just have an hour. " caressing her cheek for once , he left to take bath giving her a flying kiss. She smiled and sighed. Everything changes from today.


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Hey people !! Short one? Yes!! I wanted to give big one but I can only do this much in the time I got. Sorry for that. This update is sort of a filler one. Nothing that good I think. So rest is left upon you people.


Do review! I would love to know your views and you can tell me if I should improve anywhere. :)


Love,

Deetha.😊


Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
Sanchita_14 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
Unresss Yipeee
me first me first yeaaahh 😆

Coming to the update
Deeth its Amezing
kriyansh morng convo was to cute
😳
Nd the kisses in its awww

I really like ReyAm convo its really
Sweet nd Needed one

The Kriyansh work out section
was blissfulll 😳
Trust was chemistry hahaha
Love it
Kria kissed him just to surprize him
Great yr seriously its not so big
or not so short update Deeth its
perfect 👏
All in all this was awww update yr

p.S - really sorry for late comenting
p.p.s - _/\_ pls update ur other works Sply Baatcutter i m dieing to read that yr plsss 😕
Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this update was beautiful diii loved itt
Kr part was wow hayeee
swayam part was nice
update soon
sry fr short cmnt Diii fever
next time will give lamba one
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally you updated this one...

Awesome update..

loved it..

loved kr moments
their kiss..
chemistry..
lovely..

Amazing..

update next part soon..
meghzzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was super awesum ... Continue soon n is bar jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it..
Loved kriya's surprising act..😆
Their comfort level is amazine..
nice update..
thanks for PM.
Continue it soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all..

a big wala thsnks for updaing..
ya it is short bt sweet one..

poor rey, dever bhabhi dono kpde fenk rhe h bechare p..

swayam is trying hard to impress sharon..

hope wo aisa kr paye..

kriyansh warm up part is well written dear..

overall awesome update..

thanks 4 d pm dear..

n ds time plz update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
love both of their chemistry
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
You updated nt !
Omg !
Dream come true moment !
Update was sooo nice Di !
I loved it !
Specially workout part !
(Dancer you see)
Season ka proposal coming up !
Hmmm !
Can't wait for further updates !
Please jaldi kardo Di !

P. S. I no I promised a big comment but my hand is hurt ! Isiliye chota de rahi hoon ! Sorry !

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