Arshi: Burdened (Thread 1)

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Sim96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Seems nice. Do continue. :D

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aaru.aradhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

interesting...

thanks 4 d pm

continue soon

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Barkah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Wow... Awesome start
Please update soon

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bunnylovessunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

hey! This sounds extremely interesting!! :D

You MUST continue! :)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome beginning, its sound intriguing and like this story is going to be great. Seriously, build up on this idea and continue soon.Would love to see how it turns out:)

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Jessie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Continue... woh bhi jaldi!!! :)

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singhni_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: norisha
update soon

thanks for reading, and will try to update in a day or two

Originally posted by: saarah96
ooh why does khushi think shes a burden?
cant wait to find out
like the prologue=]
will buddy you,,please accept so i can get pms=]

the part about the burden will be out in a few updates, not really sure which one exactly yet. glad you liked it, and please PM me your email address so I can give you future notifications because I will no longer be sending PMs anymore

Originally posted by: nataliya
👏cont..

Originally posted by: *Sanz*
Yes YESS, Continue Please 😳

Originally posted by: shreyasonia
Intriguing prologue!!!!

And. Yes yes and a big YES!!!!! Continue

Originally posted by: choochootrain
A Big Yes...would like to read more...hope u cont...

so many "yes's" 😆 will definitely continue

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Very very investing.

Originally posted by: zar-bara
interesting
do continue...

Originally posted by: tushi0310
sounds interesting

Originally posted by: dva2vra
continue plz

thanks you for all the feedback 😆

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singhni_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Natasha08

very interesting

what happened in her past??

sounds like arnav knows about it

continue soon

arnav knows about a few things from her past (from where the prologue is) others he will come to know later

Originally posted by: ankii543
This is new...
We get to see khushis past instead of arnavs...
Intresting...
Do continue...^_^

yup, it is a new concept, thus the reason I decided to write it 😆

Originally posted by: headtotoe
Hey,

This gives a image of a very persistent and passionate Arnav and a very drawn back Khushi with a dark past...

Please do continue...I would love to read it further...

yeah, arnav will be persistent and passionate, but there will still be that "ASR" side of him that will appear at times. Does Khushi have a dark past...? Not really sure myself either. I wouldn't really classify it as dark, more like painful and hurt.

Originally posted by: nnsunn
Interesting prologue. Hope she s talking to arnav. Wonder wat happent in her past. Thanks 4 pm

yes, she is talking to Arnav, it says in the dialogues

Originally posted by: lavanyaraj
nice.. pls continue...

will continue...

Originally posted by: babydevil
hey Bubblegum ! :D

Howz u ??

after long isn't it ! well shifted to a Hostel that's why :P

okay Now coming to the SS :

It's interesting ! making me curious to know what is the past and how Arnav started to Love ..
and is it post marriage story ???

I'm loving it ! update it soon :)

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Diva
{ Chottu sa badmash }

hey! haven't talked to you in awhile.

is it a post marriage story? not going to reveal that yet 😆

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singhni_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
awesome updt

Originally posted by: LondonChick
This is amazing please please update it soon

Originally posted by: punnaanchal
Nice prologue

Originally posted by: AneesahJabeen
Sounds interesting!

Originally posted by: vyasakshita
Continue soon

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan
Hey!

Thankyou for the PM.

Hope you are doing well ...

Well-written.

I'm very interested to read more of this soon. Please do continue with it 😊