SS- Waiting for You ❤️-Chapter-10 Pg26 - Page 13

Originally posted by: A_Soul

One, Can't accept the fact... One, Can't let go the fact..

I love the beginning.. The 1st para is so so so REAL.. we all have Meera in us somewhere. Just don't want to accept the fact and live in our dreams & desires...!

What a Beautiful color of Friendship, the actual one which gives meaning, a definition to the word 'Friend'...
Friendship always comes first then any thing else... Shekhar is so like me..!!

About writing, I can see you are improving.. Thumbs up baby!!

P.S The chapter is giving me reality check dear.. hmmm I have to accept, think, re-think on many matters...!! THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: amritaa10

Short but nice update riti.😊

I loved the opening lines...!!⭐️

The emotions and trauma that both Meera and Shekar were going thru was so touching.

Looking frwd for next update.

Originally posted by: adithyan

we readers r feeling their pain riti...u r too good... 👏

shekhar, keep urself strong for her...

Originally posted by: blueballoon

beautiful Rits...

"vulnerable...and delicate..." You brought out these feelings well in Shekhar and now we get to know why he will take some steps ahead, though he himself never wanted her to know his pain or feelings...

unrequited love always leaves two options... either to keep batting on as the "hurt" batsman or to be out "declared "retired hurt"... either way it looks to others like batting for the lost cause😳 lo... my vishesh tippani.


between loved the opening lines...

"Laakh duniya kahe...tum nahin ho...

tum yahin ho...tum yahin ho..."👏👏

Originally posted by: mishaj

"the pain of not getting love back from the one you love..."

so this z the gist of this update n the recurring emotion throughout the entire story...denial,pain,vulnerability,trauma...each n every character z going through it...

why all the characters r vulnerable ritiji?

you have a penchant for portraying the frozen emotions n making it palpable for the reader...

looking forward to the next update😊

Riti ji,

Me here.

Love, Loss and Realization, beautiful picturisation of all three. Shekhar let Meera relive her pain so as to free her from that pain. Meera cried out the tears which Shekhar could not shed.
The pain of loss has been portrayed very beautifully. Hope, Shekhar would be able to fill the void of both lives with his decision.

Waiting for more!

Originally posted by: mpk2011

Riti ji,

Me here.

Love, Loss and Realization, beautiful picturisation of all three. Shekhar let Meera relive her pain so as to free her from that pain. Meera cried out the tears which Shekhar could not shed.
The pain of loss has been portrayed very beautifully. Hope, Shekhar would be able to fill the void of both lives with his decision.

Waiting for more!

"dil-e-barbaad se nikla nahin ab tak koi
ik loote ghar pe diya karta hai dastak koi
aas jo toot gayee phir se bandhaata kyun hai"